Overall, I like it. Personally, I would have liked to see a bit more attention drawn to a few details; they really seem like his more interesting parts:
- He still wears his cleric's outfit and prayer beads, and he is troubled by some guilt. He destroys to assuage that guilt, to prove he's no more a monster than anyone else who's gone through what he has.
- He is an assassin and will personally stalk victims to learn best how to destroy them. Most other main villains use lackeys or spells for that. But he goes himself, if some pure and virtuous hero catches his attention.
