Hsuperman wrote:
let me know what you do with the Nessian Spiral--I might incorporate some of your changes when I get there!
Mostly I think there's some great space for plot development in the first part of the Infernal Syndrome scenario, and that's left woefully underdeveloped in the printed volume.
First of all I don't think the fourth scenario is really the BEST place to let the PC fully understand what's really going on. They are fighting the vampires, they believe the vampires are behind the shadowbeasts, so let them fight the evil vampires and not understand there's something behind them.
Also, consider. the events from the viewpoints of the other powers in Westcrown. What are the council lealists doing? OK, they are the sacrificial lamb, plot-wise, but what are they doing? They must be confused, probably with some bad information submitted to them by the traitors. Why not let some of that bad info filter to the PCs? That's an evil thought, and amusing.
Did the party behave gracefully with old Eirtein Oberigo during the Cornucopia? If so, they might be contacted with some mission by him. There's a promise of money, of course, but if they do that they are distracted form the events they know are more important -- such as investigating the spiral.
Another interesting development. I think I'll have Chammady Drovenge contact the PCs, promise help, offer to be a part of the exploring party when the lower Spiral is entered. On the one hand, it makes sense on her. She's not powerful enough by herself to waste the party at this point, her people on the spot have been obliterated. She might be able to tip the balance agains the PCs, she thinks, or save Liebdaga and make a deal. Also, if she gets to know the PCs better, as good and worthy and proud characters, it makes what's supposed to happen in part six more believable.
Last but not least, PCs should think the things are going from bad to worse. They can't hope to control everything that's happening, too many things need to be done and there's no time, their allies are weak and terrified of the developments (it's a shame that every scenario here introduces new PCs and leaves some very good old ones to waste -- like Janiven and Arael).
I'm aiming at a harrypotteresque flavor here. The PCs go forward and become more powerful and more savy with every new scenario, but still the things become darker and darker...