| Guppy7 |
Archmage_Atrus wrote:
The problem with your descriptions for me is you're not describing a place - except, arguably (maybe?) the first one - you're describing a thing inside of that place. I'm not sure I'd let either of the latter two fly, but I might give you the first "complete but vague" description, unless there's more than one such location in the world.
That was exactly my intention with the descriptions. The second was meant to describe a small part of the place, though not necessarily a specific thing inside the place. The last one only describes the altar and the question sort of becomes "what is the difference between a place and a thing?".
Your travelogue example seems like a good guideline. Perhaps a reliable description is a description from somebody who has actually been there, in your case the author of the book.
The distinction between place and thing seems arbitrary though. Mobility may be a factor. Or maybe size?