Tirisfal |
Will have to say I love the move Desna pulled to raise Ash. I love seeing the reverse temptation pulled by a good god that both feels so well done and so appropriate to that mentality.
I especially loved the fact that it was her relationship with Sarenrae that gave Desna the strength to circumvent her desire to just nuke Arueshalae in retaliation :)
Sometimes our relationships with others can bring out the better parts of ourselves :)
doc the grey |
doc the grey wrote:Will have to say I love the move Desna pulled to raise Ash. I love seeing the reverse temptation pulled by a good god that both feels so well done and so appropriate to that mentality.I especially loved the fact that it was her relationship with Sarenrae that gave Desna the strength to circumvent her desire to just nuke Arueshalae in retaliation :)
Sometimes our relationships with others can bring out the better parts of ourselves :)
Yeah, part of why I'm still a little upset we didn't get more reverse tempters for the side of good yet (a "redeemer" if you will). That being said I'm happy to see that the concept at least is alive and well and with any luck we'll get something to fill that void.
Odraude |
Tirisfal wrote:Yeah, part of why I'm still a little upset we didn't get more reverse tempters for the side of good yet (a "redeemer" if you will). That being said I'm happy to see that the concept at least is alive and well and with any luck we'll get something to fill that void.doc the grey wrote:Will have to say I love the move Desna pulled to raise Ash. I love seeing the reverse temptation pulled by a good god that both feels so well done and so appropriate to that mentality.I especially loved the fact that it was her relationship with Sarenrae that gave Desna the strength to circumvent her desire to just nuke Arueshalae in retaliation :)
Sometimes our relationships with others can bring out the better parts of ourselves :)
There is a redeemer angel in Chronicles of the Righteous.
Mythic Tirisfal |
One night, while she was draining a priestess of Desna that she had seduced, Arueshalae decided to try an experiment. Outsiders don't sleep, and therefore don't dream, but she wanted to see what it was like. So, she used detect thoughts on the priestess while she slept.
She ended up getting sucked into the Dimension of Dreams and was trapped there when the priestess died. In daring to try to dream, Arueshalae came to Desna's attention. Desna almost obliterated her on the spot, but her pal Sarenrae has smoothed her edges over the millenniums and she ultimatly thought better of it. Instead, she reached deep into the succubus' core and filled her heart and mind and being with her mortal memories. When she woke up, she remembered her previous life and felt ashamed, so now she seeks to redeem herself with the help of her new goddess.
She's CN when the PCs meet her, but she's so close to pushing past that last hurdle and becoming CG. She's got DR/Lawful instead of Good if I remember correctly, and her succubus powers work a bit different.
I also have to say that the art they ordered for her in this book is incredible :)
Alleran |
So Arueshalae:
Unless it did create huge conflict between one set of memories/experiences and the other?
Alleran |
Ah, my mistake.
Compare her mortal-memory situation to Nightripper the nascent demon lord, for example. He was a killer in life, went to the Abyss in death, and became a nascent demon lord. I'm pretty sure his life as a demon doesn't shame him.
Alleran |
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Alleran wrote:Ah, my mistake.
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Probably? I dunno - that's more of a James question.
I just got home and looked over it, and there was one last thing I forgot - my favorite line in the entire book:
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:3
I might ask him about it.
That line reminds me a bit of Sandman.
Morpheus: "You say that I have no power? Perhaps you speak truly. But you say that dreams have no power? Ask yourselves, all of you. What power would Hell have if those imprisoned here could not dream of Heaven?"
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@ Alleran,
I might be able to add some insight here. Let's talk about good and evil...
(I also refer to some Runelord's plot elements by way of comparison, so there's some spoilers for that too..)
I come at it from the perspective that very very few people, if any, just are born evil. Maybe some are, as I've seen psychological case studies on sociopaths and feral children, but for the most the path of evil is just that—a journey. It's not a singular decision. It's not a function of an instant. It is a descent. You see this mirrored over and over in pop culture, literature, and even fantasy gaming. I could list examples, but they are numerous. Often times, it is part of the tragedy. You, the audience, can see it coming.
