Alright! Joshua is now down, save for, again, some small coinage choices. I redid his background. Its essentially the same, but provides more detail, depth and weight to the things that he grew up with. I also added a bit to his contacts to flesh them out and explain why he has continued relationships with them and his father got a big ole creepy speech in the middle of the background that sums up the character very well. His contact section got a better description too.
That does make it a little harder since it would require every applicant being clear about their intent from the start to organize. It's why the roles used are the simplest to use for organization. In the end I don't think it will matter much either. The DM let us make pretty powerful characters so whatever group he picks, be it a group of bards or a group of rogues, could hold their own. He seems to like story. So lets not pester Dax too much about the list. XD She really helped us out and it'd be rude. I was just musing to myself mostly.
Not to mention Martial characters can mean different things too. There are those who are skilled at damage, defense, or maneuvers that allow for different cool things. Which can all also be broken up as well. Same for Arcane, Divine and Skilled characters. Arcane and Divine can be controllers, they can be party buffers, and so on. Skilled characters can be focused on Stealth, Nature, Social Skills, Traps. In the end it makes it neater to divide it simply by their most basic attributes but it doesn't really classify them in any way. For instance, Joshua isn't a typical bard. His abilities won't serve to buff a group or provide versatile spell casting. His strength lies in combat, Stealth, Acrobatics, Sleight of Hand and Social skills. His magic will let him do what he does better. So I'd probably ask to have him listed as a skilled character or martial one.
Joshua is now done. I updated his background, his contacts are now actually there, and I added a bit more besides in other places. I would ask that when you judge the character, please use the stuff in this profile rather then my first post. I'm not quite sure where to classify him on that list. He's got martial skill, a little bit of Arcane magic, a little bit of healing, and lots of skill points. XD Crunch wise he's nearly complete. I'm working out his gold count, I think everything else is done. Edit: Man, Joshua's Backstory feels small in comparison to some of what I've written. His story is more about what will unfold in the game though, rather then things that happened before it.
I am submitting Joshua Grayson here myself. The Character:
'Exotic. That's what they called my mother. She fetched a high price at the auction because she was exotic. The noble that bought her loved exotic slaves. 'Pets' he sometimes called them, as if his reasons for buying them weren't sick enough. But despite all this, that wasn't the word I would use for my mother. Despite the cruelty of my birth and the truth of my heritage, the word that always came to mind was... Strength. In her darkest days, she never let her fire waver. She even claimed that my birth gave her hope, though how I never really guessed. And despite being a slave, despite having been... taken from her world and her home, she never lost faith. She passed it on to me, actually, and though I've since learned to question the goddess she prayed t,o I cannot help but love what my mother spent her life in devotion to. Sarenrae, I worship thee. Please... help me make my mothers strength mean more in this world then the fact that she... that we are exotic.'
-A prayer, spoken at dawn on the day of his mothers passing Joshua's story is not unheard of in Cheliax or even in Westcrown, though it does have a few twists. His mother was a salve from a far off land captured by raiders. She was bought by his father, a noble of Cheliax with 'exotic' tastes. The resulting union was Joshua, a lad with deep skin like his mothers and black hair like his fathers. And golden yellow eyes that reflected light like that of a cats. He grew up the child of a slave, not a slave himself but certainly not a person in the eyes of true Cheliax citizens. His father, of course, denied his existence, and Joshua made the mistake of claiming to be the mans son only once. He learned his lesson. But he committed a worse crime then to be born to a slave, even worse then to be born a bastard. The foul truth of his birth was that he was a tiefling. It was clear in those golden eyes of his or the black striped tail he had. Even if he could hide the latter the former let everyone know what he was. But those in the know, devil summoners and tieflings alike, knew he was something worse then a typical mistake with a devil. He was Rakshasa-Spawn, sharing the blood of creatures even devils were wary of. His father had a theory, made during the one time he had been allowed in his fathers study. The dark powers that the noble man wielded likely awoke the ancient heritage in Joshua. A mistake, nothing more, and one he has since learned to guard against. And so Joshua grew up with even fewer friends then his birthright would have granted him. Even the tieflings of the city avoided him, out of fear, superstition, or the chance to finally look down on someone lesser. The young man found companionship where he could. A few thieves, a few former actors. It was lucky his mother was so devout and intent on passing her faith to her son or Joshua probably would have traveled a much less kind path. In secret, she raised him not as a servant of Asmodeus but as a faithful of Sarenrae. In secret, she taught him the goddesses prayers and even more then that the Goddesses dance. For that was what she had been before being captured, an artist who danced. And finally, she passed on one more thing to Joshua. Her skill with a blade. Since her death, Joshua has felt little need to return to his fathers home, and instead makes a simple living dancing in the streets to entertain others or picking the pockets of nobles who he feels have it coming. At least, during the day. At night this young man has an entirely