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Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

I understand, life definitely comes first. Keep well everyone.


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

I feel you, coming in at an interrogation is a bit tough. But with a group of invincible zombies I'm betting you'll find you're spot in the party quickly enough.


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

So how is everyone?


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

Maka suddenly brightened as an idea came to her. "Oh I know, ask him if there is anything else we should ask him. He'd have to say if there was right?"

Checkmake Necromancer.


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

"Ask him how burnable the worm zombies are."


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

Maka stood impressed by Amarekashu's magic, a wide smile on her face. This was a lot easier than Sully's technique, which involved a lot of confusing "bad guard" antics on Maka's part.


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

I assume to the temple to interrogate the necromancer.


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

"Ugh so the worst kind of worms huh?" Maka slammed her fist in to her palm, small flames erupting from the impact. "Let's go ask this spell caster were we can find them and test how burnable these zombies are."


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)
Samnell wrote:
Amarekashu the Bronze wrote:
Amarekashu raised an eyebrow, but if Zummabu didn't object then he wouldn't either. "What is it that you have recalled?" he asked, partially out of curiosity.
Zummabu shrugged, "Horatio can be trusted."

Maka gave Horatio a friendly, but forceful pat on the back. "Good! You look like the book type, what do you know about these indestructible zombies? Just how indestructible are we talking here?"


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

Decided to go with Extend Range since we have so many close range options.


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)
Amarekashu the Bronze wrote:

The bulky man shook his head. "We planked him and gagged him, and removed his components. It is unlikely he can cast anything."

"I think..." Amarekashu looked distant for a moment, considering. "Yes, I believe I know a spell that will allow us to discern whether he speaks falsehoods."

"Really? That's a lot more impressive and easier than my idea, that's do that." Maka said with a wide grin.


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

"An enemy gives you something to stand firm against. The trick is to try to become his friend so he wants to tell you what he knows. But it's a really hard trick, especially if you've already punched him."


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)
Amarekashu the Bronze wrote:
"He is being held at a nearby temple. We thought it...unwise...to drag a screaming spellcaster through the streets, and hoped you would be able to join us in questioning. Or have some ideas as to what we should ask if you do not."

"Good idea, spellcasters are dangerous. One turned me in to a frog once."


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

"Unkillable Zombies!?" Maka exclaimed with a glow in her eyes. However, her excited look is quickly replaced by one of confusion and suspicion. "Wait, what kind of worms? I've fallen for that trick before."


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)
Amarekashu the Bronze wrote:
"That is us," Amarekashu said, observing the newcomer curiously. "We were just about to go and report to Zummabu."

"Aghh really? I should have just stayed instead of wandering around, oh well." Maka eyed Amerekashu up and down. "Big with pretty eyes, you must be the one with dragon's blood." She said with a wide grin on her face. "We should definitely spar."

Maka jumped slight at Horatio's approach, but quickly recovered, embarrassment tinging her cheeks. "Oh, I'm helping them and they are helping him on a dangerous quest to recover...something. I forget what but I wrote it down."


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

Maka runs to catch up with the group. "Are y'all the group working for Zummabu?" She says as she holds up a crude drawing of the descriptions Zummabu gave her. "I'm supposed to help with your dangerous task."


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

Maka took in a deep breath of fresh air. Her trials in The God's Pit had been long and hard, with her body sporting multiple new scars. Finally she was outside, finally she was free. And all that Zummabu had asked for in return for her freedom was to help with a dangerous quest. Even providing her with some clothing and equipment. There were plenty left to still be freed, but that was a quest she was not yet ready for.

Zummabu had provided her with descriptions of those she was looking for. She'd gotten a bit twisted around while searching, but eventually came across a group heading to the Temple of Ishtar that matched the wizard's descriptions. "HEEEEEEEY!" Maka loudly yelled at the group while widely waving her arm.


Female Human UC Monk 1/Paladin 2 -- Kineticist 3 | HP: 36/36 | AC:18 FF:14 T:18 CMD:23 | Fort: 12 Ref:10 Will:9 | Init:4 | Perception: 5 (Low Light)

Checking in, happy to be selected. Quick question, I currently have Fan of Flames(15ft cone) as Maka's 3rd lv infusion to have her have a dragon's breath ability. Since we have plenty of melee would Extend Range for 120ft blast range be more help to the group?


Here is my entry for Maka:

Appearance:
Tall, well-muscled build with tan skin and black hair. Notable draconic features, including: glowing, golden eyes, elongated canines, and scaled patches of skin. Sides of head are shaved, remaining hair tied back in a long braid. Numerous tattoos, dresses in monastic clothing. Maka initially makes for an imposing impression but this fades as soon as she smiles, which is frequently.

Personality:
Personality: Maka is well suited to her element; brash, compulsive, destructive, powerful, but also energetic, passionate, pure, and warm. Maka burns with a true zeal for life, often finding joy where she looks and creating it where there is none. A creature of emotions, Maka is quick to anger but also quick to forgive. She has a friendly, outgoing nature which helps offset her more destructive and violent impulses. Though she has a true love for combat, she takes no joy in the suffering of others. For her, a fight is a test, an action of purity. A way to learn something about yourself and your opponent. They are also a lot of fun. Though she has experienced harsh treatment during her time of enslavement, it has done little to dim her flame.

Background:

Maka’s draconic nature and ability with fire developed at an extremely young age, possibly at birth. However, she is not sure as she has no memories of her family. She was found living in the wild by Bala Isa, a monk of the Dragon’s Eye Monastery, during one of his travels.

