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Mayr wrote:

'There are 40 million sheep in New Zealand and they're all Pissed Off!'

Now that's a movie I have to see. There were a couple of others mentioned that I'm glad to be reminded of: Ghoulies, I'd forgotten about that; and Killer Klowns, I love those costumes. And I'm interested in the Killer Tomatoes song.

Now, some bad movies that might be fun if you're in the mood for bad movies: Bloodsucking Freaks is really horrid. If you love Dead Alive this might be your kind of thing. Gore Gore Girls by Herschel Gordon Lewis is also horrid and awful in fun way.


Oh, and NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month). You might be busy with that too.


Goodman Games is doing a contest for a piece of fiction set in the Xcrawl world. I haven't seen any mention of it here so I'm spreading the word. It looks like fun --if you're not too busy with RPG Superstar, that is.


Let me see, the shopkeeper told me when I called ahead that things would start at 10:00, and sure enough someone arrived to play at noon. Too bad they came to play the WoW CCG.

I did come across three Basic D&D Gazetteers to add to my collection, at half what I would've paid on eBay. And I bought three Dungeon Crawl Classics. I guess it was a success for the store on that account.

When I left at 2:00 (with the swag) there was no hope of the D&D adventure being played, but at least I didn't get suckered into playing the Starcraft boardgame. Fantasy Flight Games be darned!


Jebadiah Utecht wrote:
I've gotta second Mona on Jack London's Martin Eden. (I don't think I've thought of that book in ten years.) It's got a section three chapters in length that details Eden's 100 hour work weeks and perfectly captures exactly how soul crushing a job can be.

Alright then, I'm taking a copy of that home from work (at a library).

Thanks to Erik and Jebadiah for bringing it to my attention


The PUBLISHER of Paizo shares his favorite books with us and we take it in stride. We must be spolied.

Custom of the Country by Edith Wharton is worthwhile. Undine Spragg is an unforgettable character.

Nothing can top Ulysses,even if just for the snot and Gorgonzola sandwich. And the brothel scene might make you think you're reading Poppy Z. Brite. Hm. . . that's not such a good thing, is it?

But Flannery O'Connor is my favorite. Her descriptions of characters are perfect, and her black humor is delicious.


4th ed. sounds like a good game, based on what little info there is, but I don't need a new game. If I didn't have many years worth of 3.5 material yet to enjoy, sure 4th ed. would be my game of choice --but I already have 3.5 and I want to continue using it.


My thanks for any commentary, especially suggestions for improvement.

Spoiler:

What is the object that vanished and why is it important to retrieve it?

A clear blue crystal, of the sort Azurestone is named for, was used in dim antiquity to capture the first snowflake of the Last Winter before it touched the ground. Since that time it has been enshrined below Azurestone and its magic has kept the harbinger of the Last Winter, the Red Raven, frozen in time.
Without the crystal, the Red Raven, now warped by ages of resentment into a hideous vulture-serpent, will be freed and may finally complete its duty as harbinger.

What are two of the obstacles the PCs must overcome while chasing down the culprit?

The culprits kidnap a group of loggers and, before carrying off the hostages, order the loggers to lure the PCs into an ambush. If the PCs answer the request for help, they’re attacked by orcs and giant buzzards who drop hollowed buzzard eggs packed with choking mustard powder. The PCs will have to deal with the attackers and find the hostages, costing them scarce time. The culprits, a band of half-ogres, abandon the hostages in a cave that houses a Scabrous Broodmother, an undead thing of blood that tears its own flesh to spawn bloodsucking little Scablings.
The PCs will also have to cross a swampland ruled by the delusional ogre druid Charlock and his swarms of mange-warped skunks and dire chipmunks. His druidic powers are tied to the icy environment of the Fog Peaks, where he was once an ally of the centaur Toxoph (see below). The mismatch of environments makes Charlock seem all the madder, as do his animal subjects that he parades about in a travesty of his former ally’s kingdom. The PCs may be able to get crucial intelligence from the ogre, if they can negotiate in terms of his delusions.

Who took the object and why?

Agents of the centaur warlord Toxoph raided the Red Raven shrine openly, killing several guardsmen. Toxoph plans to use the crystal’s winter magic against his rivals, tribes of ogres and athachs that war for dominance of the Fog Peaks. His first plan is to imprison the head brute of the athachs, called Ur-Athach.

What will the final showdown with the culprit look like?

Toxoph has pretensions of empire and loves to force his barbarian orc subjects to celebrate his magnificence. He is particularly fond of the songs of his court bard, the ogre Bellower. The PCs have a chance to catch him unawares if they can strike amid the fanfare and pageantry of one of Toxoph’s galas, held at the frozen feet of Ur-Athach. It seems the victory is not hard won until the Red Raven comes to claim the crystal.

What new monster do you plan to include in this adventure?

In addition to the Scabrous Broodmother, there is the Red Raven, which is now a mockery of its once noble self. It has a naked serpent-like neck and a venomous beak. Its shadow is nightmare itself, causing those it falls upon to see their worst fears in the flesh. As the illusions appear only to the afflicted, their friends are powerless to help.


I just want to say thanks to you guys for doing this open call. Win or lose, it's been a lot of fun. Oh wait, I shouldn't be talking like it's over yet. I want to win!


I'll share my query as soon as I get my rejection letter. I'd love to get feedback from all you bright folks about why it didn't win. Until then, here are some things I know I should have done differently:

1) I didn't know there were ogres in the Pathfinder AP (though I remember reading that several weeks ago) and I included them with out knowing how that might clash with their plans for them.

2) I stuck in half-ogres at the last minute without thinking about it and then panicked that they were closed content . . . until I found them in Tome of Horrors.

3) I didn't have Tome of Horrors when I was working on the query.

4) My query looks like it's by someone who's never written a module. I'm thinking now that it really should look more like it was reduced from a full outline that I know would fill 22,000 words.

5) And because I didn't have a full outline, my query was fatally short: 575 words or so altogether. I thought the questionas were answered adequately and I didn't know what more to add. I didn't want to put in a bunch of stuff they didn't ask for.

6) I didn't do a draft until the morning it was due, so I didn't have time to deal with the short word count. All week long I told myself, Do an early draft! I didn't listen.

What kind of worries are giving you nightsweats?