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I'd be down for it. I'd probably add fighter (archer) as the other class.

I'll make the trait and feat selections if I am selected.

I should probably check in.

Is there any updates I need to make to my character regarding creation?

Dragon Master here

@Doomed - Sorry about that. Great minds think alike, I guess.

@Red Velvet - Awesome, thanks. Is the story ok? or should I tone it down, making him more normal. Anything I should change to increase his chances of getting in?

How prevalent are the monsters? Are monsters a relatively frequent menace to the folk of this realm (thus opening the possibility of a profession being a monster hunter"? or is it a rare event, but a growing problem?

Edit: changed a bit of crunch and slightly edited backstory. Now uses composite longbows and he is just a normal hunter, rather than monster hunter, at the start of the story.

Done.

Joran is an aspiring archaeologist and Pathfinder, here to investigate the Osirion ruins as a scholar. He chose this assignment as throughout his training, he has been fascinated by the old tombs and secret treasures that Osirion holds. He heard about the lottery through one of his Osirion contacts and he is jumping at the chance, even taking official leave from the Pathfinder society to do so.

Joran is tall and lanky, with a light stubble on his face and blonde hair (He looks like the avatar). He wears loose fitting clothing made for exploring wherever he is sent, be it cold or heat. A leather, wide brimmed hat shields his head. A buckler is strapped to his left forearm and a whip with small razors is attached at his hip.

Joran specializes in trapfinding and knowledge, but he has some magical talents and is useful in tripping or disarming opponents.

Ptolmaeus- Why not go dwarf? with 17/14/16/13/12/5 or 17/16/14/11/12/5 or something like that. You'd be close to the other build, plus darkvision, dwarven waraxes, and hardy. And Saltbeard is close to a viking/bargeman esque character

Simple, straight forward, to the point. I like it.

Thanks. I figured he would be a good fit. Anything else you'd like me to add or work on to improve his chances? Also, could we get more information on the town? It would help in building backstories.

I went ahead and made an alias for him. I did change a couple things, and I added a feat progression.