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The Hellknights marched quickly down the darkened streets of Westcrown, the pale moon above casting an eerie shine upon their black armor.
Suddenly Seltyiel and Seltyiel appeared, their invisibilty magic fading away as the pale half-elves slashed the necks of the rear guard that had just passed them. Before the others could react, Seltyiel was already swinging his blade at those still standing before him, slashing deeply where the armor was weakest. At the same time, Seltyiel swiftly circled around to the knights' leader, sliding his blade underneath the stunned man's arm, slashing past his ribs and into his heart.
Again they slashed their swords, and again, until all of their foes had fallen.
Am I doing it right?
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Am I doing it right?
Almost.
it reads very well, turst me I have read far worse slash fiction.
At least you didn't do epic crossovers between 5 or 6 fandoms with no explanation of how any of them got there.
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LOL
I needed the laugh today, thanks.
LOL
I needed the laugh today, thanks.
I see a future questionnaire on your second job being circulated: DO YOU ENJOY SLASHFIC?
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Where is the anime fan-art of Seltyiel with swollen abdomen? I demand pictures of man-preggers elfish Magus! Only something like this could appease me!
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seltyiel on seltyiel
Six more Hellknights rounded the corner as Seltyiel and Seltyiel caught their breath.
"Seltyiel!" Seltyiel shouted as he took a step back, his sword held before him. "What's the plan?"
Seltyiel's eyes lit up with hot blooded determination. "FORM MECHA-SHIVA!"
Seltyiel leapt into the air as Seltyiel knelt to catch him in a sitting position upon his shoulders. He stood upright once more, and both of them held their swords forth, challenging the enemy with four arms of bladed death. "MECHA-SHIVA! MECHA-SHIVA! MECHA-SHIVA!"
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seltyiel on seltyielSix more Hellknights rounded the corner as Seltyiel and Seltyiel caught their breath.
"Seltyiel!" Seltyiel shouted as he took a step back, his sword held before him. "What's the plan?"
Seltyiel's eyes lit up with hot blooded determination. "FORM MECHA-SHIVA!"
Seltyiel leapt into the air as Seltyiel knelt to catch him in a sitting position upon his shoulders. He stood upright once more, and both of them held their swords forth, challenging the enemy with four arms of bladed death. "MECHA-SHIVA! MECHA-SHIVA! MECHA-SHIVA!"
WIN!
seltyiel on seltyielSix more Hellknights rounded the corner as Seltyiel and Seltyiel caught their breath.
"Seltyiel!" Seltyiel shouted as he took a step back, his sword held before him. "What's the plan?"
Seltyiel's eyes lit up with hot blooded determination. "FORM MECHA-SHIVA!"
Seltyiel leapt into the air as Seltyiel knelt to catch him in a sitting position upon his shoulders. He stood upright once more, and both of them held their swords forth, challenging the enemy with four arms of bladed death. "MECHA-SHIVA! MECHA-SHIVA! MECHA-SHIVA!"
Do they spin around flailing the swords all the while?
Don't they have to "do naughty" before they form the 4 swords of death or am I misunderstanding slashfic?
Do they spin around flailing the swords all the while?seltyiel on seltyielSix more Hellknights rounded the corner as Seltyiel and Seltyiel caught their breath.
"Seltyiel!" Seltyiel shouted as he took a step back, his sword held before him. "What's the plan?"
Seltyiel's eyes lit up with hot blooded determination. "FORM MECHA-SHIVA!"
Seltyiel leapt into the air as Seltyiel knelt to catch him in a sitting position upon his shoulders. He stood upright once more, and both of them held their swords forth, challenging the enemy with four arms of bladed death. "MECHA-SHIVA! MECHA-SHIVA! MECHA-SHIVA!"
I read flaming swords the first time. Although that does in fact fit.