I really liked this entry. I will definitely vote for this one. I believe the writer is very skilled in his writing capabilities. What a great imagination! I would not want to encounter this monster. I feel the creator was following the rules set forth in the game. Mentioning an adult version of this creature may have disqualified him in some way. Give him credit for obeying the rules. Please keep writing. I hope you continue into the next round as I feel that your future entries will prove to be most interesting and creative. Good Luck! Hope many people vote for your entry.