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I recently made a homebrew class (the Shadow Lord found HERE) and i got some helpful advice from some of the people on this board.

I did however notice, or fail to notice if i am mistaken, that there is not a current thread for submitting homebrew classes for peer review so i wanted to start one. I am new to this so i don't dare believe i am qualified so i really come to the community begging that they sustain this thread. Whether you choose to put your homebrew classes here or not i would ask that everyone do their best to help others refine their ideas.

I found that i enjoy attempting to make classes but i wanted to see what the rest of the community came up with.

Remember to be nice.

Hello anyone willing to give this thread a look. I am new to this community but i have played P&P games for a few years now and recently got into pathfinder. I decided to take a crack at class design recently and what follows is the result. I would enjoy any feedback balance suggestions and criticism but as previously stated i am new to this and it is my first attempt please go easy on me.

I take no credit for the systems/mechanics only for the manner in which they are combined to form this class.

TABLE: SHADOW LORD
Level Base Attack Bonus Fort Save Ref Save Will Save Special
1st +0 +0 +0 +2 Force of personality, Violent Shadow
2nd +1 +0 +0 +3 Constrict, Touch of Shadows,
3rd +2 +1 +1 +3 Shadow of the Master, Shadow Talent
4th +3 +1 +1 +4 Trip, Darkvision
5th +3 +1 +1 +4 Clinging Darkness, +1 CMB with shadow
6th +4 +2 +2 +5 Pull, Shadow Talent
7th +5 +2 +2 +5 Twin Shadow, Grasp of Shadows
8th +6/+1 +2 +2 +6 Strangle, Well of Shadows
9th +6/+1 +3 +3 +6 Shadow Talent
10th +7/+2 +3 +3 +7 Cloud of Shadows, +2 CMB with shadow
11th +8/+3 +3 +3 +7 Shifting Shadows
12th +9/+4 +4 +4 +8 Shade Triplets, Shadow Talent,
13th +9/+4 +4 +4 +8 Piercing Shadows
14th +10/+5 +4 +4 +9 Grip of Shades
15th +11/+6/+1 +5 +5 +9 Cloud of Shades, Shadow Talent, +3 CMB with shadow
16th +12/+7/+2 +5 +5 +10 Black Hole
17th +12/+7/+2 +5 +5 +10 Shadow Brood
18th +13/+8/+3 +6 +6 +11 Shadow Talent

19th +14/+9/+4 +6 +6 +11 Blind Sense
20th +15/+10/+5 +6 +6 +12 Emissary of the Plane of Shadows, +4 CMB with shadow

Force of Personality (Ex)
At 1st level, a Shadow Lord gains the ability to use her Charisma modifier in place of her Strength modifier when making combat maneuver checks with her shadow.

Violent Shadow (Su)
At 1st level, a Shadow Lord gains the ability to extend her shadow and use it as a weapon. This functions as a primary natural attack with a reach of 5 feet. The shadow deals 1d6 points of damage (1d4 for a Small Shadow Lord) plus the Shadow Lord’s Charisma modifier. In addition, whenever the shadow strikes a foe, the Shadow Lord can attempt to grapple that foe with her shadow as a free action* without provoking an attack of opportunity. When a Shadow Lord grapples a foe in this way, she does not gain the grappled condition. (For clarity’s sake, since it is the shadow doing the grappling, the Shadow Lord need not move the grappled creature into an adjacent space. The shadow may not be attacked as a separate person.)

At 4th level and every four levels thereafter, a Shadow Lord’s shadow adds 5 feet to its reach, to a maximum of 30 feet at 20th level. In addition, at 5th level and every five levels thereafter, a Shadow Lord gains a +1 incite bonus to CMB checks made with her shadow.
In addition, a Shadow Lord further improves her ability to control her shadow as she progresses in level, gaining the following abilities:
Constrict (Ex): At 2nd level, when the Shadow Lord’s shadow successfully grapples an opponent or maintains a grapple, it can constrict her victim as a free action*, dealing damage equal to that of its attack. There is no size limit on this ability.

Trip (Ex): At 4th level, a Shadow Lord who successfully strikes a foe with her shadow can attempt a combat maneuver check to trip the creature as a swift action*.

Pull (Ex): At 6th level, a Shadow Lord who successfully strikes a foe with her shadow can attempt a combat maneuver check to pull the creature 5 feet closer to her as a swift action*.

