Made my first short campaign, would anyone mind critiquing it?


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I hope this is the right forum, this is definitely a homebrew setting, if there's a better place please let me know and Ill move it over there. Thanks!

Ok, so I've been playing with this group of people for 4 months or so, three veterans, one guy who's played Tabletops but not pathfinder (until our playgroup), two people who haven't played any tabletops, and me, who played a lot of D&D 3.5, so picking up Pathfinder has been pretty easy. Anyway several of us have expressed interest in DMing so we've run a few one shots and I have now designed mine that we're gonna run on Monday night! I was hoping that maybe you guys could give it a quick look over?

There'll be 6 players and I'm not sure what the classes are. They keep throwing out ideas but no one has picked one I don't think. They will be level two though. So basically I might have to tweak some stuff, but as far as you guys are concerned, figure they'll have core four and a couple others.

Here's the link to the campaign on Google Drive:
TA-DAH!

Im mostly concerned about the mechanics, the combat and the big skill encounter in the middle, but if you have a good suggestion for any of the fluff there, I wont turn it down. Does it seem like it will be challenging without being a cakewalk? Is it too hard?

Thanks guys, most of the people i know who play pathfinder are IN the game, and I can't really show them the entire plot.


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Will give it a look over later and come back with feedback.


Orthos wrote:

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Will give it a look over later and come back with feedback.

D'OH! Thanks for that, changed to a link in the post, thanks!

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