different goal, one perhaps a little misguided but full of good intention. He wanders the streets covered by a heavy cloak, one that jingles when he wants it too, and a scimitar on his hip. To those in need, that jingle of the ornaments on his cloak is a godsend. To the thieves and crooks and savage that would take advantage of the weak, it's a warning. He has to be careful of course. Getting caught or too entangled means earning the ire of his father. But he does what good he can in this hellish city. But something new has come. Or perhaps something old. He hears talk in his favorite haunts of a Council thought destroyed, working its way into the shadows once more. At first he was worried they were simply another gang but the more he has learned, the more he wishes to join their cause and better this cruel city. OOC- I will say this about the character, he's a little melodramatic. He does like to wander the streets at night and will help anyone being mugged or the like but it rarely comes to fighting and he's only been lucky enough to stumble upon such encounters a couple times. This isn't to detract from what he has done, but to make it clear that he's not quite a Batman or near there. At least not yet! XD The Physical Description:
Standing at 6'2, and weighing 190, Joshua is a rather thin and tall individual. One would think that was enough to make him stand out but it seems the gods disagree. They gave him his mothers rich dark skin, his fathers soft black hair, and an ancestors golden eyes that shine in the dark. He is a tiefling of an unusual kind and that means he has some unusual features. Aside from the golden eyes, he has a long tiger like tail, striped black and gold. More often then not it's curled around his waist looking like a very fancy and fine belt. His lower half is also often hidden in heavy, baggier clothing with long boots to hide the fact that it is not what it seems. His legs are bent backward in a fashion that would seem painful to those not born with it, covered in fur matching his tail, and rather then feet he has paws at the end with claws. Learning how to walk in boots has always been a trouble for Joshua, so he revels in the nights where he can kick them off and move with the feline grace that comes so naturally to him. To distract from his nature and his tendency to pick pockets, Joshua wears gaudy clothing he purchased in the market. It is in the fashion of his mothers homeland, but it is the kind of imitation that is more myth then truth. Joshua plays up his dark skin and eerie eyes to earn more attention while he's dancing. And at night he lets his fancy clothing and heavy, ornamented cloak distract from the silent blade hidden in the many folds of cloth.
The Contacts:
WIP The Basic Crunch: Bard (Dawnflower Dervish) 1, Rakshasa-Spawn Tiefling, NG
Traits- Infernal Bastard, Dancer of the Sun (Maestro of the Society)
DM Jelani wrote: Flintlock firearms are fairly cheap (100 gold for a pistol), and as simple weapons you would have proficiency as a summoner. Taking a level of gunslinger at 4th level would also provide you with a battered firearm. This is an urban game, so there's not a lot of long range combat that'll be happening (mostly melee-50' or so from what I can tell). Also keep in mind guns are loud as hell. Hmm... I had not thought of either point. I'll have to think on this...
I'm looking for opinion's, by the way, on switching to a gold colored theme instead. With similar changes to the characters normal form. Also, should I submit a different character concept? o.0? I see that we've got a couple bruisers in general, and one or two people who might be going a similar route to me story wise. What do you think DM? I'd rather have someone else be picked over me because they were just a better writer and pbp person then because we had similar character concepts and you knew one of them to be reliable. XD
I was thinking something along the lines of paladin, although a level into Oracle would make my guy -extraordinarily- broken by taking one of the mysteries with a 'replace Dex with Charisma to AC'. That's a whopping +5, or a +4 around the time we're allowed to take it because a Synths dex is slightly above average. XD I may do it yet if it fits the story but probably not since Oracle doesn't quite mesh with the angel concept. If anything, paladin would probably work better story wise and characteristically, but only a dip here or there most likely. The focus mechanically and story wise, at least when speaking of his powers, is the discovery and slow growth of his celestial heritage. In that regard, if I don't dip into paladin I'm going straight summoner. -nods-
-nods- I've never played a synthesist before for more then a day or two (pbp games that ended way before their time because they died) but I've done a lot of planning for a myriad of different kinds of them, both for fun and for games I've applied for. I've already got a couple ideas for how I'll progress Joshua now that Multi-classing has been allowed. I'll probably focus mainly on summoner though, or might just go straight summoner as originally intended.
For some Pbp groups thats entirely true. -nods- Life happens. I've seen others go at a faster rate, and others that have been around for 9 fricking years and are still around level 10. But its usually worth it for good roleplaying, especially roleplaying you can get around a job that can schedule you whenever it wants too. XD I'll be up front and say that the background you had written in the example was extremely detailed/awesome so I'm sure whatever you come up with will work. And yeah, definitely the latter half of the game is where the complaints are focused on. Not to mention I imagine the more super hero esq theme will change things up a bit thematically. XD
I've actually heard a couple complaints about this game unfortunately, and though I've never played it myself I was wondering if you'd be changing anything or adding your own flare to it? I've seen some GM's follow the line of adventure paths perfectly but add so much you'd hardly recognize it at times. Edit: By game I mean adventure path.
