Channeler 9th level intermediary boon Fortitude and Will saves : solved ;)

[breithauptclan]

So it seems that the boost to both Fortitude saves and Will saves is accurate.

But that isn't very clear because the wording of that ability parallels the wording of other class features like Barbarian Juggernaut.

Barbarian Juggernaut wrote:

Your body is accustomed to physical hardship and resistant to ailments. Your proficiency rank for Fortitude saves increases to master. When you roll a success on a Fortitude save, you get a critical success instead.

Channeler Intermediary Boon wrote:

At 9th level, your proficiency rank for Fortitude saves increases to master. When you roll a success on a Will save, you get a critical success instead.

I think this should be worded differently to make it clearer that it is two unrelated boosts to each of those two saves. I would go so far as to reverse the ordering.

Proposed Wording: "At 9th level, your mental and physical defenses increase. When you roll a success on a Will save, you get a critical success instead. Also, your proficiency rank for Fortitude saves increases to master."

Edit: It looks like a wording change like this is already on the plan. But for those who don't read every post and are looking for if this is a typo or not, hopefully this thread comes up on the search.