Pathfinder Society Scenario #53: Echoes of the Everwar—Part IV: The Faithless Dead (PFRPG) PDF

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A Pathfinder Society Scenario designed for 7th to 11th level characters (Tiers: 7–8, and 10–11).

The famous concubines of Sothis, recently returned to Osirion by the Pathfinder Society, are stolen from the Pathfinder Lodge in that nation's capital and it's up to you to find them and return them before their combined power can be used to awaken an ancient evil.

The Faithless Dead is the fourth and final scenario in the Echoes of the Everwar campaign arc. Part I is Pathfinder Society Scenario #36: Echoes of the Everwar—Part I: The Prisoner of Skull Hill, part II is Pathfinder Society Scenario #42: Echoes of the Everwar—Part II: The Watcher of Ages, and part III is Pathfinder Society Scenario #44: Echoes of the Everwar—Part III: Terror at Whistledown.

Written by Neil Spicer

This scenario is designed for play in Pathfinder Society Organized Play, but can easily be adapted for use with any world. This scenario is compliant with the Open Game License (OGL) and is suitable for use with the Pathfinder Roleplaying Game.

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Great story, anticlimactic ending.

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(I played this.)

I like the setup of the story. It's clear a lot of thought went into this. It's just too bad there isn't really a payoff to be found here. I really like the story that's present, and how it ties the previous parts together, it's just a shame that the scenario falters in actually telling the story. I think it's a case of early seasons not conveying the story all too clearly. The story starts in medias res and you keep running after the facts without really having any time to explain the situation. Which is a shame, because a lot of time went into the details and making this scenario feel as epic as possible. The setpieces are all there: great environment, cool interactions with NPCs, but there's simply no context given for most of it. A good author could've tied the pieces more neatly together, especially since Part III was almost devoid of context, but right now a cult suddenly came out of nowhere just to be the villain of the week, which could've been so much cooler if it had been foreshadowed at all.

But, as said, I like what's present. Some cool boons in-scenario and a very cool setpiece, it's just a shame the final encounter has absolutely zero payoff. The final encounter could've been more interesting, but it's Season 1, I came to expect slightly underwhelming combats. But, the conclusion is just a "whelp, that happened," without a satisfying resolution. And it's a total shame nothing's come of that final "twist," there's so much interesting stuff that could've been done with it...

Still, I looked back at my other reviews, and I stand by them. They're all decent to good adventures without any great offenders, but it's clear scenario design has come a great way since then. I wish this series was revisited and got a facelift, as there's really a lot of great material here, there just isn't anything done with it.


What the hell happened to the finale?

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Note: I was a player, not the GM.

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Everything is building up, building up, leading to a finale that ties the fate of three souls of long dead women who need you to rescue their faithless souls from purgatory. You have a death cult on your heels. Time is running out!

You struggle down deeper through the tomb, battling off progressively harder and harder foes and bypassing cunning traps. The ghostly souls of the three women manifest and grant you powers for the terrible challenge ahead. You know the final battle is coming, and you pray you have what it takes to succeed. You have traveled the world to return these souls to their homeland, and now an ancient evil has claimed them. The Society has been tricked, and it's up to you to confront the mastermind behind it all!

Then you see an old man turn into dust and the game is over.
WHAT?
WHAT THE HELL?

Four players ask the GM again. "Yep" he says. "The module says that he turns into dust."
"Why?" asks one player, ready and willing to bring out the resources to beat an evil undead back into the afterlife.
"Ah, you beat the leader of the big guys fast enough," the GM answers.
"What the hell has that got to do with anything? Why the hell were they there down here at the bottom of an Osiriani tomb anyway?!?"
"I can't really answer that. But that big leader level 7 dude was the guy. He was the boss."
"Can't we fight a lich now? We're level 11 - we can take it."
"No. Sorry."
"Please?"
"No."
"This sucks."

The finale of Everwar just plain sucks. It requires emergency editing right flipping now. Developers, get onto it!


Ran this at high tier

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I liked the story on this one, I think it would play much better at a lower tier than the high tier.

Since I have only ran this at high teir. I felt it was a bit easy as far as combat. I liked the story and the second map and the Tomb.

If I ever run this at low tier I will update my review.


Anticlimactic Finish

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I've run this a handful of times now, even with Neil overshadowing me, but I just can't like this one. For as well written as this scenario finale is (and it is WELL written), the encounters have never been able to grab the attention of the players no matter how evil my tactics are! ;-)

There are a few bright spots though including an interaction with a gynosphinx and the possibility of setting a Venture Captain on fire.

I think the biggest problem lies in the final encounter. After 12 hours of table time, the players are expecting an amazing final fight with the BBEG of this whole series. That just doesn't happen in practice.

I'll be running this at least 4 more times in November. I'm hoping that my experiences (and the players') improves before the month is through.