And done! XD So much written. Will be adding it all to his Alias in a moment. Physical Appearance:
Normal Physically, Joshua is a peculiar specimen. He is an adult for his people in years (half-elves) and it shows in set of mature features. But his former illness has left him rather thin, so despite being fairly tall at 6'2 Joshua appears quite frail. His features are almost gaunt now, with sharp edges they didn't used to have. He bears a couple of scars that all look quite prominent even though they're all three years old. But there's more to the peculiarities then that. Unlike his sister, Sarah, Joshua does not have pointed ears. Instead he has a shockingly white smattering of hair on his head instead and grey eyes that were once brighter then they are now. He believes, along with his family, that it's simply an oddity of his elven heritage on his mothers side mixing oddly with his fathers human heritage. This belief is wrong, though it would take an expert to know this is so. He is, in truth, an Aasimar, though the angelic blood in him appears to be very weak, hence why he hasn't been outed as such yet. Personality:
Joshua is not a simple man, no matter what he may claim. He is determined, stubborn and even a bit brash. He has the best intentions and holds himself to a personal code of honor, one that forbids him from running when innocents are in need of help. His condition means he has too... compromise some ideals these days, since he can no longer fight off a couple thieves. But this does not stop him from trying to talk them down instead if he comes across any harassing someone. Contacts:
Sarah: Joshua's little sister. Sarah is in truth very nearly of age herself, but something about her elven ancestry has her physically aging just a touch slower then she does mentally, so she is a tad on the small side. She has pointed ears and long brown hair that she seems quite proud of. Unlike Joshua, she is neither brash nor brave, but is fine with both these traits since she figures she's a bit smarter then her older brother. While it remains to be seen if her mind is really quicker then Joshua's, she does have a lot more book knowledge then her old sibling. Sarah currently lives with Joshua and Ela, and is being educated every day at a small, somewhat run down to temple once belonging to Aroden and now belonging to clerics and priests of Iomedae.
Ela: Ela is a human woman who, in one stroke, lost both her brother and her best friend and sister in law, and then was saddled with two children she liked but never reckoned she'd be caring for. Many in her situation would react poorly... and she did. Ela always had a tendency to be just a little free with certain habits, such as drinking, but after the loss of her brother and her best friend, things took a turn for the worse. Joshua and Sarah learned to stay out of her way s they were growing up in her home, but now that Joshua has been injured something seems to have changed in Ela. She drinks less, sleeps more, and never yells at either of those living her home anymore. She seems... listless though, as if she spent many years mourning and is now simply empty. Sarah is doing what she can to try and bring her aunt out of her shell and start living a more healthy life, since the young woman figures Ela is family. Captain Reynold: Reynold is a hard human soldier who never wanted to make officer. He was a career fighter and liked it that way. He's older, in his middle years now, and is involved in everything he despises. Politics, back room dealings, and worst of all a commissioned role as an officer. Despite being a direct man who doesn't care for the subtleties of politics he's quite sharp and has some how managed to rise in rank year after year, believing it to be necessary. There's a corruption in the city, and if his 'betters' won't take care of it then he's determined too. He thinks fondly of Joshua, both as a drinking buddy sometimes and as a former Dottari, but has little time these days to shoot the shit with the half-elf. Benny: Benny is a sometimes thief, sometimes smuggler, all time coward. The man is Joshua's former contact in the local crime who somehow seems to know everything, but is rarely if ever willing to give it up. After all, he learns these things to protect himself, and if everyone knows that he'll start spilling what he knows he won't last long in this city. That said, Benny still gives out small tid bits, usually only for a very hard price. Joshua despises the man, but his encounter Benny made him realize that sometimes letting a little fish go helps you catch a bigger one. Lieutenant Kadrak: Lt. Kadrak is a particularly cruel and vicious human dottari who was responsible for the suicidal assignment for both Reynold and Joshua. Despite this and Reynolds, he is still an officer of the guard, mostly because he had himself transferred to another Captains authority the moment Reynold earned the rank. He's not untouchable, but he's got someone in his pocket and has managed to resist or turn aside all investigations of illicit behavior brought against him. Background:
Joshua is the oldest of two siblings, his younger sister being Sarah. They are both half elves, born from a union between an elf and a human, two adventurers who fell in love. Aria, an elven ranger of some skill, and John, a human conjurer of great intellect. Their relationship was an odd one to be certain, given the fact that Aria had a couple centuries on John, but all the same the two were happily married. Unfortunately, as it so often happens, tragedy struck when Joshua was around twenty and his little sister around eight. All of the family save Sarah caught ill, and only Joshua survived the illness. Without parents to support them, the pair were shipped off to Westcrown by the priests at the local temple, 'seeing too' last favors for the two adventurers they had owed for past aid.