Unwilling to leave the child alone, and knowing her nature made her ill suited for most homes, he took her to be raised at the monastery. The monastery was lead by a gold dragon named Eku. It featured a wide range of students, teachers, and techniques. This proved to be an ideal environment to hone her abilities and gave Maka an accepting nature and a true love of combat. Though she lacked the ability to push herself as far as other Kineticists, her abilities came more naturally than most, easily combining with her monastic training. Maka’s monastic training taught her to judge herself by her own worth, not in how she stands above or below others. That a loss is as good as a victory if you grow. Lessons that heavily color her outlook on life.

Eku believed Maka to be touched by the dragon god Mardu, and taught her of the god’s ways. Maka was always enthralled by Eku's lessons and stories of Marduk. As she learned of the god, she began to have dreams of flying with dragons. Her prayers sometimes received answers in the way of small signs. She also learned to purify her flames for healing, though the strain of the effort limited their use compared to her normal flames. Somewhere along the line Bala started claiming he found his adopted daughter in a giant egg. A story that always brought a smile to Maka’s face.

Maka truly loved her home, yet despite that, she long had the urge to leave. For years, her dreams about flying with dragons grew stronger, more visceral. Then, one night something new happened in her dreams; The dragons flew so far away that Maka could no longer see her home. They kept flying, faster and faster. In what felt like both a lifetime and a heartbeat, the dragons circled the globe, showing Maka things she had never dreamed of. Maka awoke with a start. For the first time, she had a true idea of the scope of the world. Just how far it stretched beyond the monastery. Excitement overtook Maka as she packed her few belongings in preparation for the long, long journey before her.

She had many adventures in her travels, helping those in need and making friends. She tended to stay longer than she needed, enjoying the company of her friends and making sure they would be alright after she left. Eventually though, the dreams with the dragons returned, and before long she returned to her travels.

Things went on like this for some time until she ran into some trouble near the borders of Unther. A group of fellow travelers had come under attack by a band of slavers. Maka lept to the travelers’ defense, buying time for most of them to escape. Eventually however, she was overwhelmed and captured. Her injuries left mostly untreated, Maka spent a time in a state of fever and delirium.

She eventually awoke in a cell in Dalath, having been sold to the The God’s Pit as a slave in their bloodsports. Maka’s monastic training and command of fire proved their worth in the pits, and brought her some attention. Unfortunately, this attention mostly earned her tougher fights. The conditions were terrible, but she attempted to stay strong, to remember her training and grow from the trial.

This was made easier by her friend Sullivan Queen. ‘Sully’ was a halfling who had used his speed and wit to stay alive in the pits. Befriending Maka, the pair worked together to keep each other safe and make life more livable. Sully educated Maka on the way things worked in the pits and Dalath. His humor made everyday brighter. Maka set people that gave Sully trouble on fire. The pair made a good team, and good friends. Unfortunately they eventually garnered too much attention. After winning a team match, a special death match was called between Maka and Sully, with the winner gaining their freedom. Neither wanted to harm the other, but failing to fight would lead to both of their deaths. After a hesitant and prolonged fight, Maka was able to guide one of Sully’s blades between her liver and kidney, while using meditation to slow her heartbeat enough to appear dead.

The ploy worked, with Sully winning his freedom. Maka later “revived” in a pool of her own blood. Though Maka missed her friend, she took solace that he was free. The lessons he taught her helped to keep her alive and, despite the conditions, Maka’s flame endured. After several months, Maka caught the attention of the wizard Zummabu. He approached her with an offer, he would procure her release in retain for her aid with a certain task...

Stat Block:
Maka Zaci
Female Human UC Monk(Scaled Fist/Invested Regent): 1 / Paladin(Faithful Wanderer) 2 --- Kineticist(Overwhelming Soul) 2
LG Medium humanoid (human)
Init +4; Senses Lowlight Vision.; Perception +5
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Defense
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AC 18, touch 18, flat-footed 14
HP: 36
Fort +12, Ref +10, Will +9; -1 Will saves vs spells with emotion descriptor, excluding fear
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Offense
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Unarmed +5 (1d6+2)
Flurry of Blows +5/+5 (1d6+2)
Fire Blast +7 (2d6+4) ; Touch, 30ft

