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Aneki wrote:

Hey Clark thanks for all the effort you put into judging and giving feedback.

I think the main flaw with my item is the cost.. in playtesting I had it higher however the entire target market for such an item are the people who have very little. The price i came to was the one strictly for the item not including the potential effect (ie wish)

edit: the addition of the potential Jackie Chan style hijinx while trying to keep he candle a light was the justification for the low price.. that and the "task"

Thanks in advance

Candle of Deals
Aura Strong Conjuration (calling);
Slot - ; Price 6,100 gp; Weight 1lb;
Description
This candle stands one foot in height and is covered in runes. A Spellcraft Check (DC 20) reveals the runes as those used in dark summoning rituals. Originally created in the Abyss as a way of securing a mortals soul the Candle of Deals has been recreated over the years by power hungry arch mages and by those wishing to curry favour with dark outsiders.
Lighting the candle causes black smoke to issue forth encircling everything within five feet clearing to reveal a Glabrezu Demon, his true visage concealed with appealing illusions who does not attack unless provoked.
If lit by a mortal humanoid the Glabezu will offer the character a wish. This wish is with all the normal side effects of a Glabrezu demon’s wish with an additional effect that the Glabrezu will call on the recipient of the wish within 1 month to perform a single task. This task will always be one that goes against the nature of the recipient.
The candle takes 1 hour to completely burn out after which time the wish comes into effect. If the candle leaves the possession of the mortal who lit it or goes out the wish is cancelled yet the debt must still be served.

Construction
Requirements Craft Wondrous Item, Greater Planar Binding, 100gp candle; Cost 3050 gp

Sorry, I'm...

Thanks for the input mate.. I know when i wrote it i had CL because i had comment on it from one of my players.. hope i submitted with it.

Hey Clark thanks for all the effort you put into judging and giving feedback.
I think the main flaw with my item is the cost.. in playtesting I had it higher however the entire target market for such an item are the people who have very little. The price i came to was the one strictly for the item not including the potential effect (ie wish)

edit: the addition of the potential Jackie Chan style hijinx while trying to keep he candle a light was the justification for the low price.. that and the "task"

Thanks in advance

Candle of Deals
Aura Strong Conjuration (calling);
Slot - ; Price 6,100 gp; Weight 1lb;
Description
This candle stands one foot in height and is covered in runes. A Spellcraft Check (DC 20) reveals the runes as those used in dark summoning rituals. Originally created in the Abyss as a way of securing a mortals soul the Candle of Deals has been recreated over the years by power hungry arch mages and by those wishing to curry favour with dark outsiders.
Lighting the candle causes black smoke to issue forth encircling everything within five feet clearing to reveal a Glabrezu Demon, his true visage concealed with appealing illusions who does not attack unless provoked.
If lit by a mortal humanoid the Glabezu will offer the character a wish. This wish is with all the normal side effects of a Glabrezu demon’s wish with an additional effect that the Glabrezu will call on the recipient of the wish within 1 month to perform a single task. This task will always be one that goes against the nature of the recipient.
The candle takes 1 hour to completely burn out after which time the wish comes into effect. If the candle leaves the possession of the mortal who lit it or goes out the wish is cancelled yet the debt must still be served.

Construction
Requirements Craft Wondrous Item, Greater Planar Binding, 100gp candle; Cost 3050 gp

6am on the 20th for me :) which is a shame coz the 19th (today) is my birthday :)

I entered yesterday and can't wait for the 19th to roll on.. The 19th is also my b'day so hopefully it is a sign :)