Homebrew / Rewrite races attempt (Opinions needed)


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Okay, so as I'm designing this homebrew setting, I've been going over and over about races, or lack there of. My ideal number of races is in fact, 1, that's right, 1 single race. That race is Human, Homo sapien, that bipedal tetrapod we all seem to be. However obviously some humans are a bit different then other humans.

Abhuman or Differently Human as some might say possess other "racial," traits but in terms of lore and fluff they are just supposed to be humans with some special blessing at birth or unique ancestry. A lot of it a rewrite of already familiar "Monsters as Player character races," however they have been redone to suite the fluff.

Flame/Sun Kissed, (Elemental Fire bloodline):


  • +2 to One Ability Score: Fire Elemental blooded Humans pick one ability score other then Wisdom to give a +2 to that stat.
  • Senses: darkvision (60 feet.)
  • Spell-Like Abilities: burning hands 1/day (caster level equals the characters total Hit Dice).
  • Resistance(s): fire resistance 5.
  • Elemental Affinity: Flame touched sorcerers with the elemental (fire) bloodline treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all sorcerer spells and class abilities. Clerics with the Fire domain use their domain powers and spells at +1 caster level. Oracles with the Flame mystery treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all Oracle spells and class abilities.

Earthborn, (Elemental Earth bloodline):


  • +2 to One Ability Score: Earth Elemental blooded Humans pick one ability score other then Charisma to give a +2 to that stat.
  • Senses: darkvision (60 feet.)
  • Spell-Like Abilities: burning hands 1/day (caster level equals the characters total Hit Dice).
  • Resistance(s): Acid resistance 5.
  • Elemental Affinity: Earthborn sorcerers with the elemental (earth) bloodline treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all sorcerer spells and class abilities. Earthborn clerics with the Earth domain cast their domain powers and spells at +1 caster level. Oracles with the stone mystery treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all Oracle spells and class abilities.

Wind Souled, (Elemental Air bloodline):


  • +2 to One Ability Score: Air Elemental blooded Humans pick one ability score other then Constitution to give a +2 to that stat.
  • Senses: darkvision (60 feet.)
  • Spell-Like Abilities: feather fall 1/day (caster level equals the Characters Hit Dice).
  • Resistance(s): electricity resistance 5.
  • Elemental Affinity: Elemental Air bloodline sorcerers with the elemental (air) bloodline treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all sorcerer spells and class abilities. Elemental Air bloodline clerics with the Air domain cast their domain powers and spells at +1 caster level. Oracles with the Wind mystery treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all Oracle spells and class abilities.

Divine Bloodline:


  • +2 to One Ability Score: Outsider blooded Humans pick one ability score and receive a +2 to that stat.
  • Senses: darkvision (60 feet.)
  • Racial Skill Bonuses: +2 racial bonus to either Diplomacy and Perception checks if ones ancestor is a Good outsider or +2 racial bonus on Bluff and Stealth checks if ones ancestor is an evil outsider.
  • Spell-Like Abilities: Either Darkness or Daylight 1/day depending on ancestry
  • Resistance(s): Either cold, electricity, and fire resistance 5 if evil connection, acid, cold, electricity resistance 5 if good connection.
  • Divine Magic: Sorcerers of the Celestial, Abyssal, Infernal and Destined bloodlines bloodline treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all sorcerer spells and class abilities. Clerics with the domains of Evil, or Good cast their domain powers and spells at +1 caster level. Oracles may discuss with their DM to treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all Oracle spells and class abilities depending on if the Mystery seems related in some way to their Divine (Good or Evil) ancestry.

Feyborn (Feyish blood and/or Ancestry):


  • +2 to One Ability Score: Feyborn humans pick one ability score except constitution and receive a +2 to that stat.
  • Senses: Low-light vision.
  • Racial Skill Bonuses: +2 racial bonus on Survival and Spellcraft checks.
  • Spell-Like Abilities: dancing lights 1/day (caster level equals class level)
  • Immunities/Saving Throw Bonuses: Immunity to magic sleep effects and get a +2 racial saving throw bonus against enchantment spells and effects.
  • Languages: Automatically begin play knowing Sylvan on top of whatever other languages can be learned based on intelligence.
  • Fey Affinity: Feyborn sorcerers with the Fey bloodline treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all sorcerer spells and class abilities. Wind Blessed clerics with the Plant or Animal domain cast their domain powers and spells at +1 caster level. Oracles with the Nature mystery treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all Oracle spells and class abilities.
  • Weaknesses/Vulnerabilities: Cold Iron weakness, any critical hit received from a cold Iron weapon does an additional 1d4 points of damage.

