Luminiere Solas
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Again i try to adapt Yami's infamous nekogami. i tried to balance them again. while keeping the basics. (most of the abilities are sacred cows, that the race had in almost all write ups, if not all) i will leave the fluff up to any dm that wishes to use them. (saves the trouble of adding a god that didn't exist before)
Nekogami were originally designed to create a race based on a certain goddess from a friends series of english credit earning shonen fanfiction. (that never reached the internet it was so bad.) i think they work fine as generic catgirls/catfolk. but i'd reccomend leaving any furry features optional. feline tendencies are a fine substitute. such as the cuteness of playing with a ball of yarn, or fishing in some samurai's koi pond with little more than your hands or even an excuse to wear mittens. the race is meant to be cute. but can be equally creative or perceptive (hence the floating mental ability bonus) hopefully you feel inspiration from this base.
Nekogami
+2 Dexterity -2 Constitution +2 to any one mental stat (Intelligence, Wisdom, or Charisma)
Fey Type
medium size, no bonuses or penalties due to size
Nekogami base land speed is 40 feet.
Low light vision, Nekogami can see twice as far as humans in conditions of poor illumination, such as torchlight, starlight, moonlight and the like.
Slight build; a Nekogami may squeeze without the associated penalties. as long as they squeeze in a space that can accommodate their size. (such as sharing a square with another medium creature, or moving through a ventilation shaft)
Ageless; at any point in a Nekogami’s life, she may place a permanent block on her age, thus no longer receiving ability score bonuses or penalties from aging and is no longer affected by age.
Nekogami receive +2 on Perception, Acrobatics, Stealth and Escape artist checks
Nekogami receive Weapon finesse as a bonus feat
Nekogami may treat all jumps she makes as if they had a running start.
A Nekogami may use her Dexterity modifier for climb and swim checks instead of her strength
Automatic Language: Common, Sylvan Bonus Languages: Any (including secret languages such as druidic)
| Shuriken Nekogami |
Needs more "adolescent female".
yay options. but i liked the whole adolescent female thing too.
did you hear of my older brother? he makes lots of races with the theme of adolescent female. but please don't insult Lumi's adaption, i believe she tried to remove a problomatic piece that got the race insulted. my older brother attends gleemax under the username Yami Shinobi. i'm sure most of his stuff is gone now. tell my older brother that his younger sister appreciates Lumi's adaption. some of the listed examples would be fine for an eccentric adolescent female to do.
| A Man In Black RPG Superstar 2010 Top 32 |
Are you just going to post this until we like it? No, it's not very well balanced. 40' speed AND a type change and twice as many skill boosts and a general +1 to caster stat does not a balanced race make.
And guess what? That's the same answer you got last time. Knock it off.
Luminiere Solas
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Are you just going to post this until we like it? No, it's not very well balanced. 40' speed AND a type change and twice as many skill boosts and a general +1 to caster stat does not a balanced race make.
And guess what? That's the same answer you got last time. Knock it off.
what abilities need to be dropped?
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A Man In Black wrote:what abilities need to be dropped?Are you just going to post this until we like it? No, it's not very well balanced. 40' speed AND a type change and twice as many skill boosts and a general +1 to caster stat does not a balanced race make.
And guess what? That's the same answer you got last time. Knock it off.
+2 Dexterity -2 Constitution +2 to any one mental stat (Intelligence, Wisdom, or Charisma)
Just pick a mental stat. I'd suggest Charisma to fit in with the concept better. A floating +2 to a mental stat makes them too powerful.
Fey Type
medium size, no bonuses or penalties due to size
Nekogami base land speed is 40 feet.
Low light vision, Nekogami can see twice as far as humans in conditions of poor illumination, such as torchlight, starlight, moonlight and the like.
Slight build; a Nekogami may squeeze without the associated penalties. as long as they squeeze in a space that can accommodate their size. (such as sharing a square with another medium creature, or moving through a ventilation shaft)
Ageless; at any point in a Nekogami’s life, she may place a permanent block on her age, thus no longer receiving ability score bonuses or penalties from aging and is no longer affected by age.