Statistics
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Str 14, Dex 17, Con 14, Int 8, Wis 10, Cha 18
Base Atk +3; CMB +5; CMD 23
Feats: Point Blank Shot, Precise Shot
Traits: Blood of Dragons, Arcane Temper, Earning Your Freedom, Righteous Indignation
Skills: Acrobatic 7, Appraise -1, Bluff 4, Climb 6, Diplomacy 4, Disguise 4, Handle Animal 4, Linguistics 1, Perception 5, Sense Motive 0, Stealth 3, Survival 6, Swim 2, Use Magic Device 4, Know: Geography 2, Know: Religion 3, Know: Planes 3, Profession Monk 4
Languages: Untheric, Aglarondan, Draconic, Halfing
SQ:
Other Gear: Masterwork Backpack, 4x Mage Armor Potion, Pathfinder’s Kit, Grooming Kit, Mess Kit, Hot Weather Outfit, Traveler’s Any Tool, Lesser Pentacle Talisman, Pocketed Scarf, Dancer’s Garb, Holy Symbol, 20x Incense, Tea Ceremony Set, Powdered Milk, 10x Dragon’s Blend, 3x Chocolate Bar, Halfling Trail Rations, 4x Sugar, 4x Ceremonial Tea
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Special Abilities
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Mind Over Matter: Cha instead of Con for Kineticist Abilities.
Mental Prowess: Can’t choose to accept burn
Elemental Focus Fire: Ability to attack with and control fire.
Basic Pyrokinesis: Replicate cantrips with fire.
Kinetic Blast: Attack a single foe with element
Gather Power: Spend actions to reduce Burn
Wild Talent: Gain new abilities or alter blasts
Overwhelming Power: Gain bonuses to attack and damage with Kinetic Blast.
Draconic Might: Use Cha for Monk Abilities
Investiture: Gain pool of investiture points, swift action sacred bonus to saves
AC Bonus: Cha to AC
Flurry of blows: Extra unarmed attack on full-attacks
Stunning Fist: Attempt to stun target of unarmed strike
Wanderer’s Lore: Lose detect evil for more skills
Hidden Aura: Do not have an aura of good
Stalk Evil: Gain bonuses on skills and attack and damage against evil outsiders
Divine Grace: Gain a bonus equal to Cha on all saves
Lay on Hands: Heal 1d6 points of damage

Character Sheet

Class Abilities(Needs editing)

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Maka is already inclined to go on quests, so she'll definitely be along for the ride. Especially considering this might be one of those world ending type of threats. Obviously she isn't a fan of Dalath or it's current state, but her enslavement has taught her some hard lessons. The problem is too big for her to punch. She tried that already and she failed to save everyone and nearly got killed.


Well that's some crushing disappointment. Good luck and have fun to the chosen.


Pai Song wrote:

While this sounds pretty cool and i prepared an awesome character i will redraw my submission, since i am in quite some games already at the moment.

Good luck to everyone else and lots of fun!

Hopes and dreams for a dragon bestie destroyed!


I can hardly wait, good luck to everyone.


@scottg0 wrote:

...His hope is to one day have his own permanent demiplane where he can setup a permanent hospital to treat everyone and everything.

Nurse: Doctor Scottg0! Doctor Scottg0!

Doctor: Get a hold of yourself man! What is it?

Nurse: A Yeti just got received, it has Fire Flu!

Doctor: A Yeti with Fire Flu? That's impossible.

Nurse: *Hands the doctor some burnt remains of a hospital gown* See for yourself.

Theme Song

Yeah I'd watch that show.


@Jereru, thanks for making the list. Makes it so much easier to browse through the selections. A lot of fun characters to read over.


Answered some questions to fill Maka out a bit more.

Character Questions:

1. Does your character have siblings or family members in their age group? Which one are
they closest with?
a. Maka considers her monastery members and friends to be her family. Sullivan
Queen is her closest friend. They have been on many adventures together and
Maka loves him like a brother.

2. What is/was your character’s relationship with their mother like?
a. Maka never knew her mother. She was found in the wilderness and raised in the
Dragon’s Eye Monastery. Though she did have female masters, none were of the
role of mother.

3. What is/was your character’s relationship with their father like.
a. Maka also never knew her father. However, the priest that discovered her, Zhen
Riko, carries a fatherly affection for Maka. An affection which is returned by
Maka. The pair have been close since Maka’s arrival at the Monastery, and the
proudest and saddest moment of Zhen’s life was when Maka left for her own
journeys. Maka sends the occasional letter to Zhen and her family at the
monastery.

4. Has your character ever witnessed something that fundamentally changed them? If so,
does anyone else know?
a. Maka has had multiple fundamental moments. The first was a vision in which
dragon’s flew her around the world. It was this vision which began her travels.
She has shared the story with numerous people.
b. Minor Test of the Starstone: Maka partially passed the minor test of the
starstone, giving her a small spark of power and setting her on her Mythic Path.
c. First Fight with Aergoreth: One of the happiest moments of Maka’s life and the
first true test of her new power. It was this battle which brought her to the service
of Aergoreth and gave her even greater levels of determination to improve
herself.

5. On an average day, what can be found in your character’s pockets?
a. Maka keeps snacks in her pocketed scarf. She has a number of protective
magical charms, gifts from friends during her travels, which she always wears. In
addition, she is almost always wearing her ruby circlet. A gift from Aergoreth and
a symbol of her rank as Ruby Knight.

6. Does your character have recurring themes in their dreams?
a. Maka often dreams of flying with dragons, and has for as long as she can
remember. One of these dreams, in which the dragons flew her around the world,
spurred her to her journeys.

7. Does your character have recurring themes in their nightmares.
a. Maka rarely has nightmares, and her monastic training gives her a degree of
control of her dreams.

8. Has your character ever fired a gun? If so, what was their first target?
a. Guns are extraordinarily rare in the Inner Sea. Maka has never seen an actual
firearm, but has seen fireworks and similar devices utilizing explosive powder in
Absalom.

9. Is your character’s current socioeconomic status different than it was when they were
growing up?
a. Yes, but in some ways no. The Dragon’s Eye Monastery is fairly wealth, as
Monasteries go. She never wanted for things, and had access to advanced
training and magical equipment. She did not have a true grasp of money until she
arrived at Absalom. Even then, grasp is a strong word, as her abilities made it
easy for her to acquire and she only ever spent it on food.
b. As one of Aergoreth’s Knights, her wealth and status is technically considerably
higher than when she was growing up. However in practise, this is not fully the
case. Maka continues to have a loose grasp on wealth, and does not judge
herself or others upon how they stand above or below other people. In Maka’s
mind, her position is little different than at the monastery. She trains, helps out,
has her needs provided for, and has access to advanced training and magical
equipment.

