I'm curious if anyone would be interested in reviewing a 4e adventure I wrote up for my current campaign. It consists of 9 encounters, and is written for a party of level 5 characters. It's about 17 pages right now, probably it'll be more like 18 or 19 pages by the time I'm done with it.
I'm looking for some critical feedback on this, as I'm trying to polish up my writing skills right now. I'd really appreciate it if people could give me specific pointers on how to improve my adventure design and writing.
Sure. Forward the manuscript to brickk (at) gmail (dawt) com. I'll have a looksee at it.
-Ben.
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I'd like to take a look if you don't mind, my mail is prossersteve( at) hotmail (dawt) com.
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I'll take a look. I ran Living Blackmoor for Arneson back in the day and edited about 45 adventures as well as some product for ZG when he and Dusitn Clingman were working together. tadkil at yahoo
If you can get Scott Betts to take a look at it, that would be useful for you. He's given me excellent feedback on several of my designs.