Nekogami receive +2 on Perception, Acrobatics, Stealth and Escape artist checks
Nekogami receive Weapon finesse as a bonus feat
Nekogami may treat all jumps she makes as if they had a running start.
A Nekogami may use her Dexterity modifier for climb and swim checks instead of her strength
Automatic Language: Common, Sylvan Bonus Languages: Any (including secret languages such as druidic)
None of the other racial powers are all 'that' powerful in and of them selves, you've just nickle and dimed the race into being too powerful.
I'd reduce it to +2 to Acrobatics and Stealth checks honestly. Both fit with the 'lean and lithe and acrobatic' image. Perception is just a bit of an out of left field and the escape artist is too much when added to the other two.
Drop the Weapon Finesse feat, let them choose that if they want it.
The rest is ok, I guess. The ageless thing is more fluff than anything else. The use dex instead of strength makes sense, and it's not too overpowered. The slight build is basically the opposite of powerful build. However, I'd word it differently. The way I'd word it is :
Slight Build: Nekogami are usually shorter than most medium sized humanoids, and have very flexible and petite builds. They are treated as one size category smaller when it would be advantageous to them in the following instances : When determining whether they can fit in tight spaces, when using weapons designed for a race smaller than themselves, for determining CMB/CMD when it is advantageous to them, and when purchasing equipment that is size dependent if it is advantageous to them (for example, a nekogami may buy armor as if a small creature when determining pricing and weight).
| Brian E. Harris |
Shuriken Nekogami wrote:tell my older brother that his younger sister appreciates Lumi's adaption. some of the listed examples would be fine for an eccentric adolescent female to do.You do know that if you hover over "Shuriken Nekogami," it says "Alias of Luminiere Solas," right?
Worst sockpuppet ever?
Luminiere Solas
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Nekogami
+2 Dexterity -2 Constitution +2 Charisma
Fey Type
medium size, no bonuses or penalties due to size
Nekogami base land speed is 40 feet.
Low light vision, Nekogami can see twice as far as humans in conditions of poor illumination, such as torchlight, starlight, moonlight and the like.
Slight Build: Nekogami are usually shorter than most medium sized humanoids, and have very flexible and petite builds. They are always treated as one size category smaller in the following instances : When determining whether they can fit in tight spaces, when using weapons designed for a race smaller than themselves, though they can also weild weapons of thier actual size category for determining CMB/CMD when, and when purchasing equipment that is size dependent if it is advantageous to them (for example, a nekogami may buy armor as if a small creature when determining pricing and weight).
Ageless; at any point in a Nekogami’s life, she may place a permanent block on her age, thus no longer receiving ability score bonuses or penalties from aging and is no longer affected by age.
Nekogami receive +2 on Acrobatics, and Stealth checks
Nekogami may treat all jumps she makes as if they had a running start.
A Nekogami may use her Dexterity modifier for climb and swim checks instead of her strength
Automatic Language: Common, Sylvan Bonus Languages: Any (including secret languages such as druidic)
| Shuriken Nekogami |
fanguad wrote:Worst sockpuppet ever?Shuriken Nekogami wrote:tell my older brother that his younger sister appreciates Lumi's adaption. some of the listed examples would be fine for an eccentric adolescent female to do.You do know that if you hover over "Shuriken Nekogami," it says "Alias of Luminiere Solas," right?
can you keep it a secret, i really hate being found out.
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Slight Build: Nekogami are usually shorter than most medium sized humanoids, and have very flexible and petite builds. They are treated as one size category smaller when it would be advantageous to them in the following instances : When determining whether they can fit in tight spaces, when using weapons designed for a race smaller than themselves, for determining CMB/CMD when it is advantageous to them, and when purchasing equipment that is size dependent if it is advantageous to them (for example, a nekogami may buy armor as if a small creature when determining pricing and weight).
Suggestion: This race has a good number of advantages, so I believe it would be appropriate to have this particular one a 2-edge sword. That is, they ALWAYS are counted as a small creature. This can be advantageous, but will have an equally big disadvantage without ruining your concept of the character.
At that point, it probably is just on par with the other races, and you should be good to go.