This is my second submission (I know you haven't ok'd the kasatha at all, but you seem open to whatever race wise, I can easily change it, and I have literally nothing to do today). You mentioned to talk to you about powerful builds, so I thought I'd give you fair warning on him. Most of the crunch is done, it's all in the profile.
Edit: I always forget to mention who it's an alias of (Dotraj)! I know it's probably obvious, but it seems like a helpful thing to just say outright.