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Ok so I'm hoping I can get some constructive criticism on a homebrew race i have been working on. The idea behind it was to have a playable race that was dragon like in flavor. It's around 20 RP so its higher up on the playable level but I think it has enough to it to make it enjoyable without game breaking. what do you think?
+2 strength, +2 Constitution, +2 Charisma
Type: Humanoid (human, dragonblooded)
Size: Medium Size
Land Base Speed: 30 ft.
● Low-light Vision
● Draconic Aspect (Su.): For a number of times per day equal to ½ your Character Level (with 1 being the minimum) you can acquire one of the following traits as a swift action that lasts for an hour or until it is dismissed as a free action. You can acquire only one trait at a time and must dismiss the previous trait before selecting a new one.
○ Breath of the Dragon: Can use a Breath Weapon as a standard action, dealing 1d6 damage. The type of breath weapon is determined by the type of dragon chosen at creation. A successful reflex save (DC equals 10 + 1/2 your character level + your Con modifier) halves this damage. You must wait 1d4 rounds to use this ability again
○ Mind of the Dragon: Your eyes become more draconic allowing you the ability of Darkvision 60 ft. as well as a +2 bonus to Perception checks.
○ Claws of the Dragon: Channeling your draconic inheritance your fingers extend into sharp claws that can be used as primary natural attacks. Each claw deals 1d6 damage plus your strength modifier and count as a magical weapon for the purpose of damage reduction.
○ Wings of the Dragon: you grow a pair of Dragon wings allowing you a fly speed of your base land speed. You can’t use this ability if you are in heavy armor or carrying a heavy load.
○ Heart of the Dragon: Gain a natural armor bonus of +2, and immunity to magical sleep effects, paralysis, and to an energy type related to the type of dragon chosen at creation

Ok so I'm hoping I can get some constructive criticism on a homebrew race i have been working on. The idea behind it was to have a playable race that was dragon like in flavor. It's around 20 RP so its higher up on the playable level but I think it has enough to it to make it enjoyable without game breaking. what do you think?
+2 strength, +2 Constitution, +2 Charisma
Type: Humanoid (human, dragonblooded)
Size: Medium Size
Land Base Speed: 30 ft.
● Low-light Vision
● Draconic Aspect (Su.): For a number of times per day equal to ½ your Character Level (with 1 being the minimum) you can acquire one of the following traits as a swift action that lasts for an hour or until it is dismissed as a free action. You can acquire only one trait at a time and must dismiss the previous trait before selecting a new one.
○ Breath of the Dragon: Can use a Breath Weapon as a standard action, dealing 1d6 damage. The type of breath weapon is determined by the type of dragon chosen at creation. A successful reflex save (DC equals 10 + 1/2 your character level + your Con modifier) halves this damage. You must wait 1d4 rounds to use this ability again
○ Mind of the Dragon: Your eyes become more draconic allowing you the ability of Darkvision 60 ft. as well as a +2 bonus to Perception checks.
○ Claws of the Dragon: Channeling your draconic inheritance your fingers extend into sharp claws that can be used as primary natural attacks. Each claw deals 1d6 damage plus your strength modifier and count as a magical weapon for the purpose of damage reduction.
○ Wings of the Dragon: you grow a pair of Dragon wings allowing you a fly speed of your base land speed. You can’t use this ability if you are in heavy armor or carrying a heavy load.
○ Heart of the Dragon: Gain a natural armor bonus of +2, and immunity to magical sleep effects, paralysis, and to an energy type related to the type of dragon chosen at creation

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