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Good evening all;
I am looking for feedback on this build. I based it on "The Complete Professor Q Wizard Guide.
Jamben Darkeye is a Wizard who used to be a Fighter. He was injured in battle during a Pathfinder mission which prevents him from using martial weapons. Because of his keen intellect and studious manner, he learned to be a wizard through schooling at the Arcanamirium in Absolom. He retains an offensive mindset from his years as a fighter and favors gaining the initiative on the enemy and finishing him quickly. He has an amazing memory which he developed as a fighter through studying enemy tactics, writing battle plans, and practicing combat maneuvers.
Jamben Darkeye
Male Human (Taldan) Wizard 1
NG Medium humanoid (human)
Init +8; Senses Perception +1
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Defense
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AC 11, touch 11, flat-footed 10 (+1 Dex)
hp 9 (1d6+3)
Fort +2, Ref +2, Will +2
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Offense
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Speed 20 ft.
Melee dagger -2 (1d4-2/19-20/×2) and
quarterstaff -2 (1d6-2/×2)
Ranged light crossbow +2 (1d8/19-20/×2)
Wizard Spells Prepared (CL 1st; concentration +6):
1st (3/day)—color spray (DC 16), enlarge person (DC 16), summon monster i
0 (at will)—resistance, daze (DC 15), flare (DC 15)
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Statistics
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Str 7, Dex 14, Con 14, Int 20, Wis 11, Cha 7
Base Atk +0; CMB -2; CMD 9
Feats Improved Initiative, Quicken Spell, Spell Focus (conjuration)
Traits magical talent, reactionary
Skills Fly +0, Knowledge (arcana) +9, Knowledge (geography) +9, Knowledge (nature) +9, Knowledge (planes) +9, Knowledge (religion) +9, Perception +1, Spellcraft +9
Languages Common, Daemonic, Draconic, Dwarven, Elven, Kelish
SQ acid dart, opposition schools (necromancy, transmutation), specialized schools (conjuration), summoner's charm
Combat Gear Acid, Alchemist's fire; Other Gear Crossbow bolts (10), Dagger, Light crossbow, Quarterstaff, Backpack (empty), Bedroll, Belt pouch (empty), Candle (10), Chalk (5), Fishhook, Flint and steel, Ink, black, Inkpen, Mirror, Paper (5), Parchment (3), Sack (empty), Scroll case (empty), Sealing wax, Sewing needle, Signal whistle, Signet ring, Soap, Spell component pouch, Spellbook, Torch (10), Trail rations (5), Waterskin, 28 GP, 11 SP, 6 CP
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Special Abilities
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Acid Dart (8/day) (Sp) 30' Ranged touch attack deals 1d6+0 Acid damage.
Conjuration The conjurer focuses on the study of summoning monsters and magic alike to bend to his will.
Magical Talent (Daze) (1/day) (Sp) Choose one 0-level spell - it becomes a 1/day spell-like ability for you.
Necromancy You must spend 2 slots to cast spells from the Necromancy school.
Quicken Spell Cast a spell as a swift action. +4 Levels.
Spell Focus (Conjuration) Spells from one school of magic have +1 to their save DC.
Summoner's Charm (+1 rds) (Su) Increase duration of summoning spells by 1/2 level (permanent at 20).
Transmutation You must spend 2 slots to cast spells from the Transmutation school.
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Just some quick feedback:
- Quicken spell feat is useless at that level 1 for you, so schedule it for later
- Banning transmutation is a bit surprising. It is a very strong school, I would rather advise enchantment
- Your stats have several issues: They make you VERY susceptible to going down from ability damage or ability penalties, you can almost carry nothing, you have a presence of a well-painted mannequin, and it does not really fit your fighter background (Strength 7 and Int 20 don't fit there, it's too extreme - but that's my opinion only).
Where do you want to go, what is it you want to do in and out of battle?