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I'll update this post as I work through more of this, but at first blush my opinion is this:
The content is interesting, the class fusions look really cool. I'll playtest a few of them today and keep updating here, but....honestly, the actual writing makes me cringe constantly. There are typos all over the place, which is alright since this isn't the final publication, but the phrasing...sometimes it's fine, sometimes it feels kind of clunky....and somtimes it reads more like someone wrote it in German and put it through Google Translate, and then just pasted it in. For example:
Page 5, the description of the Bloodrager. copied directly "...where the potency of strange ancestral unions and deeds lashes out with supernatural furry with devastating ends. And while in these states, they can as near-instinct cast some arcane spells."
Problem 1: Supernatural furry? That made me chuckle, it's an amusing typo...but really.
Problem 2: The phrasing in that second sentence is horrid. Starting a sentence with "and" is incorrect, "they can as near-instinct cast some arcane spells" really reads more like amateur homebrew on a fan-site than a professional publication. And then, "devastating ends"? "Devastating results", please!
As I said, I'll update this page with my opinions and analyses of the various classes and whatnot as I find the time to test them.