Dhampir (Vampire ancestry, or taint):


  • +2 to One Ability Score: Dhampir's receive a +2 to one stat of their choosing other then Constitution.
  • Senses: darkvision (60 feet), low-light vision.
  • Racial Skill Bonuses: +2 racial bonus on Bluff and Perception checks.
  • Immunities/Saving Throw Bonuses: Saving Throw Bonuses: +2 racial bonus against disease and mind-affecting effects.
  • Blood Drinking: Dhampir can gain sustenance from the blood of the recently dead. As a standard action, Dhampir can drink the blood of a creature that died within the past minute per class level. The creature must be corporeal and must have blood. This ability heals you 1d6 hit points if the creature is medium sized or larger and nourishes you as if you’d had a full meal, it heals 1d4 if the creature is small sized and does not provide nourishment.
  • Resist Level Drain: A dhampir takes no penalties from energy draining effects, though he can still be killed if he accrues more negative levels then he has Hit Dice. After 24 hours, any negative levels a dhampir takes are removed without the need for an additional saving throw.
  • Deathly Affinity: Dhampir sorcerers with the undead bloodline treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all sorcerer spells and class abilities. Dhampir clerics with the Death or Repose domains cast their domain powers and spells at +1 caster level. Dhampir Oracles with the bones mystery treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all Oracle spells and class abilities.
  • Weaknesses/Vulnerabilities: Light Sensitivity. Blood Craving (Must use the Blood drinking ability at least once every 2 weeks or become sickened, if blood is not consumed within the next week, characters land speed is reduced to 10 feet and has a temporary 1d4 drain on his or her constitution.

Dragonborn (Draconic blood):


  • +2 to One Ability Score: Dragonborn Humans pick one ability score other then Dexterity to give a +2 to that stat.
  • Dragons Blood: Dragonborn count as dragons for any effect related to race.
  • Senses: darkvision (60 feet.)
  • Immune to Dragon Fear Dragonborn are immune to a dragon’s frightful presence.
  • Keen Senses Dragonborn receive a +2 racial bonus on Perception skill checks.
  • Dragon Breath Dragonborn have retained the dragon breath of their draconic heritage, manifesting itself in the form of a line with a length of 5 feet per class level (capping out at 20 feet). The dragon breath deals 1d6 points of energy damage for every 5 levels (Reflex save for half damage), to a maximum of 4d6 at 20th level. The type of energy breath weapon is determined by the dragonborn’s specific draconic origins as follows: acid (black or copper), cold (silver or white), electricity (blue or bronze), fire (brass, gold or red), or poison (green). The dragon breath ability is renewed after resting for 8 hours, although these hours do not need to be consecutive.
  • Draconic Affinity: Dragonborn sorcerers with the Draconic bloodline treat their Charisma score as 2 points higher for all sorcerer spells and class abilities.

Now lore wise these various "alternative humans," come about in a lot of different ways, but I am mainly wondering if stat wise these rewrites and homebrew "races," are balanced against the baseline human in PF since I want to avoid them being more powerful in every way. I kind of like them in niches, but I'd rather not have them be more stat wise powerful and versatile then standard humans.

RPG Superstar 2011 Top 8

What no Waterborn? You're just like Earth, Wind, and Fire.

I think giving them all a spell that scales with hit die is a bad idea, but I see the precedent for it from slyphs, irits, and what not. Right now these are more or less on par with tieflings and aasimar, which are considered a bit better than other base races. It might be easier just to give humans a boost though, as these all seem to be about on par.

If you're keeping the spell-like abilities, then Feyborn should get something better than a cantrip, especially if they have a weakness tacked on as well.

Also, you list poison as a damage type for the Dragonborn, is that a homebrew decision or did you just miss it?


The Leaping Gnome wrote:

What no Waterborn? You're just like Earth, Wind, and Fire.

I think giving them all a spell that scales with hit die is a bad idea, but I see the precedent for it from slyphs, irits, and what not. Right now these are more or less on par with tieflings and aasimar, which are considered a bit better than other base races. It might be easier just to give humans a boost though, as these all seem to be about on par.

If you're keeping the spell-like abilities, then Feyborn should get something better than a cantrip, especially if they have a weakness tacked on as well.

Also, you list poison as a damage type for the Dragonborn, is that a homebrew decision or did you just miss it?

First, thank you for the feedback ^.^

Second, the dragonborn was a homebrew decision but I might take it out... its one of those on the table but barely options.

I can keep or lose the spell like abilities, save for the Divine one simply to keep them similar to say the Tiefling/Assimar inspiration.

As for waterborn, its still in the works.


Slight changes to the Feyborn (Feyish blood and/or Ancestry):


  • Spell-Like Abilities: Faerie Fire 1/day (caster level equals class level)
  • Weaknesses/Vulnerabilities: Cold Iron weakness, any critical hit received from a cold Iron weapon does an additional 2 points of damage.

The Dragonborn


  • Dragon Breath Dragonborn have retained the dragon breath of their draconic heritage, manifesting itself in the form of a line with a length of 5 feet per class level (capping out at 20 feet). The dragon breath deals 1d6 points of energy damage for every 5 levels (Reflex save for half damage), to a maximum of 4d6 at 20th level. The type of energy breath weapon is determined by the dragonborn’s specific draconic origins as follows: acid (black or copper or green), cold (silver or white), electricity (blue or bronze), fire (brass, gold or red). The dragon breath ability is renewed after resting for 8 hours, although these hours do not need to be consecutive.

RPG Superstar 2011 Top 8

Good changes. The 1d4 seemed odd for the cold iron weakness (2 damage seems fine) and faerie fire is an excellent choice for this race.

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