[Homebrew] Pregen - Looking for comments & suggestions


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I've been reading through Ultimate Campaign and decide to roll up some pregens as backups. I'd like your inputs and suggestion to flesh out a bit more these characters.

Cleric #1:

Cleric (Human) LG (15 8 14 12 16 13)
Age: 37

Domains:
Community (Home subdomain)
War (Tactics subdomain)

Trait:
Battlefield disciple (UCA p.51)
Grief-filled (UCA p.60)
Principled (UCA p.55)

Flaw:
Doubt (UCA p.65)

Background: - Conflict: Forced as a captain to severely beat a close friend of arm for desertion. That person is now incapacitated. Had sincere regrets from then, but only a few know about it.
- Relationship: A few significant relationship but all were doomed to fail.

Cavalier:

Cavalier (Honor Guard) (Human) LN (16 9 15 13 10 16)
Age: 16

Traits:
Couragous (UCA p.52)
Natural-born leader (UCA p.60)
Rich Parent (UCA p.61)

Flaw:
Vain (UCA p.65)

Background: - Conflict: Betrayed a figure of authority (parent, mentor, benefactor …) out of jealousy. Had shameful regret and won’t talk about it.
- Relationship: Never had any love relationship yet.

Wizard:

Wizard (Universalist) (Human) NG (13 14 8 18 9 15)
Age: 20

Traits:
Classically schooled (UCA p.56)
Mathematical prodigy (UCA p.57)
Scholar of ruins (UCA p.62)

Flaw:
Sentimental (UCA p.65)

Background: - Conflit: While still at the academy, trespassed into the director private tower, in order to find rumoured secrets. Even though she said she repent, she actually liked the experience.

Cleric #2:

Cleric (Human) NG (10 8 14 14 15 18)
Age: 26

Domains:
Sun
Healing

Traits:
Child of the temple (UCA p.54)
Fearless defiance (UCA p.55)
Life of toil (UCA p.60)

Flaw:
Xenophobic

Background: - Conflict: Told a lie to a young crowd in other to advantage his religion. Had mixed feelings about it.
- Relationship: A few significant relationship that didn’t work. Now religion is only thing.

Rogue #1:

Rogue (Halfling) CG (12 18 10 14 16 15)

Traits:
Child of the street (UCA p.59)
Reactionary (UCA p.53)
Well informed (UCA p.62)

Flaw:
Lovesick

Background: - Conflict: Stole several object from family for money. Repentant
- Relationship: current relation

Rogue #2:

Rogue (Scout) (H-Elf) CG (14 16 12 13 15 11)
Age: 25

Trait:
Elven Reflexe (UCA p.62)
Frontier-forged (UCA p.63)

Flaw: none

Background: - Conflict: Minor failure to an adventuring party while scouting. Party was ambushed, but manage to get away safely.
- Relationship: A few but nothing serious.

Fighter:

Fighter (H-Orc) NG (17 12 15 14 10 13)
Age: 19

Traits:
Axe to grind (UCA p.51)
Easy way or the hard way (UCA p.52)
Seeker (UCA p.61)

Flaw:
Pride

Background: - Conflict: Corrupted a prison guard to look away while liberating a brother in arm.
- Relationship: Several important relationship that all failed.

Ranger:

Ranger (Elf) CG (14 16 13 12 17 9)
Age: 136

Trait:

Flaw:

Rogue #3:

Rogue (Burglar) (Hill Dwarf) CG (13 15 11 16 14 11)
Age: 58

Trait:
Fate’s favoured (UCA p.55)
Merchant (UCA p.59)
Trustworthy (UCA p.61)

Flaw:
Meticulous

Background: - Conflict: when attempting to retrieve a magic item from an evil temple, accidently set ablaze the temple which was entirely destroyed. Magic item was retrieved and all is good.
- Relationship: One and only one true love, but that was long time ago.

As you can see some are more developped than other and some looks more cliché as well.

N.B. Stats were generated with 4d6 drop lowest, then reajust to be closer to a 25 point-buy while still feeling organic. All stats presented already include the racial modifiers and more than often the highest roll isn't assigned to key attibute for class nor race.

So feel free to give me any suggestions, comments, advices, critics...

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