apology item (again)
Okay, see, this is why people need to submit and, more importantly, seek critique on their items.
I just saw an item under 100 words with a unique twist on a mechanic. However, it's just straightforward and bare-bones. No flair, no flash, no mojo. Now if the item had an accompanying cool flavor effect that manifested while performing said mechanic, it would have really caught my attention, especially with a good themed name attached. There was plenty of word-count left to polish it up, but now it's a lost opportunity.
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You and I have very different opinions on what "sentimental" means. Your opinion is far more disturbing than mine.
Ah those days of yore when we would walk in the moonlight, mutilate forest creatures, and I wove this necklace from their entrails for you.
Brings a tear to my eye.
Cooking or gardening? Which is more high adventure?
apology item (again)
Just got that too.
One is a weapon. Bad weapon! The other is unclear and confusing. I choose confusion.
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You and I have very different opinions on what "sentimental" means. Your opinion is far more disturbing than mine.Ah those days of yore when we would walk in the moonlight, mutilate forest creatures, and I wove this necklace from their entrails for you.
Brings a tear to my eye.
I've read that fanfic too.
Found the other centaur item!
There are more than two.
... Found the 50 Shades of Grey item.
apology item (again)Just got that too.
I'm sorry to hear that!
Admiring chests as we speak
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ZZslot? Is that a music group making covers of ZZ Top?
How will I recognize the 50 shades of grey item?
... Found the 50 Shades of Grey item.
...and?
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Number threeI'm sorry to hear that!apology item (again)Just got that too.
Always repost Kate Beaton.
I found an item that our own Paizo commie goblin would love to get.
... Found the 50 Shades of Grey item....and?
Squishy.
It would benefit from some... Er, rewrites, though.
I found an item that our own Paizo commie goblin would love to get.
That's what I thought! But if you read it, it really has nothing to do with socialism at all.
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Okay, Seriously.
Would you the RPG Superstar hopeful one of these for character?
If "no" then why are you entering this item?
If "yes" then...well...yuck.Best of Luck
I have seen numerous items Scott's Druid would LOVE!
I don't need a wondrous item to do that. That's a magic weapon quality.
This item emulates this class feature.
Unless, of course, someone/something with said class feature uses it.
In which case it does something entirely different.
Without using said class feature.
... Found the 50 Shades of Grey item....and?
Trying to purge it from my brain. Along with some of these other disgusting items. Some things you just cannot un-read.
I'm wondering if a lot of people had to look that word up just to be sure... if so, does that mean it isn't a good example of itself?
Bad apple
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That Preview button - you just couldn't be bothered to press it, could you?
Trying to purge it from my brain. Along with some of these other disgusting items. Some things you just cannot un-read.... Found the 50 Shades of Grey item....and?
Somebody pass Amy the brain bleach...
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Somebody pass Amy the brain bleach...Trying to purge it from my brain. Along with some of these other disgusting items. Some things you just cannot un-read.... Found the 50 Shades of Grey item....and?
Maybe we can have Lenses of Unreading?
That Preview button - you just couldn't be bothered to press it, could you?
This has driven me right up the wall.
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Why, is that Galadriel's Phial on a chain?
Having never read 50 shades of grey, I need some hints
Two meh items. And both underpriced. But wait! One follows the formatting fully while the other lack bold and italics. Not an impressive tie breaker :/
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+1 Pamela