I think one of the misconceptions about outsiders is that they're incapable of a range of emotion. Even in Golarion's myths we see gods experiencing a complex range of emotion that doesn't always fit neatly into rigid alignments (Pharasma's cursing of the lamia, Asmodeus's complex relationship with the brother he once loved and then murdered, and Desna's sense of wrath towards Lamashtu over the murder of her friend and mentor). Taking it down a notch, based upon James's comments I believe that demons can experience a similar range of emotion but do their utmost to avoid it. Why? Because it is a liability. A demon that allows itself to love opens itself up to being destroyed, especially by its fellows. I imagine most demons do tell themselves they are incapable of feeling positive emotion, and repeat that to themselves over and over again because they really want it to be true! I imagine most powerful demons and demon lords reinforce this notion, over and over again, because they don't want any of the rank and file to experiment in order to find out. Otherwise you end up with a traitor like Arueshalae.
But common sense says that if an angel can fall, they reverse is also possible. Perhaps it's just more unlikely.
There is also the matter of memory loss. I think that is incidental to the years of torture, suffering, and humiliation that a soul endures as it forms into a demon, but having your mortal memories is also a liability. It is baggage that lends itself to liabilities like regret.
Also, demons are formed from many different larvae. Bits and pieces of multiple souls. I imagine Arueshalae's dominant personality is the soul of the largest and strongest larvae that her succubus form was composed of... that was the one that Desna located and restored to awareness. Wiping away the centuries of torture and shame, so that she could see clearly and objectively again. Good lord, and to think that a kindness? To force someone to take a good hard look in the proverbial mirror and see your own wasted life and the countless number of ruined lives you've left in your wake? It is a testament to Arueshalae's strength and pushes herself to try and undo some of the damage. It speaks to Desna's compassion that she allows Arueshalae to try.
In the case of the Nightripper, he might be more of a composite entity created from the fusion of a thousand serial killers... none of which have been singled out and awakened as with the case of Arueshalae.
But you see, very few people just wake up one day and decide "I'm going to be a monster." Let's look at Runelords for a second... Nualia certainly didn't just decide to be evil one day. She was responsible for her choices, but she never asked to be isolated from her community. She never asked to be objectified by her beauty or by her race. All she wanted was someone to love her. Instead she got used for sex and abandoned. She never asked for her baby to be born a deformed half-fiend monster, it happened because she gave herself in love to an undeserving young man (motivated by lust) too close to an evil shrine to a Demon Goddess of fertility and monsters. After the midwifes buried her monster child in secret, she never asked for her only parent to lock her in a church, plan to send her to a convent, and tell her to pray for forgiveness for all the wrong she had done. Her sins? Like she asked for any of that crap? Wanting to be treated like a person and not a freak, and for someone to love her? To be blamed for wanting what everybody wants? To be loved as a person? Good heavens, its not surprising she snapped. Mind you, I don't give Nualia a free pass. She's responsible for her misdeeds and she was a villain—but that girl didn't wake up one day and decide, "I shall be a monster!"
I don't know.. I am rambling now. Maybe you'll get the gist. I'm going to let James get his two cents in here now. :) And hope he doesn't mind me speaking up.
Alleran |
@ Alleran,
I might be able to add some insight here. Let's talk about good and evil...
(I also refer to some Runelord's plot elements by way of comparison, so there's some spoilers for that too..)
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Thanks for replying, and I don't mind spoilers. If I did, I wouldn't be opening up all the spoilered posts to find out details about WotR from the subscribers who have it already!
Anyway, a couple of notes (there will be scattered spoilers, of course, hence the tags):
That being said, however, demons are "exemplars" of their alignments, to the point where they are composed of Chaos and Evil (in the case of the Abyss). And not "evil" in a philosophical sense, but as an actual substance within the multiverse. They're archetypes. Demons could feel happiness, and I don't think they'd try to avoid feeling it either. That they might feel that happiness from, say, holding out the skinned flesh of a green-haired gnome druid's snow leopard companion and offering a deal to give it back doesn't make the emotion less positive, or mean they enjoy it any less. It won't be positive for the poor druid, but it makes the demon happy (in a "muahahaha" sense rather than a "lookit-the-adorable-kittenz!" sense).
As far as gods are concerned, I never really think of them as exemplars of an alignment. They're not infallible. It came up in another thread elsewhere on the forums where I noted that Sarenrae went nuclear on Gormuz in a fit of anger and rage, and even though she blew a giant hole straight to Rovagug's prison, her alignment wasn't affected in a measurable way (although she did start espousing redemption over vengeance more strongly). Then there's Tabris falling from LG to LN, although I never really thought of angels as exemplars. More divine servants/servitors.
