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Salutations Ladies and Gentlemans..
I have the honor to be named Mance Dickinson, The Storyteller of Nordale, the Tear of the Dragon, the Yurling Family Savior, 10th beloved son of Le Dickinson family. My presence here is justify for, as well for entertain your souls, bring to you an wondrous item, that heappen to be a rod, imaginated by this humble serve of yours.
Bards and Perfomancers, delight it...
Mance's Scepter of Royality
Aura: feint Divination CL: 1st
Slot: none Price: 12.000 gp Wieght: 5 lbs.DESCRIPTION
This is a 2-feet longed, well crafted golden rod, higly detailed with musical instrument and chords in black and a oval mirror on his edge.
While a creature hold the Scepter, she tap into the natural beauty of your soul and let it shine from your eyes and your speech. While the spell is active, you gain a +2 insight bonus on all Charisma ability checks and Charisma-based skill checks.
Additionally, as a Free Action, the wielder could transform the Scepter of Royality in a beautiful and ethereal musical instrument or another etheral object to help the wielder in a Perform check, with no other benefit besides that (a tap dance shoe would not protect your feet, per example). This instrument only works for the wielder ans last until wielder interrupt the ilusion.
CONSTRUCTION REQUIREMENTS
Craft Rod, Summon Instrument, Tap Inner Beauty. Cost: 6.000gp
So, what do you think about it? Would work this way, or it need better adjustments?
Dot for later - apologies, but I'm a bit busy at present...
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I am going to assume you mean to say "Royality" instead of Royalty (as it is correctly spelled) because "Royality" sounds pretentious and purposefully (almost egotistically) misspelled.
Mechanically, the price should be 7,000 gp (4,000 gp for the tap inner beauty spell effect and 3,000 gp for the additional summon instrument spell effect). The second effect has a base price of 2,000 gp but that cost is multiplied by 1.5 for an actual cost of 3,000 gp. This means your Price is 7,000 gp while your cost to create is 3,500 gp.
Otherwise, my only comment would be to rephrase the Description text as outlined below. There were a few grammatical issues I tried to address (as an English tutor, it is hard for me to ignore these things).
This is a 2-foot long, well crafted golden rod, highly detailed with musical instruments and chords in black with an oval mirror on its edge.
While a creature holds Mance's Scepter of Royality, the rod taps into the natural beauty of the wielder's soul and lets it shine from their eyes and in their speech. This grants the wielder a +2 insight bonus on all Charisma ability checks and Charisma-based skill checks.
Additionally, as a free action, the wielder can transform Mance's Scepter of Royality into a beautiful and ethereal musical instrument or another ethereal object to help the wielder in a Perform check. Such an object provides no other benefit besides allowing for the skill check to be made without the normal penalty for using improvised implements. For example, ethereal tap dance shoes would not protect the rod wielder's feet from caltrops. This instrument or object only functions for the rod's wielder and last until the wielder dismisses the effect or it leaves their possession, at which time the instrument or object reverts back to rod form.
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Pheoran, as you noted English is not my first language and your corrections are more than welcomed.
I guess yours suggestions make senses and I will edited according them.
Mance's Scepter of Royalty
Aura: feint Divination CL: 1st
Slot: none Price: 7,000 gp Wieght: 5 lbs.
DESCRIPTION
This is a 2-foot long, well crafted golden rod, highly detailed with musical instruments and chords in black with an oval mirror on its edge.While a creature holds Mance's Scepter of Royalty, the rod taps into the natural beauty of the wielder's soul and lets it shine from their eyes and in their speech. This grants the wielder a +2 insight bonus on all Charisma ability checks and Charisma-based skill checks.
Additionally, as a free action, the wielder can transform Mance's Scepter of Royalty into a beautiful and ethereal musical instrument or another ethereal object to help the wielder in a Perform check. Such an object provides no other benefit besides allowing for the skill check to be made without the normal penalty for using improvised implements. For example, ethereal tap dance shoes would not protect the rod wielder's feet from caltrops. This instrument or object only functions for the rod's wielder and last until the wielder dismisses the effect or it leaves their possession, at which time the instrument or object reverts back to rod form.
CONSTRUCTION REQUIREMENTS
Craft Rod, Summon Instrument, Tap Inner Beauty. Cost: 3,500gp
I´m liking it. :)