Hey! I just stumbled across your adventure on itch.io and I've been reading through it. It looks so well done!
I love the world you've built, it feels really compelling and I love the aesthetics of it. My party is currently playing through the Abomination Vaults, and while they seem to be enjoying it, I as the GM am starting to get a little board with it due to my own personal inability to really get into the characters. The majority of which feel a little flat and don't spark my inspiration.
All of the character descriptions you have in this adventure are clicking with my brain in a way that sparks way more ideas and interest than Abom Vaults.
This is all personal opinion, and is probably highly influenced by the fact that I'm new to GMing and find the scope and layout of the Abom Vaults AP to be daunting and hard to wrap my head around. (Too many over arching details that span multiple floors and the requirement of reading and prepping at least three floors at a time just in case players happen to take a random staircase taxes my brain. Again, personal preferences and my own limited abilities.)
The way you have this adventure laid out is way closer to what I was looking for as an adventure that's easy to digest and run as an inexperienced GM, while also just actually looking more interesting in general. I can't wait to see the rest of this AP!
Thank you a ton for providing this to the community.