10. Does your character feel more comfortable with more clothing, or with less clothing.
a. Maka feels about an equal comfort. Her monastic training often involved hot
weather, little clothing, and lots of close contact. As such she feels no discomfort
with her body or others, and has a poor sense of personal space. While her
typical monastic garb is relatively conservative, she also has a fondness for
loose, and revealing, Vudrani dance garb.

11. In what situation was your character the most afraid they’ve ever been?
a. When Sully and Maka were ambushed in Cheliax. Maka’s fear was not for herself
or the dire situation, but for Sully’s safety.

12. In what situation was your character the most calm they’ve ever been?
a. Maka does not have the calmest nature. However, her monastic training gives
her the ability to achieve a true state of calm during meditation. The only time she
has achieved a higher state was during her test of the Starstone, though she has
no memories of the event.

13. Is your character bothered by the sight of blood? If so, in what way?
a. No. While the Dragon’s Eye Monastery fostered respect, they had numerous
healers which granted the students the opportunity to push themselves and one
another. As such, Maka grew up used to seeing her own blood and that of others.
However, she does not care for the suffering of others. Rough housing, even that
involving broken bones, is a world apart from harming someone.

14. Does your character remember names or faces easier.
a. Faces by far, Maka is not the best with names.

15. Is your character preoccupied with money or material possession? Why or why not?
a. No. Maka was raised in a monastery with her needs provided for. She has little
value for material possession, though she does make exceptions for gifts from
those she cares about. Maka didn’t have a grasp of money until she arrived at
Absalom. Even then, her ease in earning it and desire to only buy food didn’t
leave her with the best grasp.

16. What does your character idealize most: Happiness or success?

a. Happiness, but for Maka happiness brings success and success brings
happiness. Or at least, they should. Her goal is personal improvement, mostly
through combat and training. The idea of achieving success in something that
doesn’t make you happy doesn’t make a lot of sense to Maka.

17. What was your character’s favorite toy as a child?
a. The training dummies.
18. Is your character more likely to admire wisdom, or ambition in others?
a. Wisdom. While Maka highly values desire and determination, she was taught that
perfection is a journey, not a destination. Her experience in Cheliax showed her
that ambition not tempered by wisdom can be a very dangerous thing.

19. What is your character’s biggest relationship flaw? Has this flaw destroyed relationships
for them before?
a. Maka’s biggest relationship flas is likely her passion and naivete, though in some
ways they are also her biggest strengths. Her zealous nature causes discomfort
for some, especially the more introverted, but it is also what makes her such a
steadfast friend. It has yet to ruin a relationship for her.

20. In what ways does your character compare themselves to others? Do they do this for teh
sake of self-validation, or self-criticism.
a. Maka doesn’t do a lot of comparison. She views herself and others for their own
self-worth. Not in how they stand above or below others.

21. If something tragic or negative happens to your character, do they believe they may
have caused and deserved it, or are they quick to blame others?
a. As a Vudrani, Maka has a strong belief in Karma. However, this is in regards to
the natural order of the universe. She does not use this as justification for the
harms inflicted by others.

22. What does your character like in other people?
a. While Maka has great respect for helping others, passion, ability, and drive this
is not all she likes in others. Maka has a great gift in seeing the value in other
people, even when they can’t see the value in themselves. Possibly the thing she
values most, however, is the ability to cook.

23. What does your character dislike in other people?
a. Make does like like cruel or evil people. Those who take joy in the suffering of
others.

24. How quick is your character to trust someone else?
a. Though Cheliax thought her some lessons, Maka is still far too quick in trusting
others.

25. How quick is your character to suspect someone else? Does this change if they are
close with that person?
a. Maka does not have a suspecting nature and requires a good deal of evidence to
raise suspicion. This is especially true if she is close with the person.

26. How does your character behave around children?
a. Maka is fairly good with children. Though they are typically initially afraid of her
imposing stature and draconic appearance, their curiosity typically wins out.

When this happens, they are often treated to delightful shows of fire and shoulder
rides.

27. How does your character normally deal with confrontation?
a. By punching it.

28. How quick or slow is your character to resort to physical violence in a confrontation?
a. Very quick, typically her first option.

29. What did your character dream of being or doing as a child? Did that dream come true?
a. Mastering the flame and traveling the world, which is so far going swimmingly.

30. What does your character find repulsive or discusting.
a. Cruelty and overly bitter food.

31. Describe a scenario in which your character feels most comfortable.
a. Maka feels most comfortably in a fight with a powerful and willing opponent.

32. Describe a scenario in which your character feels most uncomfortable.
a. A court appearance in which there is no dancing, food, or music and Maka had to
wear a dress. A really itchy and stuffy dress.

33. In the face of criticism, is your character defensive, self-deprecating, or willing to
improve?
a. Maka’s monastic training taught her to handle criticism well, always looking for a
way to improve herself.

34. Is your character more concerned with defending their honor, or protecting their status?
a. Of the two, honor. Maka is barely aware of status.

35. Is your character more likely to remove a problem/threat, or remove themselves from a
problem/threat?
a. Maka takes problems head on.

36. Has your character ever been bitten by an animal? How were they affected (or
unaffected)?
a. Maka has been bitten by a LOT of things. Didn’t bother her more than any other
wounds.

