GM Rutseg wrote:
Zinkio@
Favoured class: I guess monk: +1 hp, +1 skill, the third I don't know how did you spend it
Unnarmed strike: You might want to add that your first hit in a round deals x1.5 Str, so +7 damage instead of +5
Flurry of blows: shouldn't it be +5/+5 instead? There is a -2 penalty when using two hands that also applies to the flurry
Stunning fist: You have 3/day instead of 2/day
Evasion: You haven't listed it among your abilities
Rage: I would love to see how do you explain being raised in a Barbarian (Berseker of the society) and Urban (Urban archetype) society at same time xD (I will not go berserker mode here, but I was amazed by the contradiction).
Intimidate: Can you give a source for the "oni mask" I can't find it, and I want to know what kind of bonus it provides. If it is competence bonus it does not stack with the ioun one.
Perception: Can you explain your +11, I get to +10 (3 ranks, 3 class, 3 ability, +1 ioun). Might be the missing favoured class bonus?
For the rest, I am ok with it, but perhaps you want to explicitly state somewhere your abilities and archetypes decisions, as tieflings are quite complex, and even you can go scan all possible configurations it really helps say you have chosen "Scaled Skin" and similar things. Also if you can provide links to the SRD it even makes the task easier. I would like also to see skills more explained when you have more than the standard racial bonus, like archetype abilities or objects giving bonus (ioun stones).
Thanks :)
I've looked at my character and updated it.
-Favored Class : monk +2 Skill, +1 HP
-Unarmed Strike : I must be in Dragon Style (a swift action only in combat) to apply 1-1/2 my strength on my first attack of the round. So I prefer not including it on my sheet.
-Furry of Blow : The monk uses its level to calculate its BAB when flurrying.
So when flurrying BAB +1 from Barbarian +3 from Monk +1 from Weapon Focus or masterwork item -2 from two weapon fighting +4 from Strength bonus = +7 and not +5
-Stunning Fist : you're right it's 3/day I upgraged it.
-Evasion : I forgot it, I've added it
-Rage : Urban Barbarian is an archetype of the Barbarian class and still a barbarian in all but name. So it qualify for
Berserker of the Society
-Intimidate : "Oni mask" is a
masterwork tool for the intimidate skill. It gave a +2 circumstance bonus to intimidate.
Quote:
It grants a +2 circumstance bonus on a related skill check (if any). The bonuses provided by multiple masterwork items do not stack.
-Perception : I've forgot to add the skill point bonus from favored class to perception.
For the rest I will try my best :)
