Jaden's page

Ok two weeks and campaign's gone nowhere.

"If it were a lie, would the one who stopped them not simply take up beating him themselves?"

"There is a lifer name Talent. He says that there is a secret way out of the mines, passed down from his ancestors. He will share it if someone stops Kana-Koa and his thugs from assaulting him daily"

The tall young man known only as Jaden is imposing to look at. in simple clothing, his hands and feet wrapped in cloth, he somehow manages to seem strong, his pwerfully built body notable despite the poor nutrition.

A hard worker one would at first think that he has completely given up on any other life, until catching a glimpse of the fire in his eyes. Beneath the calm, almost placid exterior lies a brewing storm that has been building for a very long time.

One that seeks release.

One that will not be denied.

Any feedback or all good?

Here's my monk, just need to pick traits and add background I think