Why Westcrown? Their father, John, had a sister named Ela living there. They were to stay with her. For a time, things were well, and the Aunt was able to keep quiet her... habits. Joshua's favorite past time was to read as a child, and he did so a lot. Not of anything useful, of course, but tales of knights and warriors defending the innocent. He was fascinated by what they did, not because they got glory but because they did what was right. He remembered tales from his folks about such things and always dreamed of being able to become one of those fabled heroes. When he came of age, at least physically, he joined the Dottari, and unofficial the common dottari. Unlike some of his colleagues, Joshua truly believed in doing what was right, and though he wasn't the best or strongest he learned quickly and had a keen eye and mind. Not to mention he could be quite persuasive, often talking down criminals before violence ever became necessary. He hadn't been a Dottari for more then year though when... the incident occurred. It has forever haunted him, and to this day Joshua lives with the pain of his decision. Still, he knows he would have made that same choice again, no matter the suffering it brought on him. Because of his more goodly and heroic ideals, Joshua was not that popular amongst the other Dottari, at least not the lieutenants who were often not on the up and up. One in particular took offense at Joshua using what he recalled of some obscure law to go around the lieutenants authority and have freed a man he knew to be innocent. Truth was, the man was innocent, and Lt. Kardak knew this. He had been accepting a bribe to see the man, a merchant, executed for something he didn't do. The one bribing him was another wealthy merchant who was trying to get rid of his competition. What Joshua did ruined the merchants plan and angered Kardak greatly. So the lieutenant arranged, with what he had managed to save from his bribe money, to have an understaffed patrol sent with Joshua and a couple other 'trouble makers'. Instead of a lieutenant, they got a sergeant who was often questioning orders and finding round about ways to go around them when they screwed over innocents, a scout who had learned to much of some illicit dealings on one particular mission, and Joshua. Three soldiers going out at night in Westcrown is suicide, but the only other option was desertion, which carried a death sentence. The scout ran anyway, leaving the Sergeant, Reynold, and Joshua to fend for themselves that night. As to be expected, they were attacked. The shadows swarmed over the weak patrol and attempted to kill them. It was only through clever thinking, using an alley way to limit their numbers and fighting back to back, did Joshua and Reynold even -survive- the encounter. Just before dawn, the shadows fled, seeking shelter from the coming sun. Two battered, worn, scared, and injured Dottari remained. But damn it, they had survived. They were grinning, laughing even, and clapping each other on the back when Joshua saw something. A brief flicker in the corner of his eye. He reacted on instinct and dove, thrusting Reynold out of the way as a shadowy creatures claws descended. Joshua remembers little of what happened next, but Reynold has told the tale. Apparently one of the creatures had not fled, but remained in the alley, hiding beneath some magic or something to strike out when they let their guard down. Joshua had pushed Reynold out of the way and saved the Sergeants life. The thing instead tore through the half-elfs arm before Reynold was able to thrust his sword into the creatures chest and forced it to run. The sergeant spent the next hour dragging Joshua's unconscious form to a temple he knew some Iomedae clerics were holed up in. They healed the half elf, but there was nothing they could do about the missing arm. Since that day, the twos lives were forever changed. Reynold saw the corruption in the guards ranks as something more then a small problem to be circumvented now. He spent most of his time earning as much power as he could and attempting to clean out the guard ranks. He is now one of the few captains not owned by a merchant or noble or criminal, and he is notoriously hard on corruption within the Dottari. The problem is, he's one of several captains, and while his own force is relatively clean these days, he's been undermined at every turn trying to clear out corruption elsewhere, and now that the nobles know what his game is his authority is slowly being limited. Joshua could no longer serve as a city guard. Not only had he lost his arm, by he came down with an infection that tore away at most of his strength and for weeks after his loss he was bed ridden and ill. Because he couldn't afford magical healing on his own, and his aunt didn't care, Joshua was left in the care of his little sister. The once strong warrior wasted away, but eventually he managed to beat off the infection. His body however was never the same, and even now its taken great diligence to gain the strength and stamina he has now back. But without his arm, he will never serve Westcrown. The problem is, Joshua was stubborn. His mother and father had both been adventures, both telling him as he grew up in their care to do what was right in their own ways, usually by showing him. He saw first hand how they rescued people and how doing good for goodness' sake spread good. The half-elf was determined not to let his injury get the best of him. His physical training now is for more then just to be able to move about again. Its so that he can protect himself during his investigation. He wants to know whats going on the city, and he's determined to do whatever it takes to stop the evil that fills the streets every night. The Guardian: Fused (sans the wings of course... for now.) Joshua will become The Guardian. This is honestly a close mix of some of my favorite super heroes and he'll be going along