Hi there, ive created a few custom monsters for my game, and wouldnt mind if you had a look over them just to make sure they all stand up.
Razorclaw Lynx Level 2 Skirmisher
Medium Natural Humanoid (Shifter) XP 125
Initiative +7 Senses Perception +9; low-light vision
HP 39; Bloodied 19
AC 16; Fortitude 13, Reflex 15, Will 13
Speed 6
M Spear (Standard; at-will) ♦ Weapon
+7 vs Armor Class; 1d6+4 damage.
M Short Sword (Standard; at-will) ♦ Weapon
+7 vs Armor Class; 1d6+4 damage.
m Two-Weapon Rend (Standard; encounter) ♦ Weapon
The Razorclaw Dervish makes a longsword attack and a short sword attack against the same target. If both attacks hit, the Razorclaw Dervish deals an additional 4 damage.
Combat Advantage
A Razorclaw Lynx that has combat advantage deals an extra 1d6 damage on it attacks.
Alignment Unaligned Languages Common
Skills Nature +9, Stealth +9
Str 12 (+2) Dex 18 (+5) Wis 14 (+3)
Con 15 (+3) Int 10 (+1) Cha 12 (+2)
Equipment chainmail , Spear , short sword .
Razorclaw Archer Level 2 Artillery
Medium natural humanoid(shiter) XP 125
Initiative +5 Senses Perception +11; low-light vision
HP 32; Bloodied 16
AC 15; Fortitude 11, Reflex 13, Will 12
Speed 7
M Short Sword (Standard; at-will) ♦ Weapon
+5 vs Armor Class; 1d6+4 damage.
r Longbow (Standard; at-will) ♦ Weapon
Ranged 20/40; +7 vs Armor Class; 1d10+4 damage.
Archer’s Mobility
If the Razorclaw Archer moves at least 4 squares from its original position, it gains a +2 bonus to ranged attacks until the start of its next turn.
Not So Close (immediate reaction, when an enemy makes a melee attack against the Razorclaw Archer, encounter)
The Razorclaw Archer shifts 1 square and makes a ranged attack against the enemy.
Alignment Unaligned Languages Common,
Skills Nature +11, Stealth +10
Str 13 (+2) Dex 18 (+5) Wis 16 (+4)
Con 14 (+3) Int 12 (+2) Cha 11 (+1)
Equipment arrows (30) , leather armor , longbow , short sword .
Im also looking to create a basic spear armed Minion based on these, but havent got round to ir yet.
Any advice/comments/critismism would be welcomed!
Your Razorclaw Lynx looks like he's either missing a long sword, or his rend ability should feature a spear instead.
Also, the Archer's humanoid subtype is very amusingly misspelled. ;P
Otherwise, though, they look fine.