Announced! This is for Tier 7-11.

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Periodically, I circle back to this PFS scenario, just to see how it has run at the gaming table and the reactions/commentary it's received. I don't usually make a lot of comments about original turnovers and manuscripts, but a lot of the disappointments voiced with this particular adventure (based on the reviews I've read and some conversations I've had) stem from significant changes made to how I originally wrote the final battle.

First and foremost, here's the challenge I was given:

Spoiler:

The main villain of the Echoes of the Everwar is Khalfani Zuberi, a man who's been cursed to live forever...but not in a hale, hearty young man's body. Instead, he's been cursed to live as an old/venerable man with all the persistent problems the elderly face. The unnatural extension of his lifespan hasn't been pleasant at all. So, he's squirreled himself away in a tomb while he uses his massive fortune to hire mercenaries (or dupe the PCs) into gathering all the things he needs to undo his curse and restore his youth.

Okay. With that as the basic premise, the final showdown with Khalfani isn't particularly compelling if he's still a decrepit, old man. Originally, I wanted to do him as a spellcaster since the ravages of time on the physical body mean very little as long as the mental attributes stay high for an arcane or divine caster. But, the direction I received from my developer indicated he should be a rogue. And therein lay the design challenge. How do you make an old rogue with debilitating age modifiers a challenge for high-level PCs so the grand finale isn't a total letdown?

Here's the approach I used in my original turnover. Khalfani Zuberi had already stolen away all the artifacts (retrieved by the PCs) which he needed to restore his youth. The doors to the final ritual chamber are sealed and guarded by a two-headed ettin (which Zuberi's spirit uses as a magic jar-like receptacle while his actual body is undergoing its youthful transformation. In essence, the PCs get to fight him twice. Once in his ettin form. And again, when the PCs finally bash through the sealed doors.

It's that final encounter that got changed so dramatically from my original turnover. The battle with the possessed ettin was meant to put the PCs on a timer. If they defeated the ettin and entered the final chamber in time to disrupt the ritual, Zuberi remains an old man. To make him a challenge in that situation, I gave him a lot of disposable magic items (scrolls, wands, potions, etc.) and a max'ed out Use Magic Device skill. He even wore a robe of scintillating colors at the high-tier to further screw with those trying to engage him directly. And there was also a cage of sorts and a wide gulf separating him from the PCs when they entered. So, they'd have obstacles to overcome just to close on him. He was also accompanied by a handful of additional guardians (more enlarged living monoliths at low-tier, and actual clay golems at the high-tier). That was going to make the final encounter more dynamic, more challenging, and hopefully, more exciting.

Additionally, I also wrote the final encounter with a entire second set of suppositions. If the timer runs out on the PCs and they fail to reach Zuberi before his ritual is complete, he appears before them as a youthful rogue with none of the hindrances of old age modifiers. This makes him infinitely more dangerous. Not only does he still have access to his stock of magic items (via Use Magic Device), but now, he has much more potent ranged attacks and sneak attacks he can employ against the PCs as they're engaged with his minions.

So, I bring this up to explain that the scenario was always intended to provide a more meaningful (and challenging) resolution to the 4-part Echoes of the Everwar series. Unfortunately, a lot of my original material hit the cutting room floor and I never completely understood why. The approach I took didn't exceed word count in any egregious way. And, as a PDF product, even if the final part of the series ran a little longer (in terms of space), I didn't think that was a bad thing. Perhaps the developer thought it would run too long at the table...or the old vs. young Zuberi would make it too difficult or complex for PFS GMs to run at the table? I simply don't know, but the end result obviously came out as a weaker capstone to an otherwise entertaining series of scenarios. And I certainly never intended for Zuberi to wither away with the PCs never getting a chance to meet him, converse with him, or come to blows with him as he sought to complete his return to power.

Regardless, I do think some of the "easiness" of the adventure overall (in terms of encounter design) are squarely my fault. For one, this was my first PFS scenario...and my only PFS scenario, for that matter. So, I was still learning the differences between writing for the Pathfinder modules and Adventure Paths vs. writing tiered encounters for PFS play. Secondly, I designed the adventure for four PCs using 15-point buy without realizing how many PFS tables run with more than four players and their PCs are designed using a 20-point buy. So, where I wrote something to be moderately challenging, it often came through as too easy for most tables. Were I to write it again, there's no doubt I'd increase the lethality factor by giving the encounters a higher degree of difficulty.


So, why am I sharing all of this information? For a couple of reasons. One, I hope it helps people understand that the adventure's finale was certainly written to be an epic showdown. And, two, for anyone who buys this scenario to run it independently of PFS, maybe this information helps inform their home game so it's a bit more fun to run. If anyone cares to see the original encounters for old vs. young Zuberi (with stat-blocks), I can also post those here in another spoiler, provided Paizo has no reservations about me doing so.

My two cents,
--Neil

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