37. How does your character treat people in service jobs?
a. Very well, especially those in food service jobs. Maka does not view servants as
lesser and grew up doing chores. In fact, she still helps out with chores around
the keep.

38. Has your character ever had a dependent figure who was not related to them?
a. No, Maka is typically the one more in the dependent role.

39. How easy or difficult is it for your character to say “I love you?” Can they say it without
meaning it?
a. Maka has never said the phrase nor truly considered it. She was not raised with
the Inner Sea’s traditional ideals of romantic or sexual love. However, she is not
celibate and does love her friends as family.

40. What does your character believe will happen to them after they die? Does this belief
scare them?
a. Unless she earns a particular award, her soul will go on a, sometimes long,
journey to the Boneyard to be judged and then eventually be reincarnated back in
the Material Plane. This seems as natural to rain and does not scare Maka.


Pai Song wrote:
nate lange wrote:

@Pai- no, the rules are fairly clear that you can't stack archetypes that both modify the same class feature... I'm willing to be a little flexible in some cases (like if an archetype limits your options for ranger combat styles but doesn't give up any of the actual bonus feats I'd let you stack it with an archetype that did give up feats) but in this case both archetypes specifically give up (overlapping) hexes so I'd have to say no.

That's cool. I'm very satisfied with the character here as is and there are probably a ton of options in this character already i'm not even aware of^^

Have to admitt i imagine this a bit as Toph Bei Fong :D
Even thought about making it an oracle with the vision curse, but i couldn't quite decide on a mystery.

Truly unfortunate that Metal doesn't lend itself better to the build. However Nature Fang Druid is one of the best things in the game. It goes great with the Emerald Knight theme.


nate lange wrote:

@Maka- that makes more sense (36k seemed like a lot for an extra 1d6). It doesn't have to be an actual diadem if you want to flavor it differently- anything that fits in the headband slot is fine (a circlet, a silk headband, a dainty filigreed tiara...)

@Pai- welcome

Considered some kind of monk headband but I like the idea of a ruby circlet. A treasured gift from Aergoreth as a symbol of her rank of Ruby Knight. I picture her morning routine involving involving a bunch of crazy firebending training, then quite meditation as she re-braids her long hair, ending with delicately aligning the circlet with her Crown Chakra before leaving to eat a table full of food.


nate lange wrote:
@Maka- I thought there was a rule that you couldn't spend more than half your starting wealth on one item... a quick search didn't turn that up, so I guess I'll allow you to go over that (at least until I have more time to check that), but even so are you sure you want to spend 36 of your 41k wealth on the diadem? As for for the legendary item, that should be ok; I don't mind you fluffing it as a gauntlet, although it will still function in all mechanical respects as a shield (including legendary surge).

Well apparently my group has been house ruling Magic Tattoos. We ran it with the same cost but they still occupied the item slot. Never used it before and having the item be a tattoo was mostly fluff so I didn't double check the feat, sorry about that. Definitely don't want to spend 1.5 the price for fluff, 18k is already pushing it for +1d6 to fire blasts. I'll just keep that as a standard headband.

Yeah gauntlet is merely fluff. Having a single armored arm is a pretty common fluff for me as I like the imagery so shouldn't be any issues with mechanics.


Maka's loadout is pretty simple, the inventory tab in her Character Sheet has links to the items. Only 2 worth mentioning would be the Kineticist's Diadem, Lesser which I have as a magic tattoo. Figured someone at her monastery inscribed it for her as fluff, full price deducted from wealth. The other is her "gauntlet" Agni. A silversheen buckler(full wealth, used with unhindering shield feat) that I took the Legendary Item path ability for. Intelligent item that allows her to cast a number of spells per day. Fluffed as a gauntlet since the buckler is strapped to her arm and doesn't interfere with her hand. Abilities are listed in her Class Abilities


I just had to do this.

Theme Song:
If you're evil and you're on the rise
You can count on the four of us taking you down
Cause we're good and evil never beats us
We'll win the fight and then Aergoreth will feed us

We are Aergoreth's Gems
We'll always save the day!
And if you think we can't
I'll punch you in the face
That's why the people of Xin Shalast belive in
<Someone>, <Someone>, <Someone>, and Maka!


Maka's backstory has been completed. I changed her mythic from Guardian to Archmage.

UC Monk(Scaled Fist/Invested Regent) 9 / Paladin(Faithful Wanderer) 2 --- Kineticist(Overwhelming Soul) 11 --- Archmage 3

Maka is an aasimar with dragonic blood running through her veins. Her Kineticist abilities allow her to deal a lot of damage at range. Her Monk and Paladin abilities ensure she is no glass canon, and gives her plenty of melee options as well.

Appearance:
Tall, well-muscled build with tan skin and black hair. Notable draconic features, including: glowing, golden eyes, elongated canines, and scaled patches of skin. Sides of head are shaved, remaining hair tied back. Numerous tattoos, dresses in monastic clothing. Maka initially makes for an imposing impression but this fades as soon as she smiles, which is frequently.

Personality:
Personality: Maka is well suited to her element; brash, compulsive, destructive, powerful, but also energetic, passionate, pure, and warm. Maka burns with a true zeal for life, often finding joy where she looks and creating it where there is none. A creature of emotions, Maka is quick to anger but also quick to forgive. She has a friendly, outgoing nature which helps offset her more destructive and violent impulses. Though she has a true love for combat, she takes no joy in the suffering of others. For her, a fight is a test, an action of purity. A way to learn something about yourself and your opponent. They are also a lot of fun.

