In Service to Lore Revamp

[G.M.E.W.]

I recently ran Into 1: In Service to Lore and changed some of the read-aloud text to reflect the new factions. I received a positive response from the players, some of whom had played this scenario before, so I figured I'd post my changes for others to look over an maybe even use.
LINK

I'm also curious if such revamp of read-aloud test is OK as long as it does not changed the "Mechanics of the encounter".

[nosig]

G.M.E.W. wrote:

I recently ran Into 1: In Service to Lore and changed some of the read-aloud text to reflect the new factions. I received a positive response from the players, some of whom had played this scenario before, so I figured I'd post my changes for others to look over an maybe even use.

LINK

I'm also curious if such revamp of read-aloud test is OK as long as it does not changed the "Mechanics of the encounter".

Nice!

(a typo or two that need to be patched up... but this is great stuff! typo example: "... but have been gotten nowhere...")

[G.M.E.W.]

Thanks! I'll try fix the typo this weekend.

[nosig]

G.M.E.W. wrote:

Thanks! I'll try fix the typo this weekend.

Sure... and thanks for the write-up! I intend to use it the next time I run First Steps!

[Auke Teeninga]

You should upload it to www.pfsprep.com!