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I'm working on the script for the next comic to chronicle Galnorag's Second Darkness campaign. The events I'm coving in this comic are the party's assault on the GG after Saul sold them out. The comic will end with them decending to the cave area beneath the arena.
Rather than have my character narrate this page, what I'd like to do is have a quote from The Asmodean Disciplines on how to deal with traitors and oathbreakers. Problem is that I suck at poetics/prose. Does anyone have any ideas?
Events of note for the session to use for inspiration:
We bribed the back door guard to let us in
kobold bard charmed two GG gaurds and got them to fight for us
Kwava (sp?) did some very nasty shooting of Saul's personal bodyguard
Big fight on the catwalk involving lots of acrobatic awesomness from several PC's and NPC rogues
Battle in the ring between party rogue and Bojask & piggy (kobold bard tricked piggy into an ambush by taunting it)
Decent into the caves, avoided the barracuda by dropping Bojask in the water
Ended session entering a cave with a long-dead fella with a sword in him.
All I need is about 100 words of narration and it doesn't have to include all of these events. The only image I have locked into my head is the last panel with the dead guy in the water.
Please note that I'm a player in the game and don't want any spoilers of future plot, although I expect a confrontation with a sniveling Saul in the immediate future.
I anyone wants to take on this challenge, I'd be grateful!
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Okay, so maybe I did a bit better than I thought I could. If anyone has any suggestions, they're welcome!
“Thus spake The Great Tyrant to The Traitor:
Hear me, oh Most Accursed, and know the fate of all oath-breakers and betrayers. Thou hast broken thy bond and thy contract. For this, your suffering shall Five-fold …
First, you yourself will be betrayed by those who heed the most base of wants; the lure of silver.
Second, thine own home shall be overrun by creatures of malice and shadow. Their whispers shall twist the minds of your kith and kin, turning them against you.
Third, your sanctum shall become a charnal house, where the blood of your Most Loyal will be spilled on the sand before they follow you into darkness.
Fourth, those whom you have broken your bond with shall pursue and judge you, even though thou dost flee deep into the bones of the world.
Finally, and only then, surrounded by the rotted dead and those you have betrayed, shall you be delivered unto Me and your eternal torment.
Thus spake Asmodeus”
Excerpt from “The Asmodean Disciplines”