Gem:
Ruby - Red is the color of fire and blood. It is associated with energy, danger, anger, power, determination, and passion. Though the wrath of fire brings untold destruction, it is the burning love of the sun that breathes life into the world. Maka’s determination and passion reflect this well, making her a dangerous foe and the most loyal of friends.

Background:

Maka was raised in a monastery on the island nation of Jalmeray. It was founded by Bala Isa, a former master of the Monastery of the Unblinking Flame. One day during meditation, Bala came to a simple conclusion. There was no perfect style, only perfect styles. This conclusion did not sit with the Houses of Perfection, so Bala took his leave with but a handful of students following him. They reclaimed the Tiger’s Eye Monastery from the bandits occupying the abandoned school. Renamed the Dragon’s Eye Monastery, it was formed as a cosmopolitan school with no focus on a particular style, but instead on helping students develop their own.

Maka’s draconic nature and ability with fire developed at an extremely young age, possibly at birth. However, she is not sure as she has no memories of her family. She was found living in the wild by Zhen Riko, a monk of the Dragon’s Eye Monastery, during one of his travels. Unwilling to leave the child alone, and knowing her nature made her ill suited for most homes, he took her to be raised at the monastery. The monastery featured a wide range of students, teachers, and techniques, including other kineticists. This proved to be an ideal environment to hone her abilities and gave Maka an accepting nature and a true love of combat.Though she lacked the ability to push herself as far as other Kineticists, her abilities came more naturally than most, easily combining with her monastic training. Maka’s monastic training taught her to judge herself by her own worth, not in how she stands above or below others. That a loss is as good as a victory if you grow. Lessons that heavily color her outlook on life.

Maka truly loved her home, yet despite that, she long had the urge to leave. For years, she had had dreams about flying with dragons, flying away from the island. Flying away, but never quite leaving. Then one day, something new happened in her dreams; The dragons flew so far away that Maka could no longer see Jalmeray. They kept flying, faster and faster. In what felt like both a lifetime and a heartbeat, the dragons circled the globe, showing Maka things she had never dreamed of. Maka awoke with a start. For the first time, she had a true idea of the scope of the world. Just how far it stretched beyond the monastery, beyond the island. Excitement overtook Maka as she packed her few belongings in preparation for the long, long journey before her.

Maka was able to book passage to Absalom. The city at the Center of the World did not fail to impress. Maka had never seen anything quite like the city and it’s people, nor has she since. But the thing that impressed her most was the food. The monastery served good, but simple food. Nothing that could even compare to the things Maka tasted in Absalom. What little money she had was spent on food on her first day of arrival. She would have had to sleep on the streets had a grateful inn keep not given her a room for the night in thanks for stopping a fight after a blade was pulled. This gave her the idea of using her fighting ability to make money, so she could buy more food. Possibly her most successful idea to date, Maka made a name for herself in tournaments and underground fights and was able to buy almost as much food as she wanted. After a few weeks, her skill with fist and flame brought her to the attention of a group of Pathfinders. They were setting out on an expedition and needed muscle.

Her adventures were not without danger, which made them all the more exciting to Maka. She proved her worth several times and the venture was an overall success. When the group headed back to Absalom, Maka continued with her journey. Along the way, she got in to trouble numerous times for the sake of those in need. She tended to stay longer than she needed when she did so. Enjoying her time with the friends she made and helping to make sure they would be all right after she was gone. Eventually she made her way to Cheliax, a country that did not suit her at all, and was far, far too complicated for her liking.

In Cheliax, she got in to more trouble than ever, now contending with the law as well. Eventually, this lead her to meet a young human named Sullivan Queen. ‘Sully’ was a thief with a heart of gold, working against the corrupt nobility to help the people. Though she didn’t always agree with his methods, she had no doubt about his intent. Unfortunately their antics drew the attention of greater powers. The pair were lead in to a trap from which they were barely able to escape.

Grievously injured, separated from Sully, and hunted by Chelaxian forces, Maka traveled for almost 2 days before collapsing. She only survived thanks to a chance encounter with an old paladin named Korval Helsharn. Korval had been a Hellknight of the Order of the Godclaw before retiring with his wife to live as a simple farmer. Maka could not understand how one of the kindest men she had ever met, someone who literally radiated good, could revere a god like Asmodeus. His philosophy as a member of the Godclaw made Maka’s head ache, but he was still able to teach her a number of things.

When Maka was healed, she set off to find Sully and make sure he was alright. Korval accompanied her, hoping he could help avoid any further trouble with Cheliax. Unfortunately this was not to be, as Sully had been captured in Isger and was to be publicly executed. Combining their abilities, the Monk and Paladin were able to arrange an escape. The plan went off without a hitch up until they got to Sully, who refused to go. A number of political prisoners were also being held at the location, and he had a plan to break everyone out. The amount of subtly and timing required by Sully’s plan was possibly the most daunting challenge of Maka’s life, but the group was able to pull it off, at least mostly. The getaway was less than clean and the group was pursued by Cheliaxian agents.

Though Korval, Maka, and Sully were able to lead the agents away from the other prisoners, they were pursued all the way to the Darkmoon Wood. The group might have been captured had they not stumbled upon a portal leading to the frozen land of Irrisen, far to the north. A portal that unfortunately closed not long after they passed through. Making their way to the town of Waldsby, they discovered a group of adventurers had been the ones to close the portal. The group explained the situation and the quest granted to them by the mysterious black rider. Both groups agreed to help one another, and set out for the capital city of Whitethrone. The terrain was beyond harsh and full of monsters and other dangerous foes. Maka’s ability with fire proved valuable in the frozen country, and her time was more joyous than the rest of her party. After many trials, the group was able to make their way to Whitethrone and eventually the Dancing Hutt of Baba Yaga herself.

