Sounds cool in your head vs sounds realistic when actually spoken


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Discussion Question:

There are some books where the dialogue sounds impressive in the silence of your mind, but when you read it aloud, it sounds ridiculous.

There are other books where the dialogue sounds simplistic and even childish in the silence of your mind, but when read aloud, it sounds natural and believable.

Which, in your opinion, is the better writing style? Why?

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