I'm not sure if there's an appropriate forum for sharing character concepts (the fluff as opposed to character builds) so I decided to post mine here.
I need to come up with a character background/history for my Paladin, but find my write up to be a rather forced fit and lacking creativity. I don't have SKR on my speed dial to add the awesome, so I was hoping to hear some feedback from my more imaginative friends here.
I'm basically trying to sell my GM (and myself really) on why a paladin of Iomedae would wear Grey Maiden armor (aside from how aesthetically cool it looks), using a plausible "in story" explanation. The following is what I came up with. Constructive feedback is most welcome, but please kind.
I'm no fantasy writer and an easy bleeder. lol
Gwynith Thrune
" Until recently, Gwynith Thrune’s history and lineage remained unbeknownst to all but a few of the most powerful and wealthy of the Noble Houses of Cheliax. At birth she was secretly taken away from the House of Thrune by the great wizard Niclod Starweather, an advisor to the House of Thrune who felt pity for her. Through nightmarish visions he forsaw the diabolical fate that was in store for her twin sister Abrogail, and after clouding the minds of the royal midwives of Korvosa’s infernal court, he hastily sent the newborn child to Almas, deep in the heart of Andoran. Upon safely arriving in the land of freedom and liberty, she was raised by Father Brin ( a well respected cleric of Iomedae ) and studied the ways of the paladin under the tutelage of General Reginald Cormoth, commander of the Eagle Knights. (both of whom were secret allies of Niclod and brothers in the war against infernal Cheliax)
As Gwynith approached 23 years of age, it appeared that her secret would forever remain, but when Niclod fell out of favor with the Great House of Thrune and was forced into exile, fear of her discovery prompted Niclod to come warn her. It was around this time that Gwynith’s twin was crowned Queen Abrogail II, Infernal Majestrix of the Thrice-Damned House of Thrune and the sixth ruler to wear the crown of the diabolical nation. From this moment on, evil of epic proportions came to fruition across neighboring lands.
Arriving in Andoran, Niclod was reunited with General Cormoth and Father Brin to discuss the dire state of affairs in Korvosa, after Andoran spies had confirmed the rumors of the ailing king and an infernal plague, with suspicions pointing towards Queen Ileosa. After much planning, Gwynith Thrune and her closest friend Sabina Merrin volunteered themselves for an espionage mission. Using their Chelaxian heritage and skill with the sword and shield, they joined the ranks of Queen Ileosa’s Grey Maidens in an attempt to discover the truth to the rumors of her involvement and infiltrate the evil from within. By the time the two comrades had made their way through the ranks, becoming two of the Queen’s most trusted Maidens, death had taken King Eodred Arabasti II and the plague sweeping Korvosa was reaching pandemic proportions.
Andoran history has recorded the death and redemption of Sabina Merrin in her victory over the evil queen of Korvosa and the Grey Maidens have since disbanded, but Gwynith continues to fight the deviltry that consumes Cheliax. Donning the Grey Maiden armor in tribute to her fallen friend, she hopes to bring fear to the hearts of evil, and as a paladin of Iomedae strives to become a beacon of light and justice for the common folk that continue to suffer under demonic and tyrannical rule."
I'm presenting the idea as being akin to how Boba Fett wears the armor of the long since extinct Mandalorians, to instill fear rather than as proof of membership to an organization or faction. Feedback most welcome.