I as intrigued by your brief post, but confused by the document. I figured I was going to be looking at a divine twist on the warmage, and that is what caused me to click on the link. Thats not what I found.
1) You seem to be setting up a melee class. I see armor proficiency reaching heavy, proficiency in martial weapons, using intelligence in place of strength, spellstrike, etc. The problem is that we've also got a poor BAB, I presume d6 HP, only a good will save, and a way to sacrifice HP for spells. I appreciate versatility, but the templar seems to be confused as to what he can do.
2) Just my opinion, but a medium BAB, fort and will, divine magus or "warmage" would be way more interesting. You could drop the armor restrictions and keep spellstrike.
3) You are using the word "role" where you should be spelling it "roll". A wizard's role is to cast spells, and his enemies roll a saving throw.
4) Since your intent is unclear, please preface the write-up with a paragraph that will help your readers
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I as intrigued by your brief post, but confused by the document. I figured I was going to be looking at a divine twist on the warmage, and that is what caused me to click on the link. Thats not what I found.
1) You seem to be setting up a melee class. I see armor proficiency reaching heavy, proficiency in martial weapons, using intelligence in place of strength, spellstrike, etc. The problem is that we've also got a poor BAB, I presume d6 HP, only a good will save, and a way to sacrifice HP for spells. I appreciate versatility, but the templar seems to be confused as to what he can do.
2) Just my opinion, but a medium BAB, fort and will, divine magus or "warmage" would be way more interesting. You could drop the armor restrictions and keep spellstrike.
3) You are using the word "role" where you should be spelling it "roll". A wizard's role is to cast spells, and his enemies roll a saving throw.
4) Since your intent is unclear, please preface the write-up with a paragraph that will help your readers
1) There is actually a d8 Hit die, and Moderate (3/4) BAB. The Will save only seemed thematically fitting in conjunction with Magic in the Blood Ability. You sacrifice health for magic and you won't be the best at warding off disease.
2) I thought of a Divine focus but the issue was that I wanted to focus on spells dealing Hit Point Damage.
3)I have to admit that I didn't do much proof-reading.
4) Good idea.
3) *If* you decided to go divine, you could write your own spell list that included some of those juicy attack spells.