In a consideration of Nature vs Nurture, for "exemplars" I would say that it's not just Nurture that does it (the note on avoiding emotion), it's Nature. And fighting that nature should be an extreme, a battle. Like a human trying not to breathe. In this context, that analogy doesn't quite hold up (since that nature can be fought under certain circumstances), but I hope it sort of illustrates what I'm trying to communicate.
Incidentally, where Nightripper is concerned, his history is that as a mortal he died, and then he passed through to the Abyss with his mind and memory intact. Lamashtu then boosted him to a nascent lord, and he's perfectly happy in his role. He's not referred to as a composite. I strongly suspect that if he was the one digging into dreams, he'd laugh at the sudden nostalgia and then head off to find something else to murderise in a new and horrifying way.
As a mortal, Arueshalae got herself sent to the Abyss. This does mean she was likely not on the "nice" end of the alignment spectrum. No Nightripper, maybe, but still evil. A kindness to show her a "wasted life" is that it's a wasted life from Desna's perspective. From the perspective of the person Arueshalae was in life to be sentenced to the Chaotic Evil afterlife as a larva, it might be a very different thing.
Consider Ileosa Arabasti in CoCT. She's definitely evil from the start, but she was a coward and unimaginative... until she got the Crown of Fangs, and now she has the power and the drive to accomplish what she couldn't before. Would she look back on her previous life and think it wasted, if she was given a sudden memory rush? Yes, but she would, in her post-CoF state, think it wasted because then she was weak, and now she's strong. She went from pretty low on the totem pole of evil to measuring her alignment in Kilonazis. If she got Desna's mind-whammy, would she try to mend her ways?
To me, it feels as though what Desna did, from descriptions given here, isn't just showing her a wasted life, it's actually screwing with Arueshalae's moral compass in a very real sense. And while that starts Arueshalae on the road of Fall-From-Grace, it's still Desna "mindscrewing" her towards goodness rather than deciding to mend her ways solely because she had a sudden crisis of conscience on remembering her mortal life.
And I would still be perfectly okay with that. If one is dealing with Chaos and Evil incarnate, then it does make sense to me that you'd need a literally divinely-inspired dose of mind-whammy plus one Abyss of a kick in the pants to get you on the Highway to Heaven.
I think I started rambling myself towards the end there and wandered around. Anyway, some thoughts in a very tired, 3:30AM state of half-asleepness. Time to have some dreams of my own.
Jim Groves Contributor, RPG Superstar 2010 Top 4 |
Alleran,
I regret forgetting the Nightripper's history. It gets challenging to remember all of the canon. I am not ashamed to say I'm not the first freelancer who has said it is difficult to keep up on our reading!
:)
You sound comfortable with your interpretation, and I think that is a fine thing. I am not going to tell you that you're wrong, even if I have a different perspective. When it comes stuff like this I don't think the game or this adventure needs an absolute truth. My job is to entertain, and if you and your group are entertained, that is good enough for me.
Yeah, that may sound kind of "safe" and or "slippery" but I mean it—we agree that there is 'a' way for a demon to be redeemed. The story works fine either way you see that happening. I hope you have fun!
doc the grey |
doc the grey wrote:There is a redeemer angel in Chronicles of the Righteous.Tirisfal wrote:Yeah, part of why I'm still a little upset we didn't get more reverse tempters for the side of good yet (a "redeemer" if you will). That being said I'm happy to see that the concept at least is alive and well and with any luck we'll get something to fill that void.doc the grey wrote:Will have to say I love the move Desna pulled to raise Ash. I love seeing the reverse temptation pulled by a good god that both feels so well done and so appropriate to that mentality.I especially loved the fact that it was her relationship with Sarenrae that gave Desna the strength to circumvent her desire to just nuke Arueshalae in retaliation :)
Sometimes our relationships with others can bring out the better parts of ourselves :)
I know and I love that guy but to me he always feels like one built to work with mortals more then outsiders. I mean we have so many angel breakers it feels like floating around the multiverse for evil, I would love to see a "Demon redeemer" that shows up somewhere in the mix.
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Question for Amanda Hamon (or whoever, really...it's just she wrote up that section of the book).
How is the locust that walks a 'variant'? Perhaps it's jsut because it's not spelled out, but I see nothing that distinguishes it from a normal worm that walks...
Its stats are unchanged... but it's appearance and flavor are changed. That's enough to qualify it as a variant in my book! Especially since it's not made out of worms.