The group was able to use the hutt to escape Irrisen, but they were hardly in control of the extraordinarily powerful artifact. Instead of simply taking them to safety, the hutt jumped several times. Unfortunately Maka, who had been outside on the balcony, did not come along for all of those jumps. She found herself stranded on a small island off the coast of Magnimar. Her friends had little to no control of the hutt, and no way of knowing where she was. After waiting for several days, Maka figured her friends couldn’t come and decided to leave for the coast visible in the distance.

With no other ideas, Maka made her way to Magnimar. It is in the City of Monuments where she first heard of Aergoreth. The city was abuzz with tales about the demi-god. How he had saved the town of Sandpoint, revealed and purged corruption from Magnimar, passed the test of the Starstone, defeated a Runelord of legend, founded a new kingdom of Xin Shalast, and countless more true and false tales of bravery and heroics. Maka was, quite simply, enthralled. These were some of the best stories she’d ever heard. More than that, they weren't old tales of some hero that was, they were new tales of a hero walking around. She had to go see for herself. After making some coin and fully satisfying her stomach, Maka set off for her journey. She was confident her friends were alright, were having an amazing adventure, and so she should have one as well.

Maka found plenty of distractions and trouble along the way, but eventually made her way to the kingdom of Xin Shalast. Once there, she made a simple proclamation. She’d heard the stories of Aergoreth and she wanted to fight him. Many scoffed and took offense, and attempted to bar her path or force her to leave. However, she would not be deterred, and continued forward, provoking challenges along the way. Some of these she beat, some she did not, but she continued on nonetheless. Those presenting her challenges constantly questioned her motives, demanding to know why she was there, why she wanted to fight their liege. To Maka’s severe frustration, none would take “What do you mean? Because I want to fight him.” or “What does not being able to beat you have to do with fighting Aergoreth?” as an answer.

Eventually she made her way to Aergoreth’s Keep, easily passing the test of asking nicely at the door to be let in. Once there, she once again made her simple proclamation. To her joy, Aergoreth smiled and agreed, with one stipulation. First, she would have to pass the test of the Starstone. For but a moment Maka bemoaned the distance to Absalam before sprinting away as fast as she could towards her new destination. This provoked a chuckle from Aergoreth before the demi-god sent a servant to help magically transport Maka the huge distance to Absalam.

Maka does not remember much about the test of the Starstone. She has some emotions and memories of the challenges, but can’t focus on them. She remembers using her flames to get across the bottomless pit surrounding the Starstone Cathedral. From there it is a jumbled mess. The next clear memory she has is waking up in a bed in Aergoreth’s keep with a gauntlet on her left arm, which looked like fire given form, asking her how long she planned on sleeping. She only knows two things for certain; she only partially passed the test and she didn’t fight a single thing. She doesn’t know how she knows that, but she knows she’s angry about it. Her gauntlet, Agni, is a spirit of fire meant to help prepare her to take the true test of the Starstone one day.

Though in her mind she did not complete their agreement, Aergoreth agreed to fight Maka, but he had another stipulation. He would only fight back as hard as Maka pushed him. Maka stood no chance in their fight, and it’s one of her fondest memories. Maka has loyally served Aergoreth since that day. She views him like a loyal dog views her owner. Similarly, she loves to fight him as a dog loves to play. She works everyday to reach a point where Aergoreth has to try back against her.

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Character Sheet and Class Abilities have been updated. Let me know if you have any questions about Kineticist. Maka's archetype gives up burn so it runs more straight forward than most builds. Still working on the backstory but plenty of ideas so far. Definitely going to have Aergoreth be the god for Maka's paladin levels. Can we work up personal relationships with Aergoreth? Currently imagining Maka treating him far friendlier and informal than most. Maka would consider him to just be the bestest thing ever, and would probably want to fight like a dog wants to play. This is how I picture those fights. Except instead of an angsty robot it's a dragon lady laughing like a child trying chocolate milk for the first time.


Most likely upgrading Legendary Item for the Lv3 mythic ability. The original concept was Bracers of Armor but it looks like those don't normally exist with the Automatic Bonus Progression rules. Would a legendary minor artifact be enough to replicate those or should I come up with a new item? Cool either way, just going to make it intelligent and base the "character" on the form so want to make sure I have my ducks in a row.


Still interesting in this game. I'll need to level Maka up and make some changes to fit the campaign requirements, but the character sheet currently in the profile gives you the overall idea of the build and character for now. Kineticist gestalted with Monk(with a Pally dip), Maka is tied to dragons and fire, as would her crystal. Maka reflects her element well; Powerful, brash, quick to anger, but also quick to forgive, warm, and pure. The ruby gem seems a natural fit.


Well this sounds interesting. Maka's theme is dragon's and fire, and could certainly be tooled for a crystal theme. The details could shift depending on how the overall theme and setting plays out. The idea would be your classic fire themes though. Maka is friendly and brash, quick to anger and quick to forgive, and always up for a good fight.


Merry Christmas and good luck!


Blink Vala wrote:

But is it the nice list or the naughty list?