that route. Divine origin (wonder woman, thor) with super strength and durability, as well as an added mystery about the origin of his powers and his heritage that I hope can be threaded out through the entire adventure. A divine origin like this comes with some benefits of course (story wise) but also some responsibilities and some enemies he may just inherent from his ancestor. Mechanically, he'll be a tough as nails frontliner, meant to take and deal out lots of damage. I plan on taking attacks like slam to use as someone who hits -really- hard and the claws evolution will be reflavored as serrated greaves he wears on his legs (which can do the same type of damage mechanically so nothing mechanic will be changed) I'll be going with some Iconic wings by about fifth level and at higher levels will start dipping into things like magic and fast healing. The sigil that will appear on his forehead will be the name of the angelic ancestor he is related to so far down the line. I may, in fact, make part of the ritual for him becoming what he is calling out that name, ala Shazam style. Fused, Joshua will look very much like the picture. His hair will have changed from a soft white to a cold silver and his eyes will have changed from a deep gray to hard steel. He will not wear armor, but the silvery raiment's he'll have will be as tough as any armor (eventually). They will appear like fancy silver tunic and pants otherwise. He is bare foot. The serrated greaves he'll don when he changed will be made of silver as well. (Going for a sort of theme here color wise). Joshua we'll have the same build and height in both form, save that he'll have two arms fused. What was sickly and frail about him though will seem soft and gentle instead. The sharp edges his face has now will seem roguish instead of starved. Basically, that 20 Cha he has is going to be inner and outer beauty when fused. XD
If my sample is bad enough to have that many issues I'll rewrite it. I'm a weird recovery/sleep schedule from having a very nasty flue for a week, so at any point in time I could be coherent or entirely exhausted and it could make no sense for what time of day it is. I'm going to have to think on what part of the Dottari Joshua will have worked for, but at the moment I'm just leaving it as guard. Joshua's profile is almost, but not quite done. I am of course missing a background, a personality, an appearance and so on. But I do have some pictures, both for how he'll look like normally and fused. I plan on taking the Scion of Humanity alternate racial feature. The truth is, Joshua doesn't even know he's an Aasimar. He and his family believe his odd hair and eye color come from the fact that he's biologically a half-elf. The discovery of his angelic heritage will be a big part of his character, and I intend to try and tie in both his angelic ancestor and one of the things enemies into the character. And, if you've read the writing sample, you know he's lost an arm. That will come into play too, especially when his fused form gives it back to him... when he's fused at least. Here is the two pictures as a little teaser. Normal
Writing Sample of Joshua: He was once a proud soldier of the city. He knew for some soldiers that was a hard claim, but it had never been so for him. Maybe he had never risen to a high enough pay-grade to get the tough choices? Maybe he was only fooling himself? Well, even if he was, he did good as a guard. He saved lives, stopped crime, and upheld the law as best he could. He had been proud to be a guard... until that night... The man blinks awake, surprised to feel the wetness of a raindrop staining his cheek. He blinks and looks up into the sky and sees that it is dark with clouds. Even as his eyes gazed up into those dark clouds, more rain began to fall. He raised an arm quickly to protect his eyes and reached for the can that held the coins he had earned for the day. The rain pattered of the change within, but he protected it with his body, refusing to let the rain cause him to lose any. Joshua had once been proud to be a guard for Westcrown, but now he was little more then a beggar. He stood and ran down the road at a hurry, one of several people clearing the streets. He ran not because he didn't want to get wet or couldn't afford to be sick, though those were good reasons, but because the creatures that came at night sometimes came in storms too. Not always, but... sometimes. His shoes, worn and ragged, slapped against the wet pavement as he finally turned into his district. It wasn't the poorest of districts, but it was close enough that Joshua was careful as he scrambled down the road. By the time he reached his home, a small two story building near the end of the main road into the district, he was soaking. But he hadn't lost a single coin. He is, unfortunately, forced to knock on the door with the hand holding the can. It rattles with coins as it does. He can hear the soft patter of footsteps, and then the door opens just a little. Nearly half a dozen different chains obstruct Joshua's view of whoever answered the door, but the small voice that spoke out was unmistakeable. "Joshua?" "It's me brat." Joshua says in a gentle and kind tone totally at odds with his choice of words. A squeal loud enough to make a dog bark from the neighboring building comes from the other side of the door and it shuts. The clinking of metal heralds the undoing of the chains and locks Joshua had spent good money having installed, and the door suddenly springs open to reveal a half elf girl in her adolescence who looked maybe half that in age physically. She jumped at the man, causing Joshua to stumble with a chuckle as his arm wrapped around her to embrace her in reply. He was careful not to spill any of the coins in his can. The young man looked into his little sisters eyes and chuckled. "I take it your happy to see me?" The girl frowned then, and let go of Joshua, dropping