Primal Dragons for 5th Edition

[Tamara Henson]

I made a conversion of Pathfinder's Primal Dragons to 5th Edition. I know the DM's Guild has the 'Legacy of Io' Renagade dragons that are pretty much the same thing (though I never read it) but I wanted OGL neutral dragons so others could use them. I also want to use them to replace the gem dragons in my Council of Wyrms conversion as I did when I converted that setting to Pathfinder.

Should I make any changes in concept, lair actions, CR, or attacks? Any typos needing to be fixed? What do you think? Feedback would be appreciated. Thank You.

The link is found here...

https://www.scribd.com/document/345029329/The-Primal-Dragons

[Lorathorn]

I only got a chance to look at the Brine Dragon. It looks good, but there are a few errors in the formatting (some things need to be capitalized in the stat block, like Perception in passive Perception, and Damage Immunity).

[Tamara Henson]

Thank You for the feedback. I still have the original Word document so those things will be easy to fix. Oddly the background scroll is a lot lighter in the original. It became much more obvious when changed to a Pdf. I must fix that with the final edition.

Any opinion on the lair actions and regional effects? I tried to incorporate abilities similar to the Pathfinder spells but am curious if the saving throw DC should be higher/lower ect.

[Lorathorn]

It all looks good balance wise. Totally appropriate and thematic. Good job!