Luffy Alustava's page

Admittedly, i was trying to make Luffy's biggest descriptive text something more along the lines of 'Long-armed Qadiran, good with his said arms' -- self-described angry person makes it sound like he takes pride in the rage xD. Whereas in fact, his anger got him into trouble with the law, and he trained under a monk to help get his rage under control to a point where it wouldn't cause problems with city living... which was his primary goal at the time.

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That client really did have it coming though. Didn't want to pay me saying i did shoddy work!

Added only a tad bit more about Sajni-- her personality matched Luffy's quite well, if only a little bit less joyful in her outlook on life given different circumstances for leaving to Arcadia. Thought it was apparent from my story-- but i added a bit to clarify he was a member of the society before leaving for Arcadia.

As for the commoner bit... i was debating expert for a time, but really decided that he was good at what he did... but still really didn't fit. He was just a common-man with an abnormality he was born with. Maybe his great grandmother really did F$#% that demon... or aberration. God forbid it was something like an Otyugh.

Well that took a few hours finish. Worth it.

I submit to you, Luffy Alustava. Qadiran, angry person who has taken classes to calm down, and monk.
Also, he's MAD as F#$@-- get it? :D

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My only real question, is that it's fine i take Zerker of the Society trait, as he wasn't a barbarian when he was level 1.