to the ground. Then she kicked him in the shin with a grunt of irritation. "You're late! You had us... you had me worried sick!" Joshua chuckled again and walked on past the girl, eager to get into the rain. Sarah glared at her brother angrily, but followed, not wanting to get any more soaked then she already was from the rain. "Is she still home?" Sarah nods, then shakes her long brown hair out. Joshua didn't chastise her this time since he was doing a lot worse himself. "Let me guess, sleeping?" Sarah sighs and looks a little sadly at the stairs leading to the master bedroom. "Auntie Ela woke up for a bit today, I even got her to eat and talk for a while, but then she said she was feeling tired so I had her go back upstairs again." "You did good squirt." Joshua sets the mug down on a nearby table and messes with the girls hair, then turns his attention back to the coins. As he counts out how much he made, he speaks. "You have a good day at the temple today? Learn anything new?" For some reason, Sarah liked learning things from books, and so it was the perfect question to distract her from their drunk aunt, who they stayed with. The conversation went on like it usually did from there, with Sarah sharing all that the few priests of Iomedae and Shelyn could teach her. It wasn't much unfortunately, but it was more then they could afford, and Joshua was forever grateful that the priests offered such services for the younger ones for free. But about halfway through the conversation, Joshua stops listening. Was that...? Yes, it looked like it. He reached into the can and quickly pocketed the golden coin before Sarah had a chance to see it, then brought the rest over to his little pouch. The pouch was heavy, containing all that Joshua had saved over his years of working as a guard. It had a good amount of gold, that was certain, and Sarah and he would never go hungry with this here. The pouch went back into its hiding spot beneath one of the floorboards. Not a perfect spot, but one that would be hard to find without someone telling anything. He turns to his little sister, who trails off when she's sees his expression. "You're... going out again aren't you?" Joshua shakes his head quickly. "Not tonight squirt. But yeah." It was a secret he hadn't kept very well, mostly because he didn't like lying. Despite having been let go from the city watch, Joshua still did something he shouldn't. Whenever someone was generous enough to spare him copper or silver, it went right into the pouch beneath the floor boards. It didn't keep him from whittling away at his savings, but it did slow the process down enough that he could last for a good while taking care of Sarah. But gold coins? Those... he was ashamed to say those did not go to his family. Not always any way. A gold coin wasn't worth a lot to nobles, but to other beggars and small time thieves it meant food for a week at a relatively clean tavern. It was the cost of the information Joshua was looking for. Something was wrong with this city. Everyone knew it, but no one knew why. Joshua? He intended to find out. He had too. For himself, for his family, for the city, and for those who died every night, taken by shadows and the things that lurked within them. His sister, Sarah, disaproved when she found out. She didn't care about the city, the fat nobles that didn't care about us common folk as she called them, and while she felt bad about those who lost their lives at night, she reminded Joshua time and again that it wasn't his job anymore. She worried about him, especially now that he couldn't defend himself anymore. He sighs and heads toward his room in the back, "Get some sleep Sarah. I'll be leaving at dawn, so we'll talk when I get back tomorrow." His room was the smallest in the house, since he had refused to let Sarah have one on the first floor. It had a bed... sort of... and a beaten down old dresser missing most of its handles. It was sparcely lit with two candles, which took about five minutes for him to light. Sarah usually lit them for him around the time he got home. She had done so tonight as well. It looks like, judging by the amount of candle that was gone, he was about an hour late tonight. With the door shut behind him to his room, Joshua quickly changed out of his wet clothes and hung them up, then found a somewhat clean towel to dry himself off. The ordeal was... harder then it once had been. The man looked into the mirror across the room and saw a stranger. White hair. Thin body. Soft, weak muscles. The only thing bright about him was his white hair and grey eyes, which came from his mothers side of the family he was certain, and even that color seemed... wilted now. But, as it always did, his eyes tracked down to his right arm. Or what was left of it. it ended halfway up the elbow, little more then a stump. When he looked at it, the pain returned to the surface of his mind and he grimaced. It always hurt, but Joshua was able to ignore it these days, simply because he had gotten used to it. But whenever he thought about that night he lost it, thought about what he couldn't do anymore, or even glanced at himself in the mirror the pain came back. That wasn't even the worst part though. Sometimes he could still feel his hand. Sometimes he accidentally tried to reach out with his right hand. He used to be a guard, a proud one who defended the innocent despite the corruption in the city. Now he was a beggar and a cripple. In the frail, flickering light of the candle, the stranger in the mirror looked harder then he normally did. His features were cast in shadow, his scars dark and forboding. And his expression... The expression of the stranger in the mirror hardened to match that body and those pale grey eyes briefly flashed with the steel of his soul. It didn't matter. he was going to find out what was wrong. Somehow. He was going to protect his family, his home. His city. He would be its Guardian.