Strangle (Ex): At 8th level, when the Shadow Lord’s shadow is grappling with an opponent, that creature is considered strangled, and cannot speak or cast spells with verbal components.

Touch of Shadows (Su)
At 2nd level, a Shadow Lord gains the ability to pull energy from the Plane of Shadow to damage her foes with a touch. Each day she can use this ability a number of times equal to 1/2 her Shadow Lord level + her Charisma modifier. As a touch attack, a Shadow Lord can cause 1d6 points of damage for every two Shadow Lord levels she possesses. Using this ability is a standard action that does not provoke attacks of opportunity.

Shadow of the Master (Su)
At 3rd level, as a Shadow Lord grows in power her shadow expands and deepens as the power of the Plane of Shadows flows through her. Her shadow encompasses a 10’ radius around her. Any enemy within this area takes a -4 penalty to CMD. This ability functions only while the Shadow Lord remains conscious, not if she is unconscious or dead (While the penalty ends there is still an area of increased darkness around the Shadow Lord when unconscious or dead).

Shadow Talents
At 3rd level, and every three levels thereafter, a Shadow Lord gains a Shadow Talent. Shadow Talents develop as a Shadow Lord grows in power. They often modify existing Shadow Lord abilities, however some may provide passive bonuses as a Shadow Lord grows closer to the Plane of Shadow. Unless otherwise noted a Shadow Lord may only select a particular talent once. If an ability granted by a talent has a save the DC of this save is equal to 10 + 1/2 the Shadow Lord’s level + the Shadow Lord’s Charisma modifier unless otherwise stated. An ability marked with * may not be used with any other ability marked with *.

Shadows within Shadows (Su): A Shadow Lord who chooses this talent may use her shadows granted by Violent Shadow to deliver her Touch of Shadows ability.

Crushing Shadow (Ex): A Shadow Lord who chooses this talent increases the damage dice of her shadows by 1 step. (For example 1d6 increases to 1d8) A Shadow Lord may select this Talent up to four times, however, she may not take this talent a second time until 5th level, a third time until 10th level, or a fourth time until 15th level.

Shadow Step (Su): A Shadow Lord who chooses this talent may, as a standard action, instantly transfer her position to a free square adjacent to a creature one of her shadows is grappling. At 12th level she may use this ability as a move action.

Sickening touch (Ex)*: A Shadow Lord who chooses this talent may attempt to apply the sickened condition to a creature affected by her Touch of Shadows ability for 1 round per Shadow Lord level, fortitude save negates the sickened condition.

Ghostly touch (Ex)*: A Shadow Lord who chooses this talent may attempt to apply the shaken condition to a creature affected by her Touch of Shadows ability for 1 round per Shadow Lord level, will save negates the shaken condition.

Weapon Training: A Shadow Lord that selects this talent gains Weapon Focus as a bonus feat.

Binding Shadows (Ex): A Shadow Lord that selects this talent may attempt to tie up a creature he has pinned with his shadows. This ability uses the targets own shadow for the bindings and lasts for 1 round per Shadow Lord level or until the creature breaks free.

Throw (Ex): A Shadow Lord that selects this talent may throw a creature she trips with her shadow. This ability works like the Ki Throw ability.

Shadow of Fear (Ex): When a Shadow Lord with this talent deals damage from constrict the creature must make a will save or become shaken.

Grip of the Master (Ex): A Shadow Lord who selects this talent has the DC to break her grapples increased by +4.

Advanced Shadow Talents
At 9th level a Shadow Lord may select a Talent from the following list whenever she selects a new Shadow Talent.

Engulfing Shadow (Ex): A Shadow Lord who selects this talent may, as a standard action, attempt to engulf a creature she has grappled with her shadow. To succeed, she must a make a grapple check with a -5 penalty against the creatures CMD with a +5 bonus. If she succeeds, until the creature is dead or the grapple is broken, whenever the Shadow Lord maintains this grapple she may choose to have her constrict ability deal 1d4 constitution damage instead of its normal damage. In order to select this talent, the Shadow Lord must have the Grip of the Master talent.

Shades touch (Ex)*: A Shadow Lord who chooses this talent may attempt to apply the nauseated condition to a creature affected by her Touch of Shadows ability for 1 round per three Shadow Lord levels, fortitude save negates the nauseated condition. A Shadow Lord must have the sickening touch talent to select this talent.

