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I was goofing around with the coven and started improvising 3-line poems for the coven castings. I realized I probably should have written them out beforehand. Just in case anyone wants some creepy poems for the verbal components, have them.

Chain lightning
Here in my coven the storm shall belong
To those whom we deem have done us wrong.
Let each foe be a link of pain and song!

Baleful Polymorph
Our foes come at us, their power they’ve showed
They do not know we’ve had magic bestowed
From that power we now make you a toad!

Acid arrow
My pain, my sorrow I give to this dart.
Loose this arrow, let it find my foe’s heart
Oh, don’t kill, I pray, but tear them apart.

Dominate
Listen, listen, hear our sweet melody
Your pain, your sorrow, we will remedy
Now follow the chords of our elegy

Mariner’s curse
Spirits of waves that drown ships thought stable
Take my foe’s body now straight and able
Place them upon a wobbly turntable.

(more coming!)

Congrats everyone! :-)

I apologize if this is too much to ask right now but is there any chance for me to receive some feedback (even a few words would help) concerning my submission, in order to realize my weak points and submit a better one for the next issue?

If you want additional eyes there are a few places online for RPG writers. Perhaps joining a writing group will get you the feedback you're looking for. I'd suggest doing so for next year's submission. I know joining Freelance Forge has helped me.

Deriven Firelion wrote:

Zombkat wrote:

I'm changing the Vault Heist because I have a few lawful neutral players who would never, ever do it. I have a few ideas, but I'm not sure if they really work:

-Someone earlier suggested Gage has them work the Gala as a favor. While a possibility, I'm not sure if it's a fun one.
-Hostage situation: The PCs show up at the Gala and Gage takes them aside. He's just been told someone has gotten into the vaults and will blow up the casino unless if he gives into their demands. The demands, however, involve him publicly killing his friend Edrer Gutsking during the gala. He needs them to get to the vaults without alerting any of the patrons.
-Unknown assassins: Gage got a strange note threatening his life and believes it's from a current worker. He needs the PCs to work with Edrer to find the possible assassin and quietly arrest them.
-Fun & Games: Gage decides to make a bet with the PC's: if they can get the key off of him, he will not pursue them.

Thoughts? Ideas?

I like the hostage situation. I think you can do something interesting and fun with that.

I was planning on something similar. Gage wants to cooperate with the agents, but is concerned about retribution from the Twilight Four, which he only understands as some shadowy cabal. Gage's cooperation is contingent that on it appearing that he did not assist the agents in any way, nor can his staff know as they might alert this group he is so frightened of.

This gives the agents some opportunity to fail forward with Gage running interference for them as best he can and the heist requiring very little adjusting.

I like that as well! I'm also not happy with the "object they're going after already being stolen" bit. It feels like a "gotcha" moment. Saving someone might make it less bad.

I'm changing the Vault Heist because I have a few lawful neutral players who would never, ever do it. I have a few ideas, but I'm not sure if they really work:

-Someone earlier suggested Gage has them work the Gala as a favor. While a possibility, I'm not sure if it's a fun one.
-Hostage situation: The PCs show up at the Gala and Gage takes them aside. He's just been told someone has gotten into the vaults and will blow up the casino unless if he gives into their demands. The demands, however, involve him publicly killing his friend Edrer Gutsking during the gala. He needs them to get to the vaults without alerting any of the patrons.
-Unknown assassins: Gage got a strange note threatening his life and believes it's from a current worker. He needs the PCs to work with Edrer to find the possible assassin and quietly arrest them.
-Fun & Games: Gage decides to make a bet with the PC's: if they can get the key off of him, he will not pursue them.

Thoughts? Ideas?

Zombkat wrote:

I wrote out Wrent's confession for my players as a side-story in between sessions. It sums up book 2, and gives an idea of book 3. I embellished it some (the bank robbery was meant to get Wrent some gold so that she could break away from the Twilight Four, but I felt the reasoning to be suspicious. And the book never states how she got either gang to work for her.)

This is great, but you spelled Norgorber two different ways...neither of them correct.

Darn. What's the point of having players if they can't catch your mistakes!

Thanks for letting me know. I'll fix it after work today.

I wrote out Wrent's confession for my players as a side-story in between sessions. It sums up book 2, and gives an idea of book 3. I embellished it some (the bank robbery was meant to get Wrent some gold so that she could break away from the Twilight Four, but I felt the reasoning to be suspicious. And the book never states how she got either gang to work for her.)

Find it here.

Hello!

I'm looking to start a lodge for pf2e in NJ, either at Saga Concepts or another game store. Any interest? Any advice?

Well, didn't make it, but Let's chomp on the next bit.

Any clues what the theme is going to be?

We won't know until May. My advice is to just keep writing! Muck around with PFTools monster creator. Write out ideas. Join r/pathfinder2ecteations. Join Freelance Forge. Post to the forums here. Just have fun!

I am so excited! I can't wait for you to print my cutie space bunnies! This is such a great day!

Your space bunnies are amazing! I love the picture they did for them!