This semi-demi-quasi-celebrity status as "the PSA guy" is both a good thing and a bad thing: on the one hand, this contest allows me to prove to people - well, to myself and to my mom, if to no one else - that my writing ability extends beyond the range of "dick jokes, but with dwarves".
The dwarven dick jokes will still be my favorites, Boom.
I agree with the accounts before that this is by far the easiest to read Boomer entry, which makes me happy. A couple of the earlier entries drove me to near madness trying to absorb what's going on through all of the text. This one has good balance of descriptiveness, Boomer flavor, and being reader-friendly with text.
Rock out with thine socks out Boomer....I can only fear.....er....imagine.....the twisted villain that will spring from that mind of yours. Excellent work with the world. I'm a big fan of the darkness of the whole setting as I envision it. That and rakshasa make excellent antagonists.
I signed up specifically to congratulate and wish you luck, chief. Your alteregos at DnDOG are pulling for you! Excellent piece of work with the crown, and I fear....er......look forward to what you put together next!