Ascension, Prologue – Empty Nights <Gabriel on the road to Piren's Bluff - Lamashan 14, 4712 AR> _________________________________ There is a dream I have. I don't know if it's about a place I've ever been to or if it's just a figment of my imagination. I don't know if it was the start of my journey or the end of it. But the dream has always been with me. Like with all dreams, it's hard to tell when it starts. When I finally notice, it feels like I've been there for years. I'm sitting beside a young woman. She's young, pretty even, but she seems distracted, as if she can't quite focus. Beside her on the other side is another young man, much larger then the young woman and giving the appearance that, despite his youth, he has seen much. Oddly, he looks a lot like I do. The same features, the same way our hair falls. I have a thinner build and my grey hair and eyes distract from the similarities, but they are definitely there. He is distracted too, but every once in a while he seems to shake himself free for a moment. Then a whisper comes on the breeze, one that promises safety, and then he is at peace again. Without being told, I know that these two are my parents, despite the fact that I don't have any waking memories of them being so young. We're sitting beneath a tree whose leaves seem to change every once in a while, shifting from the softest of greens to the most brilliant of gold and then back again. This tree is sitting at the base of an impossibly large mountain. Both offer shade from the light, but what does filter through is anything but annoying, instead seeming to offer comfort and a sense of peace. At the base of the mountain, where our tree was, there seemed to be a field of grass that would go on forever, though sometimes I glimpsed the glass and gold wall that surrounded it in the distance. There are other trees out there as well and I can just barely make out other people, some alone and some with families, sitting beneath them. But just when I start to see more of them they fade from my mind and become unimportant. Sometimes the grass in this field is green, a brighter shade then the leaves that hang over our head, but sometimes they're color changes, becoming the most amazing sea of platinum. The day is peaceful with only a slight breeze that sweeps across the land every once in a while, bending the grass in an amazing wave. Sometimes there is song. A beautiful voice will ring out across the vast expanse, filling those who hear it with joy. Sometimes there is play. Children will run across the fields and balls of light will dart between them, and there is laughter from both. But always there is peace, happiness and love. Or, at least, that is how the dream usually goes. I especially look forward to the dream these days, now that my parents have passed on. Their lives were full and happy, but I still miss them dearly. And when I dream of them in this place, I can almost feel them beside me, as if I was dreaming not of the past but of the present. They seemed happy and it made me feel happy. That was not this dream however. For instance, I was alone. No longer was I beneath the tree. I could see them in the distance, near the horizon, but it would take a long time to try and reach those places. And even then, there was a certain stillness to the area that made me want to stay way. The mountain, as always, loomed over me, as it loomed over everyone here, but the breeze no longer carried with it that beautiful song of love and harmony. The sea of grass was flitting pack and forth between green and platinum, something I had never seen it do. The night sky hung over head, filled as it always was with countless stars. At the very edge of my vision I can see the gold and glass wall that protects everything within this somehow endless paradise. I am alone. That is the thought that runs through my mind. I have had many variations of this dream, during the night and during the day. I have been brought to this place beside my parents or in the field beside our tree playing with children, with my mother and father watching on. I have, in recent years, noticed a road near our tree that I might sometimes follow, always with my parents looking over me. Then, I realize, it is quiet. The only sound I hear now is the wind moving across the shifting sea of grass. It has been quiet before, to a degree at least, but usually there was something more always happening at the edge of my vision when I cam here. Even the song that would ring out in the distance when it was not upon you was silent. "All secrets to silence." I am alone... It is quiet... and... wait, where did that star go? My eyes are up on the sky now, but it was surely just a trick of the eye. There are countless stars in the sky and it would be impossible to keep track of one of those brilliant, dazzling lights among so many. But... there, another one is gone! It is not a trick! Even as I think that more and more begin to vanish at the edge of the wall. Slowly the darkness creeps forward, taking more and more of the sky with it. On the plains, things begin to vanish behind a wall of shadow that is slowly sweeping across the sea of grass. All of a sudden a strong, howling gust gust pushes at my back, as if it were trying to push back the darkness. It nearly takes me off my feet and definitely caused me to stumble. The silence that I heard was briefly shattered by this angry wind as it seemed to be trying to force back the darkness. I could see on both side that this wind seemed to encompass the entire plains. Grass bent forward, nearly flattered to the ground by it. But the curtain of shadows pressed on, not slowed in the least, and after a several moments of digging in my heels to keep my feet the wind slowed, then stopped. I looked back up to the sky. Nearly half of it was covered in the darkness. "The stars hold secrets." The stars were vanishing. Their light was being extinguished. I didn't understand what was happening, but suddenly the emptiness of the plains and the silence of this world made me feel very, very small. I dropped to my knees and covered my eyes as I tried to force myself to awaken. It was only a dream after all. I did that for several seconds, muttering to myself to wake up. But when I opened my eyes and moved my hands I was still kneeling in the field. The curtain of darkness was coming closer. It was almost upon me. I shuddered as it neared, but slowly, haltingly, pulled myself to my feet. I looked into the darkness knowing that I could not run. And I did the only thing I could think of to combat this emptiness nearing me. I shouted. The curtain fell over me and... silence. "All secrets to silence." _________________________________ Gabriel awoke with a start, bolting