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EEAAAiii!!! Brazil over gain!!!

Very Good, Congratulations, a Brazilian in the area!!!
Small Word!!

I tray the RPG superstar in the last year but i not have your luck, because my English is terrible.
I hope you win this contest, and put Brazil and Santa Catanina in the Map.
May be one day we talk about Rpg and Game Desing together in Florianopolis.

Good Luck!

Nithzen, many of the grammatical issues in your post above were also present in your submission and that led us to reject it. I'm sure you are doing your best. If we have a similar competition next year, perhaps you would consider having another person read and edit your entry to help you out with the grammar. Best of luck!

Thanks Clark!!! i really need now it, next time will tray again!

Runes of Direction: The creator of this wonderful item is a dwarf who needed a portable trap with various utilities. But when he carve this runes on 6 little triangular stones, that when placed on the floor in same senses, he discover had a magical power differently how imagined. When the arrows is in front of the character, pointed to forward, accelerate the movement in the area of 5ft. range weapons or character in charge earn more velocity, +2 in damage and 10ft in the range increment and speed(land movement). If the character is in the opposite direction of the arrows, all of range weapons and charges in the area of the item will receive -2 of damage and will have range increase and speed (land movement) reduced in 3m, the characters not aware of the item, when cross the area will be throw 3m in the direction that the arrow is pointed and should do a reflexes save (CD 14) or fall. Creatures small or smaller can not cross the arrows flying in the opposite order.
Transmutation (faint); NC 5th; Create wonderful item ; Wind Wall, Haste; Market price 30,000 GP; weight: 1lb.

I don't know what is wrong with my item (runes of direction), they is very good! I know the mechanism are a little complex, but i do to creative and smart players, when with this item in your hands can do many thinks.

Runes of Direction: The creator of this wonderful item is a dwarf who needed a portable trap with various utilities. But when he carve this runes on 6 little triangular stones, that when placed on the floor in same senses, he discover had a magical power differently how imagined. When the arrows is in front of the character, pointed to forward, accelerate the movement in the area of 5ft. range weapons or character in charge earn more velocity, +2 in damage and 10ft in the range increment and speed(land movement). If the character is in the opposite direction of the arrows, all of range weapons and charges in the area of the item will receive -2 of damage and will have range increase and speed (land movement) reduced in 3m, the characters not aware of the item, when cross the area will be throw 3m in the direction that the arrow is pointed and should do a reflexes save (CD 14) or fall. Creatures small or smaller can not cross the arrows flying in the opposite order.
Transmutation (faint); NC 5th; Create wonderful item ; Wind Wall, Haste; Market price 30,000 GP; weight: 1lb.

0- rune of direction
1- Migrus Locker - superlative.
2- Malleus Maleficarum
3- Torch of Solidity