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UllarWarlord Contributor |
Matthew Morris RPG Superstar 2009 Top 32, 2010 Top 8 |
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My two C-bills on Ash.
When she was alive, she was an evil person, maybe just on the edge, maybe full blown CE. Either way, she died, and her soul was judged and sent to the abyss. Maybe she had regrets when she arrived, maybe she didn’t. Either way, her soul was beaten, folded, spindled, and mutilated into a succubus.
We don’t know how long she was a demon. Time is immaterial to this case. What happened was that Ash-the-succubus was a slightly exceptional member of her kind, and did the ‘normal’ succubus things.
Then she crossed the wrong deity.
Ash-as-awakened apparently didn’t hit bottom, she shot right past bottom and found a new sub-basement. Ash-with-memories-of-her-life was mortified that she’d done things (sure, technically it wasn’t Ash-before-she-died, but the memories are all of what they’ve done) that she’d never even consider. Seducing a wife to break up a marriage for kicks? Sure. Maybe even poisoning a lover? Sure. But Ash-before-she-died likely never considered eating someone’s life force, or sending their soul to be shredded by demons. Or Worse... So she re-evaluated her new life, like the guy who was a binge drug user and woke up one morning beaten and naked and not able to remember what happened. So she’s strong enough to pull herself up, without the aid of a Demons Anonymous. (More importantly from a player PoV, she’s able to ‘pull herself up’ to CN, and needs them as a support group to make it to CG.)
At least that’s how I see her.
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Squeakmaan wrote:ORIGINAL CHARACTER, DO NOT STEALUllarWarlord wrote:Thanks, guys! Now I have nothing standing in my way of making a fly that walks...Except Asmodeus, he seems the type to be upset when someone steals his ideas.
Imitation is the highest form of flattery!
...though I doubt he'd fall for it...
Jim Groves Contributor, RPG Superstar 2010 Top 4 |
Cydeth RPG Superstar 2012 Top 32 |
Cydeth, I wanted to thank you for the five star review (and I am sure that James does too). It's always gratifying to see people enjoying the adventures!
No problem, I absolutely loved what you did with the adventure, and am so looking forward to running it and inflic-I mean letting my players experience it. Thank you so much for writing it!
Now I need to finish my adventures...
Jim Groves Contributor, RPG Superstar 2010 Top 4 |
@ RogueShadow3,
Thank you for your kind words! I'm pleased that we could provide you with some NPCs that hopefully lead to some really meaningful roleplaying. Thank you again for your review!
Edit: I'll link your review to the website feedback. Maybe Robot Chris can have a look at those interactive maps when her schedule permits.
P Tigras |
I found myself rather disappointed after reading through Demon's Heresy. The players are essentially demoted from the mythic leaders of a great crusade against evil to a bunch of errand boys/girls for Irabeth as she takes command of the city they liberated. It's basically a small uninspired sandbox with little in the way of story beyond "scouting" out the area and helping Irabeth rebuild her new city. The story doesn't really pick up again until you encounter the reformed succubus, but first the players need to gain a few levels scouting and what largely amounts to running errands. And that's where this story suffers. There are lots of small and relatively uninteresting encounters/side-quests.
Ultimately, I think SoV sets up those players inclined to general their own battles and rule their own lands to expect DH to be something different than what they ultimately get. And I think that can make for some disgruntled players.
In the real world, a letter like the one Queen Galfrey sent to the players after they liberated Drezen would be considered a demotion and something of an insult despite the effusive praise. I can already see my group of players, who -loved- Kingmaker, saying "Screw this! We're out of here. Let's go adventure somewhere else." when they're stripped of their command of the knights and Irabeth gets promoted to ruler over them.
Now it wouldn't be that hard to edit DH to make it work, ie. give them rulership of the city they liberated, and make it feel more like Kingmaker, and less like Pawnmaker. This way they won't feel like they've been kicked in the teeth, and I don't have to hear things like, "You told us in part 2 (as per the book) that our knighthoods entitled us to rule land", and "If the Queen wanted Irabeth to rule why didn't she put her in charge of the mission to liberate Drezen?"
I've just reached a point where I don't have a lot of time to edit adventures. My free time isn't what it once was. So I'm going to grumble when books like this one are produced that aren't very well thought out.
Tirisfal |
Well, you could also give them the vague religious explanation that Queen Galifrey believes that Iomedae has greater plans than rulership in mind for the PCs.