I did once have my party find a fat guy in red unconcious in a cell. Or maybe it was dead? I am quite mean. And speaking of mean, my party looted the sack he was carrying. It seemed to be a modified sack of holding with an unlimited number of random wooden toys...

Did the party put it together?


Maka's background has been updated and character sheet has been cleaned up.


Auric Lightmane wrote:

Thanks! He came together pretty well. He can be reasonably effective in combat himself but his version a nova is to crank the whole party up.

** spoiler omitted **

Hahaha, to go even further beyond!


Auric Lightmane wrote:

@Hope- that’s a neat idea but don’t you have to be tier 3 to take beyond morality?

@Maka- do you mean faithful wanderer? I tried looking up hidden wanderer and couldn’t find anything. Sounds like an interesting concept though.

Yes, Faithful Wanderer is the one. The archetype is also very fitting for Apsu. Wandering around to give help where it's needed is even one of his Paladin oaths. Apsu has interesting oaths and all of them already applied to Maka, so it serves as another way to tie Maka to her god. I'd link them but looks like the Archives are currently down. Apsu also specifically doesn't have Oracles because he doesn't want to curse a mortal just to give them power. Kind of toying with the idea that Maka is a bit of a take on that. Given draconic abilities and placed in a living situation that allowed her to properly harness her abilities. Hence the lack of burn and gestalt. She is then called in to action when she is ready.

*Edit*

I really like the synergy of Auric's build. Aura's and Performance is a hell of a buff combo. That is a useful and handsome swiss army knife for a party to have.


Auric Lightmane wrote:
Doomed Hero wrote:
she's Desna's first (and only) Paladin.

I thought only LG, NG, and LN deities had paladins? (They’re the only ones who have Paladin codes of conduct listed)

@Maka- I’ve never noticed overwhelming soul before, I really like the combo of that and scaled fist for a viable bender build! (I don’t really get the pally levels though, is that just for Cha to saves?)

The Pally levels are to represent some time fighting in the Crusade. Still tooling that aspect of the background around, but I imagine Maka has been having fun fighting demons for a little bit off to the side somewhere. Hidden Wanderer has some nice matching fluff for a traveling monk and tones down some of the more overt Paladin abilities. It also helps shore up her otherwise pathetic Will save and provides a healing ability. Even if it's only 1d6 a handful of times per day, as a player I think healing is one of the most miraculous things in the game and love having the ability. The build certainly doesn't require the Paladin levels but since she was Lawful Good with ties to Apsu anyway, Paladin wasn't out of the way.

@Samnell, Docs should be public now, sorry about that. Also sorry for how long they are but the build has a LOT of class abilities.


Crunch probably needs another pass and I'm still working on the background, but Maka is by and large good.

UC Monk(Scaled Fist/Invested Regent) 5 / Paladin(Faithful Wanderer) 2 --- Kineticist(Overwhelming Soul) 7 --- Guardian

Maka is an aasimar with dragonic blood running through her veins. Her Kineticist abilities allow her to deal a lot of damage at range. Her Monk, Paladin, and Guardian Mythic abilities ensure she is no glass canon, and gives her plenty of melee options as well.

Apsu has guided Maka to Kenabres to help deal with the threat of the world wound. A challenge that puts a smile on Maka's face. With Maka at your side, things will never be too dark, figuratively and literally.

Appearance:
Tall, well-muscled build with tan skin and black hair. Notable draconic features, including: glowing, emerald eyes, elongated canines, and scaled patches of skin. Sides of head are shaved, remaining hair tied back. Numerous tattoos, dresses in monastic clothing. Maka initially makes for an imposing impression but this fades as soon as she smiles, which is frequently.

Background:
Maka was raised in the Dragon’s Eye Monastery on the island nation of Jalmeray. A cosmopolitan school with no focus on a particular style, but instead on helping students develop their own. It featured a wide range of students, teachers, and techniques, giving Maka an accepting nature and a true love of combat.

Maka’s draconic nature and ability with fire developed at a young age. Unsurprisingly, the monastery was an ideal environment to hone her abilities. Though she lacked the ability to push herself as far as other Kineticists, her abilities came more naturally than most, easily combining with her monastic training.

Maka truly loved her home, yet despite that, she long had the urge to leave. For as long as she could remember, she had had dreams about flying with dragons, flying away from the island. Flying away, but never quite leaving. Then one day, something new happened in her dreams; The dragons flew so far away that Maka could no longer see Jalmeray. They kept flying, faster and faster. In what felt like both a lifetime and a heartbeat, Maka found herself near the other side of the world. She floated there, staring at a wound ripped in to the earth, in to reality itself. Monstrous horrors pouring from it like pus from an infection.

Maka awoke, not with a start, but with a calm sense of relief. She knew her task, why she needed to leave. There was something wrong out there, and she needed to help fix it. More than that, for the first time, she had a true idea of the scope of the world. Excitement began to overtake the sense of calm as Maka began to pack her few belongings in preparation for the long, long journey before him.

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Grand Lodge

Hey everybody! Gm'ing an upcoming game, and I gave a player who has this strategy set up: take out a scythe with anchoring weapon, use hamatula strike to impale/grapple, trip, pull out main damage weapon, melee them to shreds as they are helplessly prone and anchored. I think this will be a beautiful strategy, and I am all for creative players. However, I do feel that the opponent should have some method of escape, as a DC 30 strength check is a bit much. What are ways an opponent might escape this strategy?

Grand Lodge

Would love to find a group. Just wanna game!!