Hello, here is my item I posted. It was my first time ever trying out for RPG superstar and was wondering if I could have my item critiqued. I would like to know what I got wrong so I can do better in the future.
Spool of Adamantine Thread
Aura moderate transmutation; CL 3 rd
Slot ---; Price 840 gp; Weight ---
Description
This wooden spool is wound tightly by a shimmering prismatic thread of adamantine. Written on the spool is a command word that once spoken, followed by the name of a broken piece of gear, creates a needle of pure light at the end of the thread.
The needle is only able to pierce armor, a shield, or a weapon (one-handed, two-handed) with the broken status and repairs it just as the spell make whole except that the adamantine thread not only repairs the broken item back to full hit points but also by weaving the thread into the layers of the item, increases it's base hardness by 10. These effects are permanent but do not stack and will not increase the hardness of items already made of adamantine or add damage reduction gained from normal adamantine arms and armor.
Upon construction, there is enough thread created to repair one item taking 1 hour of uninterrupted sewing to complete the weaving process. At the end of this time, the needle disappears along with any left over thread leaving a empty wooden spool.
Construction
Requirements Craft Wondrous Item, make whole, Creator must have 2 ranks in the Craft (Clothing) Skill; Cost 420 gp