Very small Nitpick

[Tharen the Damned]

What I have seen of Hawks Hollow looks very good. I especially like the map I can see in the daily Blog.

But here my Nitpick: shouldn't the paper Mill stand beside the river?
Then it could use the waterpower for milling the paper (pressing it etc.)

[Adam Daigle]

If the river doesn't flow fast enough there wouldn't be much power generated to run a mill.

Also, having grown up near a paper mill, I would want it far from homes and the river. Those things are stinky!