White Shadows

[Montalve]

"There is no peace for the wicked; there is no rest for the righteous." It’s the mantra of a secret order dedicated to banishing evil from the world at any cost, even if the cost is their souls...
White Shadows is the story of one of these sacred assassins and how are they perceived. Hope you enjoy it.
Its in 2 parts:

White Shadows, Part 1
White Shadows, Part 2

Any comments and feedback is welcome.

[Krome]

mmm I LIKE IT!

Love to see it fleshed out even more!

[Montalve]

Krome wrote:

mmm I LIKE IT!

Love to see it fleshed out even more!

thanks Krome :)

the image did inspire me to work on this. I had even forgot I had asked it.

[Krome]

Montalve wrote:

Krome wrote:

mmm I LIKE IT!

Love to see it fleshed out even more!

thanks Krome :)

the image did inspire me to work on this. I had even forgot I had asked it.

hehe...

Yeah I read it twice, and am left with a TON of questions about the story! Stuff that needs to be answered with MORE stories, not here! lol

Now I will be honest, MOST Golarion fan fiction makes me fall asleep (which is why I don't post mine- because I don't want to bore other people! lol). I enjoyed yours a lot. Heck it was TOO short!

More about the origins of Miranda, and heck more about the now dead guys (prequels maybe). More about the society and how they deal with their sins... actually I really would like to see that further fleshed out a LOT.

[Montalve]

thanks :)
I can only say that Miranda took a life of her own as I wrote...
when I conceived her I thought on her outlook... but actually seeing her told me who she was.

I have in mind more, so when I get the chance I will commit it to paper, and thanks for the comment of Hedrin... at least him I think he has earned more than what he got.

Again thanks :)
this kind of comments give us further reasons too keep writing and improving.

[Krome]

lol yeah you BETTER keep writing! looking forward to seeing more. :)

[Montalve]

je, thanks
my problem is not to continue writing... but to deciding what to write... to many ideas on my head :P

[Montalve]

for Krome and anyone who would like to read it:

White Shadows, Chapter 2

[Montalve]

White Shadows, Chapter 3

[W E Ray]

Well, at the very least I now know the existence of PathfinderChronicles.net

And I love the intro you gave in your OP; hopefully one day I'll get over to the site and read it. And check on other stuff, too.

Thanks.

[Montalve]

Glad to be of service W. E. Ray :)

Hope you have the chance soon to check some of the wonderful storiesour Chroniclers have submitted. This days have been busy and we are working with the continuations of at elast 3 stories, andthey are pretty good (no, not one of mine are included in the oes in the work.. but they should :P)

So good that you at least got to know the site :)

[Curn_Bounder]

There's plenty of diabolical (literally) intrigue to keep you entertained and wondering in White Shadows.

If you haven't been following the Sisters, you should. Catch up now before the next installment drops.