Robert Brookes wrote:
@Dmitri: Excellent background! One point to keep in mind (it won't affect your backstory much but might be something you reference in character), when Kyonin was destroyed by a falling comet (around 7 years ago in-game history) there was a tidal wave that did significant damage to Razmiran's capital and much of the coastal villages and towns. Thousands died and many more were displaced. Razmir wound up working some [s]wish spells[/i]miracles to repair some of the damage, but there was a period of high taxation, homelessness and vagrancy greater than the country had ever experienced. Whether Dmitri's family was impacted directly or indirectly is something you may be able to use as character development later on :)
That's the one thing I wasn't sure about - I wasn't sure how Razmiran was affected by the failure of the APs, as I've not read most of them. In order to keep rewrites to a minimum, his family was far enough from the coast that they weren't displaced, but the region was flooded with a number of refugees. That influx of people meant the meager resources his family had were almost non-existent. What wasn't taken by the priests went to relief work, and I think it's safe to say that one or two of his siblings died from starvation. Just another thing that makes him question why Razmir can't just wave his hand a fix all of this for his people.
One more thing - any winter portals in or near Razmiran?