I will be posting the whole adventure soon, so you guys can judge it on it's own merits. Keep in mind, though, that some parts of the adventure are designed so that you (the DM) can tailor that part to their adventurers, so that it has more of an impact. This is kind of why I'm a little unsure about posting it, because I'm not sure that I can do it justice, one of those "you had to have been there!" kinds of things, but I'll do my best.
