|Rick Kunz Webstore Coordinator|
I've only just downloaded the product and am now giving the class a once over.
What we have here thematically is somewhere along the lines of PF's Kineticists, and the Solarian, except associated with Aeons through and through. They have a resource, it builds in combat, and they can be blasty with it. Now, personally, on this note is where I am sold.
Looking at the class table, one will notice there are three dead levels: 7th, 11th, and 19th. 7th can be taken care of by picking a particular conversion (their brand of stellar revelations), but 11th and 19th can't. At these you'll only get +1 BaB, your skill points and hp for the level gain, and the feats gained normally at these levels. Aside from that, on the mechanical front it looks alright. True to the thematics, you gain various abilities as you level and have a resource to utilize them with.
Editing wise, there are a few nitpicks but nothing horrific. Under Internal Battery it says "As a move action, you can 1 point of potential." The intended meaning of this can be gleaned but the absence of one word is a little irritating. Additionally, under Kinetic Conversion it says "The list of kinetic conversions can be found on page XX." Given the few number of pages in the document, this isn't a big deal but it is odd. I assume it is a hold over from when it was uncertain on which page the conversions were going to fall.
|Owen KC Stephens|