GM Elton
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Tell me if this spell is overpowered for it's level. I'm taking criticisms and suggestions.
Visage of the Oni spell
| Bardarok |
For 1 min/level enemies who see you make a will save or be stunned for for 3d6 rounds plus 1d6 rounds/level... this is way overpowered. Since the minimum stun duration of five rounds at level 5 is enough for most parties to beat most things to death with no resistance this is basically all enemies who see me for the next few minutes must make a will save or die and it only gets better from there.
Consider that this is better (longer duration and only one save) than the level nine spell
http://paizo.com/pathfinderRPG/prd/spells/holdMonster.html#_hold-monster-ma ss
I suggest you scale it way back don't try and use the stunned condition at all and look at existing spells of comparable level.
For a level three spell try something with HD limitation such as Deep Slumber
http://paizo.com/pathfinderRPG/prd/spells/deepSlumber.html#_deep-slumber
Or something which gives enemies a condition like shaken,
http://paizo.com/pathfinderRPG/prd/ultimateMagic/spells/visionOfHell.html#_ vision-of-hell
Or something that gives enemies some other disabling status
http://paizo.com/pathfinderRPG/prd/spells/crushingDespair.html#_crushing-de spair
http://paizo.com/pathfinderRPG/prd/ultimateMagic/spells/daze.html#_daze,-ma ss