They're far too important to the crusade to simply get a "desk job" like ruling a city.
If your PCs feel like they've "been demoted", then they may be more invested in petty rulership than they are in closing the Worldwound, and this may not be the AP for them.
Aleron |
I have to disagree. Most of what you are shrugging off as scouting and errands are actually tied to each character's personal story and background trait they chose. If you treat them only likely little errands, that's all they're going to be...but there is so much more potential in each of those side-quests, even before the succubus. Whether they feel worthy of mythic characters or vital to the story falls a lot on the DM running it.
Speaking for myself, if I was in there shoes I wouldn't want to be tied down to running a city anyway. You're sitting in the middle of the world wound, surrounded by armies of slavering demons ready to rip your head off and you want a SimCity experience? I like the idea of taking the fight to them on their own lands on our terms and not huddling up in the one little bastion we managed to take.
P Tigras |
I recognize that there is a significant slice of the player audience that will happily delegate command of the expeditionary force of knights to Irabeth in Sword of Valor, because they don't want that responsibility. All they want to do is kill monsters and collect l00t. And they'll have no reason to be disappointed with Demon's Heresy when Irabeth is given command of the city. They're not my group however.
In Kingmaker, which this AP has misguidedly been compared to, rulership was by no means a "desk job". So the precedent of rulers who adventure has already been set, and it's a precedent that is much loved by my players.
This precedent is built upon in the Ultimate Campaign book, which the preceding volume in this series, Sword of Valor, integrates heavily, creating expectations. Demon's Heresy however drops the ball, stripping the players of both command and rulership without giving them anything meaningful in return. And it's that dropping of the ball that is the problem.
Furthermore there is no plan to close the Worldwound presented in DH, not even a search for a way to push it out of the newly reclaimed land. It's just a lot of scouting until you finally are high enough level to free Ash. And rulership is no more petty than looting dead enemies, and quite a bit less morally less questionable. Both provide resources that can be intelligently allocated in the demon war.
P Tigras |
Regarding the background side-quests:
1) Instead of being available to all mythic paths, they're each associated with a different path. So if you want a certain mythic path, the associated background is forced on you.
2) Some players, including my own, prefer to craft their own backgrounds. To those players, canned backgrounds are an unwanted imposition on player freedom to craft their own characters.
I thus doubt that more than half of my players, if that, would choose to integrate elements from the canned backgrounds associated with their mythic path.
Regarding "Huddling Up in Drezen in the middle of the Worldwound":
1) If you think I'm arguing for huddling up in the city, then you really don't understand what Kingmaker was about. There was a lot of both adventuring and domain expansion occurring in Kingmaker.
2) The city is not less safe than the wilds of the Worldwound, or even Mendev itself now that the wardstone wall has fallen. Drezen at least now has the Sword of Valor protecting it thanks to the PC's.
3) The city is not in the middle of the Worldwound, it's pretty close to the Mendev border.
Jim Groves Contributor, RPG Superstar 2010 Top 4 |
In Kingmaker, which this AP has misguidedly been compared to, rulership was by no means a "desk job". So the precedent of rulers who adventure has already been set, and it's a precedent that is much loved by my players.
For the most part, I am going to step back and let James respond to this critique, if he wants to.
However, may I ask where exactly this "Kingmaker" comparison came from which has created an expectation which led to you being disappointed? This is a genuine question, I'm not trying for a "gotchya". I have seen the fan-base community make this comparison, but I have never seen it promoted as such from the "in-house" side of things.
If it has been promoted as such, could you give me a pointer? I promise not quibble about this either way. I'm just honestly curious.
Aleron |
I'm not going to get into some sort of arguing match that takes up pages on this product page. I disagree with you, heavily at that, but you're free to your own opinions and I hope you find a way to adjust that works for you and your group. My own group is really enjoying this adventure path and how it has been done, so to each their own.
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I thought that Irabeth being put in charge over the players was a weird thing also, but it's something that's easily enough remedied by changing to to the queen offering up Irabeth's services as a stand in commander of Drezen when the players are otherwise preoccupied or it's inconvenient for them to run the day to day operations of the city as hero's of the war when they are needed other places.
Still it would have been nice if the it was created that way or at least stated more clearly if that's the way it was supposed to be.
When I get around to running this part I won't have Irabeth making the decisions about the city when the characters are there and it's reasonable for them to do so themselves.