Ghastly touch (Ex)*: A Shadow Lord who chooses this talent may attempt to apply the frightened condition to a creature affected by her Touch of Shadows ability for 1 round per two Shadow Lord levels, will save negates the frightened condition. A Shadow Lord must have the Ghostly Touch talent to select this talent.

Brutal Shadows (Ex): A Shadow Lord who chooses this talent may attempt to break the neck of a pinned or helpless target by making an attack roll with a -5 penalty, as a standard action. If successful this a deals 2d6 strength or Dexterity damage to the target if the selected stat reaches zero any remaining damage is dealt to constitution. A creature that is immune to critical hits or that has no discernible head and neck is immune to the effects of this ability. A Shadow Lord must have the Binding Shadows talent to select this talent.

Scarlet Touch (Ex)*: A Shadow Lord who chooses this talent can make recipients of her Touch of Shadows ability bleed for 1 damage per damage dice of the attack. Bleeding creatures take that amount of damage every round at the start of each of their turns. The bleeding can be stopped by a DC 15 Heal check or the application of any effect that heals hit point damage. Bleeding damage from this ability does not stack with itself. Bleeding damage bypasses any damage reduction the creature might possess.

Enhanced Throw (Ex): A Shadow Lord that selects this talent may throw a creature she trips with her shadow. This ability works like the Enhanced Ki Throw feat. To take this talent a Shadow Lord must first have the Throw talent.

Crushing Silence (Ex): If a Shadow Lord has this talent creatures she grapples may not make any audible vocalization.

Shadow Door (Su): As a standard action a Shadow Lord may immediately transfer a willing subject to a creature she is grappling. In order to select this talent a Shadow Lord must have the Shadow Step talent.

Master Shadow Talents
At 16th level a Shadow Lord may select a talent from the following list when she selects a new Shadow Talent.

Taken in the Night (Su): A Shadow Lord with this talent may instantly transfer a creature that is grappled by one of her shadows to an unoccupied square that she threatens as a standard action. In order to take this talent a Shadow Lord must first have the Shadow Door talent.

Crush the Windpipe (Ex): A creature grappled by a Shadow Lord with this talent begins to choke. After a creature grappled by the Shadow Lord has been grappled for a number of rounds more than its constitution it begins to suffocate. On the target's next turn, he falls unconscious and is reduced to 0 hit points. One round later, the target drops to –1 hit points and is dying. One round after that, the target dies. Each round, the target can delay that round's effects from occurring by making a successful Fortitude save, but the effect continues until the grapple is broken. In order to take this talent a Shadow Lord must first have the Crushing Silence talent.

Shadow Sickness (Ex): When a Shadow Lord with this talent applies the nauseated condition to a creature she may select a disease. The affected creature must make a fortitude save against the disease or contract the chosen disease. In order to take this talent a Shadow Lord must first have the Shades Touch talent.

Drawn and Quartered (Ex): As a full round action a Shadow Lord with this talent can bring all her force to bear on a single creature. The creature must be grappled by all for shadows the Shadow Lord has. The targeted creature is torn to pieces by the shadows and dies instantly. The creature may immediately make a strength check to pull free of the grapple before it is torn apart, if it succeeds the creature takes 1d8 constitution damage instead. A Creature with more than 120 hit points is unaffected by this ability. In order to take this talent a Shadow Lord must first have the Engulfing Shadows talent and the Brutal Shadows talent.

Shadows in the Blood (Ex): A Shadow Lord with this talent is the ultimate puppeteer with her shadows. As a standard action the Shadow Lord may force her shadows into the body of a creature through its wounds. The Target must be bleeding and must be bound by Binding Shadows. If the target fails a will save against the Shadow Lords grapple check with a -5 penalty the creature becomes the Shadow Lords thrall. While she has a thrall a Shadow Lord may not perform combat maneuvers with her shadows and must maintain this affect as her swift action each round. The creature receives a new save once a day. In order to take this talent a Shadow Lord must first have the Scarlet Shadow talent and the Ghastly Touch talent.

Darkvision (Ex)
At 4th level, a Shadow Lord gains darkvision up to 30 feet. At 9th level, you gain darkvision 60 feet. If you already possess darkvision, its range is increased by these amounts.

