In the thread "Round 2 Assignment Questions--Taking Your Input", Vic made the following suggestion:
Vic Wertz wrote:
Which leads to this unsolicited advice from me: regardless of the length we assign, prospective authors should plan to make sure that the audience has fallen in love with the submission before they've read 100 words.
Apparently, many of the RPG Superstar Top 32 didn't read this advice. Over half of the country entries open up with something droll like government, history, or geography. (And if geography is the most compelling thing about your entry, you have other problems.) The excellent entries opened up with either a teaser or a description section that summarized the coolness of their country.
So, to the 16 of you that make it to the next round, please heed Vic's advice. If you're not leading with your best material, you're going to lose to others who do. Lazy judges like me won't even bother to finish reading your entry if you don't grab us in the first few lines.