I have finished prepping this to run in a few days time and have a few queries/comments.
1. Initial recall knowledge, the lore DC is higher than the society DC which seems backwards.
2. Scorched earth orc bows dont have range listed, I assume it is 60', or maybe 100' depending on what type of bow they are supposed to be.
3. Shortbows dont have the volley trait and normally do d6's of damage. Looks like these were supposed to be longbows?
4. Scorched earth orcs dont have a listed fist attack, relevant for archers attack of opportunity.
5. Damage reference in high tier scorched earth orc special ability is wrong (refers to low tier damage).
6. The map for the last encounter has a marker for spare charges on it but there is no reference to these anywhere in the scenario.
Those are the only things that jumped out as errors. I do think that the skill DC's throughout the scenrio seem to be very low, especially at high tier. The chase looks unlikely to challenge anyone although I would have liked to see more varied skills available for it (no nature for the sparrows?).
The combat challenge also looks rather weak. You get help in encounter 1 and the high tier basilisks are largely no threat due to the effect of incapacitation. The last encounter might pose a challenge if the PCs get distracted.
On that, it says it is a two action activity to put out the charges with no skill listed,, I assume anyone can just do it if they take the actions?