Clinging Darkness (Ex)
At 5th level, a Shadow Lord gains the Improved Grapple feat regardless of whether not she qualifies for it.

Twin Shadows (Ex)
At 7th level, a Shadow Lord gains the ability to split her shadow. This allows her to grapple multiple targets so long as she is no more than the reach of her Violent Shadow ability away from any of the creatures grappled. If she moves outside this range the creature or creatures she is too far away from immediately lose the grappled condition.
This ability allows all grapples being performed by her shadows to be maintained simultaneously (i.e. Ellera, a 7th level Shadow Lord has 2 creatures grappled at the beginning of her turn since she has Greater Grapple she may roll to maintain both and perform any actions granted as a result of maintaining a grapple all as a part of her move action). This also allows the different shadows to assist in each other’s grapples, adding a stacking +2 bonus to the CMB to perform or the DC to break a grapple performed in this manner. This bonus increases for each shadow that assists. The decision of how many shadows to use must be made before the grapple attempt is made. Assisting yourself in this manner does not modify the damage dealt by an initial attack, constrict, or any damage caused by an action granted as a result of a grapple however it may increase the DC of any save as a result of such actions (GM discretion).

Grasp of Shadows (Ex)
At 7th level, a Shadow Lord gains the Greater Grapple feat regardless of whether or not she qualifies for this feat.

Well of Shadows (Su)
At 8th level, a Shadow Lord’s Shadow of the Master begins to resemble the bizarre realm from which she draws her power. Her inky aura now makes her form seem to shift and sway like the shadows cast by a guttering candle. She has concealment so long as she is conscious, and the 10’ radius granted by Shadow of the Master is now treated as an area of dim light.

Cloud of Shadows (Su)
At 10th level, a Shadow Lord’s Shadow of the Master feels alien to creatures not of the Plane of Shadows. Any foe entering a Shadow Lord’s Shadow of the Master must make a fortitude save, DC 10 + ½ Shadow Lord level + CHA modifier, or be sickened for 1 round. Creatures immune to the sickened condition are immune to this ability.

Shifting Shadows (Ex)
At 11th level, a Shadow Lord may choose to have her shadow deal bludgeoning, slashing, or piercing damage. This choice must be made prior to the attack roll.

Shade Triplets (Ex)
At 12th level, a Shadow Lord has learned to split her shadow in three allowing her to grapple up to three creatures simultaneously. All restrictions outlined in the Twin Shadows ability still apply.

Piercing Shadows (Ex)
At 13th level, a Shadow Lord’s shadow is treated as a +5 magic weapon for the purposes of overcoming damage resistance.

Grip of Shades (Ex)
At 14th level, a Shadow Lord gains another +2 bonus on grapple checks made with her shadows. This stacks with the Improved Grapple and Greater Grapple feats. She may now maintain grapples as a swift action.

Cloud of Shades (Su)
At 15th level, a Shadow Lord’s Shadow of the Master is nearly indistinguishable from the Plane of Shadows. Any enemy entering it must cope with the shocking change in environment, and must make a fortitude save, DC 10 + ½ Shadow Lord level + CHA modifier, or be nauseated for 1 round. Creatures immune to the nauseated condition are immune to this ability.

Black Hole (Ex)
At 16th level, a Shadow Lord’s Shadow of the Master hungers for the creatures of other planes. Any foe within her Shadow of the Master treats it as difficult terrain. This area is now treated as an area of darkness.

Shadow Brood (Su)
At 17th level, a Shadow Lord has learned to split her shadow in four, allowing her to grapple up to four creatures simultaneously. All restrictions outlined in the Twin Shadows ability still apply.

Blind Sense (Ex)
At 19th level, a Shadow Lord gains Blind Sense up to 30 feet.

Emissary of the Plane of Shadows (Ex)
At 20th level, a Shadow Lord becomes an embodiment of the plane from which her power is drawn. Her Shadow of the Master ability’s radius increases to 20’, and any creature pinned by her shadows inside it must make a fortitude save, DC 15 + ½ Shadow Lord level + CHA modifier, or be immediately pulled into the Plane of Shadows. In addition, the Shadow Lord ceases to age at this point and no longer takes penalties from age. Though she may still gain bonuses from age, she is now immune to age effects. Finally, she draws all sustenance she requires from the Plane of Shadows and no longer needs to eat, drink, or sleep.

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