up into a sitting position. He felt like shivering, though his face felt warm as the gentle rays of the sun continued to rest upon him. A cool breeze past over the wagon and Gabriel did shiver, drawing his heavy woolen cloak more tightly around his body. Beneath one of his hands he felt the coarse hay that he had fallen asleep on. He had no doubt that some of it was in his hair to, so he shook it off. This movement caught the attention of the wagon driver, who looked over his shoulder and laughed. “Well look whose finally awake. Told ya. Don't matter how cold it is. Once you get used to the bumps on the road it's hard not to fall asleep in a pile o hay.” Gabriel chuckled as he looked around to the caravan he had joined. A small group of traders headed the way of Piren's Bluff. Most of them were driving wagons like the one Gabriel was resting in. Assured of his surroundings, Gabriel looked down to his lap. His book was still there, open to the page he had been reading as he drifted off. “I suppose I owe you an apolo-” One of those bumps Gabriel had somehow been able to ignore caught him by surprise as it jostled the cart. The young man nearly bit his tongue, “-gy.” He finished, his chuckling turning to chortling at the perfect timing. “So, sleep well?” The driver asked, looking over his shoulder for a brief moment to check on the seemingly young man. A lot of people acted like that around Gabriel, despite several of them knowing his real age. In kinder folk his appearance, that of a young man barely sixteen years old, seemed to bring out a feeling of protectiveness, often to the flustered embarrassment of the young man. “I...” For a brief moment, Gabriel's mind clung to the darkness that had swept over him in his dreams and he felt like screaming. But the moment passed very quickly, and Gabriel was just left with an odd sense of foreboding. “I... suppose so.” “You don't sound to sure.” The driver answered. “Everything alright?” “I suppose I'm just nervous.” Gabriel gave the man a smile, “I've never worked with others before. If I do well this could be a great opportunity. And the mystery of what we might learn at these ruins is driving me crazy!” The driver chuckled, having heard it all before, and replied, “You'll do fine lad. You seem to have a good head on your shoulders. Just be careful out there. Wilds ain't a place you can fall a sleep so easily, ya' know?” Gabriel nodded and lay back against the hay. “I'm told the group will have guards, but I'm not without means of defending myself either. Thanks for the thoughts though. How close are we to Piren's Bluff?” The driver mumbled something like 'probably make it there in the morning' before falling silent, having just realized how he must have sounded to Gabriel. It was like that a lot too. Some folk, kind as they were, weren't usually very outgoing. But around Gabriel they felt safer, more comfortable. Gabriel turned his thoughts away from such things and back to his book, one of several he had packed specifically for this trip. It was a basic guide on how to conduct one's self through ruins. Where to be careful, where to look and even what kinds of things might be valuable. Gabriel had already read it twice, but he decided one more go might not hurt. The pages turned slowly and for a few hours on this chilly day the ride was peaceful. Slowly, day turned to night. The driver, along with the rest of the caravan, led there wagons off to the side of the road just as the sun began to set. By the time camp was set, the stars were out and several small fires were burning. Gabriel, who had bargained his way onto the small caravan as 'help' was out and about helping with a few issues. A wagon that needs cleaning. Horses that needed feeding. A tent that wouldn't stay up. By the time he got to his own little bedroll, the young man was tired all over again. He simply plopped down onto the comfortable cushioning and looked up into the night sky. As he marveled at all the stars that lit this night, their silvery white light achingly familiar, something Gideon had said came to mind. “I wonder what secrets they hold...” “What's that lad?” The driver asked from his seat around the fire, a few feet away from Gabriels chosen resting spot. “Just something Hightower said when he was trying to recruit me. He asked me if I looked at the nights sky and wondered. Said... the stars hold secrets... just wondering what those secrets might be.” “Probably to many to count lad, and none for the likes of us folk. That be the gods and the angels territory.” “You think so?” “Aye, I do. After all, some secrets are meant to stay that way. Be it that we, normal folk like us, aren't meant to find them. Don't you think?” That was an oddly philosophical thought from what Gabriel had believed a simple man. Then again, the man had spent several hours each day for the past week leading a horse by the reigns. Probably had a lot of time to think. “Maybe... then again, I'll never know until I find out.” Gabriel smiled, “A lot of people are afraid of the dark. But it's not because creatures of evil reside in it. Oh sure, some do, but when you look at the night sky filled with stars you can see billions of beautiful, amazing things that reside in the darkness as well. People are afraid of the darkness because of the unknown." “The thing is... the unknown isn't always evil. Sometimes... it's just the next place we need to explore.”
Cool. I've edited Gabriel a little. He has all three of those now, but lost Knowledge Arcana. Makes a little sense actually. He's never really studied most forms of magic. Just the one ritual to, as you say, tap into his celestial heritage for strength and a few summon spells he learned mostly through studying how the planes work and one or two spells he's picked up over his years of travel. That okay?
I have a question. If I wanted Gabriel to know some old stories involving other Planes, particularly those involving the upper and lower planes but any in the Great Beyond in general, would that be something from Knowledge History or Knowledge Planes? And yes, I've been doing some reading! Not quite enough, mind you, to rewrite the background yet, but soon!
Edited the backstory a little. He was born in the temple of Iomedae in Maginmar and when his family moved they took up residence in a small elven village at the edge of Kyonin territory. (Didn't want to use one of the bigger settlements since I imagined it being a small place.) Going to keep looking into the setting. Golarion is pretty interesting and I might want to add a little more detail to Gabriels travels. The libraries sound like a good place to start. Anything else to do or can I consider Gabriel an official submission to try and get into the campaign now? |