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I'd just like to thank John Compton and other editors for taking the time to return such useful and professional criticism. It helps me write better, and I hope it will help Paizo enjoy a higher standard of writing in their open call. I am currently correcting 80 high-school sophomore essays, so I know what a grind editing is. Thanks, John.
I use passive voice to much and I plan to do something about it. Anyone else get any gems of wisdom?
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Yeah for sure!
It would have been so easy to just ignore that enormous, two-year old oozing pile of submissions that was commissioned before his time. But, nope, Compton is charging it with a piercing weapon. Massive respect there. I'm sure PFS will be better as a result as new talents are discovered.
Agreed, Thanks John et al!