So I was trying to cobble together a wondrous item for the RPG Superstar contest and instead I cobbled together the first chapter of a story. :-/
It's 4800 words (roughly 12 pages long) and it needs a read-through by an objective 3rd party. Hence why I'm coming to you all! :-) I haven't posted (much) on here lately so most won't know me personally, which is exactly what I need: unbiased objectivity.
I am looking for:
1.) Someone who regularly reads fantasy novels (at least 1 every few months or so).
2.) Someone who would care to read my 12 pages (prolly take you about 10 mins).
I am NOT looking for an in-depth critique or grammatical nitpicking (unless you really want to). All I want to know is if you picked this book up in a doctor's office and read these first 12 pages, would you go to the bookstore/library to read the full thing?
If you'd like to help me out, please email me at royanderson at gmail dot com and I'll send you it.
Thanks!
